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All word and pixel /tg/-related lewdness is welcome here, so long as the rules are followed. Writefags, consider pastebin/1d4chan rather than dumping for long stories. Drawfags with uncensored pictures need to host their images offsite and link to them. For those of you visiting from other boards, err on the side of censorbars and spoilers if you're hesitant.

The writefags especially appreciate it when you give them meaningful feedback and criticism, so make sure to do so. It's easy and the writefags will love you for it.

In any case, enjoy! Remember to play nice and that all contributions and requests are welcome!

>> No.30859652

>>30859601
DISCLAIMER: While these threads are quite tolerant of many different forms of /d/eviancy, you can't just assume that everyone will automatically share your kinks. There's nothing explicitly preventing you from talking about your fetishes, but if someone has one that you dislike, please do not derail the thread with a flamewar- there's plenty of smut for everybody here.

Master smut list:
http://pastebin.com/JbeDnCAP
(/a/'s monstergirl fic collection is in here too.)

A guide to constructive criticism, because "Your writing sucks" doesn't help anyone get better

http://pastebin.com/1s1fLktL

>> No.30859874

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mljLmijW6aw

>> No.30859955

>>30859874
Fitting

>> No.30860179

>>30859601
Whats up with the smut threads this weekend. They seem really slow. Other than raeg I mean.

>> No.30860209

>>30860179

They've been slow for a while. I'm trying to finish this thing so I can post it already, it's my best work but damn is it a doozy.

>> No.30860241

>>30860179
I think they do okay. But smut and art naturally take longer.

Also these smut threads last till like monday night most days.

>> No.30860280

>>30860179
Can't say. Bad luck, writefags having to deal with RL shit, and so forth. On the bright aide, we've learned a lot on how to perform constructive criticism (which 4chan persistently confuses with simple insults and ad hominems).

>> No.30860300

>>30860241
They always do that. Sometimes it stretches all the way into Tuesday.

>> No.30860381

Shamelessly reposting my stuff from the last thread. Eager for thoughts, critique, and to increase my pastebin views. Its my fetish.

A Lie of Pity (Vamp Male/Vamp Female)
http://pastebin.com/Z48Vhv53

Old Stuff:

Exhibition (Female/Minotaur)
http://pastebin.com/HiPgeBpf

For the Right Price (Female/Tentacles)
http://pastebin.com/zvstJaDc

>> No.30860785

>>30860300
>smutthreads take up 5 out of 7 days.
>weekend only
Heh oh /tg/

>> No.30860834

>>30860785

Start late at night on Friday, are generally dead by Monday. Not seeing an issue.

>> No.30860968

>>30860381
like Exhibition, barbarous brutes on dames is my fetish

making her spew cum out of her mouth was little over the top, still hot

having the gladiator commenting on, but not being part of the smut was nice, would like to see more of her as a dispassionate/professional commentator

>> No.30861010

Soorry guys its too late for me to update The Stray. Maybe I'll break convention and try to write tomorrow, but don't hold your breath

>> No.30861042
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30861042

Can we get lewd pics of best primarch's daughter?

>> No.30861148

>>30861042
Lets not start this back up.

>> No.30861258

>>30861042
Lewd already gave you Rule 63 Lorgar being gangbanged by daemons, so no. Don't be ungrateful. Also,

>robot girlyman
>being best at anything other than being a stuffed shirt

>> No.30861323
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30861323

>>30861258
That isn't Rowboat dude
That's Fulgrims kid, still I should be more patience I'll try next week

>> No.30861342

mmm

>> No.30861350

>>30861342

I agree.

>> No.30861357

LCB NTR?

>> No.30861365

>>30861323
I approve of these notions. If there was as much smut as there was rage over Warhammer High, we would be drowning in it.

>> No.30861369

>>30861342
redo

>> No.30861390

>>30861369

That is not how those things work.

>> No.30861428

Anybody ever try branching out and writing other things after QMing for a while? And actually have it work out?

>> No.30861596
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30861596

>>30861428
>QMing
wot

>> No.30861726

>>30861357
Approximately never. Please do us all a favor and drown in a sea of dicks. I mean, we have standards for fuck's sake.

>> No.30861779

>>30861365
WHH does have smut over at 1d4chan. Stuff is just old so it vanishes like Love and Krieg and Fucklaw has

>> No.30861784

>>30861726
There's been some fucked up shit on /tg/. And I feel Taldeer's greatly underutilized. Just Macha, the vindicare and...Anything else? I want her prim and proper milfness put to better use.

It doesn't necessarily have to go full NTR with "Oh you're so much better than the pathetic man just watching" or whatever. Just...Her experimenting.

>> No.30861822

>>30861726
>we have standards
not while orks pissing in each other's asses is on the books, friend.

>> No.30861829

>>30861822
Still better than NTR

>> No.30861917

>>30861829
This isn't /a/. Some people are into this. We can be mature here.

>> No.30861926
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30861926

>>30861726

I've always been amused by how upset neckbeards get over NTR. Something related to their inherent insecurities and jealousy, yeah?

>> No.30861954

Was the mermaid smut finished by mask ? I forgot to check the first thread before it died

>> No.30862009

>>30861926

I've always been able to fap to it because I insert into the woman.

>> No.30862047

>>30861784
Taldeer has some smut about her, more then before.

>> No.30862052

>>30861917
>>30861926
It's more along the lines of "having empathy". Trude's the only one who writes that kind of thing and even then it was only excusable due to technicalities within the stories themselves. Who else wants to give it a shot?

I for one was pushing for a fic regarding Lofn's conception- I mean, Taldeer's a Farseer, but immaculate conception is not a psychic power last I checked. IIRC Edinbro had it on his backlog but it mag be a while before he gets to it.

>> No.30862057

>>30861926
"upset" is a strong word. I think "disappointed" fits better.

Reading a nice vanilla doujin that suddenly goes NTR isn't "RAAAGH RAGE" so much as it is "oh... darn, I was enjoying that"

I say this as a true neckbeard

>> No.30862070

>>30861926

> Implying it's not natural for someone to be upset when a loved one cheats on them.

I mean, sure, it's porn, it's a fantasy, competition increases arousal, but the concept tends to be an emotional one.

>> No.30862166

I forgot what I was supposed to do

>> No.30862190

>>30862166
Draw porn?

>> No.30862209

>>30862190
but of what ?

Any funny request out thar ?

>> No.30862254

>>30862166
In the previous thread, you said you were planning on working on that picture of the Sisters being fucked by the Eldar, IIRC.

>> No.30862264

>>30862209
Taldeer NTRing Livii.

The tears will be wonderful.

>> No.30862269

>>30862209

Tyranids. Think of the most unintentionally funny porn scene you've eve seen, and reproduce it with Tyranids.

>> No.30862296

>>30862254
That's what I forgot !
Thanks

>>30862269
What in the dicks is NTR

>> No.30862316

>>30862209
Lesbian sex with an orc and a human

The orc has a paper bag over her head

>> No.30862318

>>30862209
Eerrrr, damn it I got nothing really. Nothing particularly smutty at least since you drew that picture related the the XCom story and I've been busy this weekend with working on a Magical Girl for a future campaign.
A Draenei or even a Tiefling MILF in sexy lingerie maybe?
But that's not particularly funny.

Or just do what >>30862254 or >>30862269 said.

>> No.30862342

>>30862296
Netorate aka Cuckolding aka cheating.
Hell if I know why it has suddenly become so incredibly popular amongst doujin artists and storywriters.

>> No.30862369
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30862369

>>30862166
Was it the funstikk drawing?

>> No.30862370

>>30862342

It's always been popular in one form or another, hell, a lot of great literature has been written on the subject (Count of Monte Cristo comes to mind).

>> No.30862407

>>30862370
I guess, just seemed to notice a sudden upswing in NTR doujins lately whenever I find myself browsing my usual sites for that kind of thing.

>> No.30862432

>>30862209
Conga line of SoBs servicing The Emprah. Left hand side has them waiting in a line, middle has one riding him and right hand side has one wobbling off.

>> No.30862448

>>30862316
>>30862269
>>30862264
You guys have a special definition of funny

Then again, my notion of fun consists at throwing two Eversors assassins at my party and laugh at them shitting their pants.

>>30862432
Now THAT, is getting on the list

>> No.30862460

>>30862342
Because the Japanese enjoy being humiliated and betrayed by people they love and trust. Faggots.

>> No.30862525

>>30862448
Why stop there? Make it two halo artifact evesors to make them really scream in utter terror.

>> No.30862548
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30862548

I think I overdid the details...

>> No.30862549

>>30862448
Tech-Priest /Servo Skull handing out icepacks to those finished

>> No.30862597

>>30862432
Turns out after all these millenia they were sacrificing the wrong thing to the Emperor to keep everything going.

>> No.30862656

>>30862548

They are some pretty sweet details though.

>> No.30862762

>>30862009
You know what else I insert into the woman?
my crippling sense of low self-worth

>> No.30862764

>>30862548
probably, but I don't think you'll be getting complaints about it.

Are you open to more requests this weekend?

>> No.30862779

>>30862548
There's no such thing as too much detail.
Unless it distorts the image or makes it looks lesser.

You gave it the right amount.

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>>30862548

>> No.30862867

>>30862548
That's actually pretty dam good

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30862993

>>30862764
I might have a couple of free hours tomorrow.

>> No.30863051

>>30862993
How do you feel about cuckolding?

>> No.30863106

>>30863051
Go away

>> No.30863128

>>30862993
My funstikk request from last thread and >>30862369 is open to everyone, by the way.
>I would love to see Da Funstikk getting put to use on some poor, unsuspecting yet uncontrollably aroused broad. Maybe a techpriestess or Earth Caste tau.
Seriously, that thing is a goddamn sexual WMD.

>> No.30863158

>>30861357
You're the same guy who was bitching about LCB in the quest thread general, aren't you?

>> No.30863173

>>30862548
...Nope!

>> No.30863430

>>30863158
...why THERE? Are they suddenly short of things to bitvh about on a daily basis?

>> No.30863504

>>30863430
Not even. I think this is just some guy with an axe to grind against LCB and will bring it up in any thread he thinks he can get away with it. He posted in some random metathread too about how LCB singlehandedly lead to "the decline of /tg/" and was apparently responsible for everything from flare to quest threads to ERP general.

>> No.30863542

>>30863504
No that's the Bolsheviks fault.

Dirty slimebags that they are

>> No.30863562

>>30863504
I'm a bit out the loop, but does LCB stand for something? I feel like I should know it, but can't recall anything.

>> No.30863594

>>30863562

Its a safe bet it does indeed stand for something. I'd assume it stands for Love Can Bloom, some writefaggotry by fags for fags.

>> No.30863603

>>30863562
Love Can Bloom

Some story about Taldeer and a Vindicare Assassin or whatever.

Didn't read it, all I know is that people are getting mad over it because they're unimaginative fucks with a spectrum of fun so small, you're kinda wondering if they're not the offspring of Margaret Thatcher

>> No.30863624

>>30863562
Love Can Bloom, a fic about a DoW2 farseer and an imperial assassin falling in love after the assassin is asked to kill her. It is famous for its' skub quotient because the assassin breaks his conditioning and the eldar accept their marriage, but it's a sort of reasonable read. Some parts of /tg/ think the pairing is adorable. Many follow-up fanfics, pieces of fanart and a small fan continuity have sprung up around it.

>> No.30863639

>>30863504
But its been what- six years now? You would think people have learned to let things go after that much time. Apparently not.

>>30863594
I take it you are the person in question. Look, Miko was pushed off the board a while back and the anonymous writefag who made it vanished without a trace years ago- isn't it time you let it be?

>> No.30863662

>>30863639

>I take it you are the person in question.

You take it wrong. I don't really give a shit, just think its a stupid piece of writing.

>> No.30863674

>>30863639
But they hate it so good, anon. Let them hate it more then 'fans' can possibly care about it. This way, it'll continue to be a thing, and thus more people will know about an average to alright story.

>> No.30863686

>>30863594
>>30863603
>>30863624
Oh, I remember that. Fun little story. Fuck, that story/quest was made fucking years ago.

>> No.30863699

>>30863624
For convoluted reasons, its also where the "Macha never gets any" thing started, so there's that too.

It has historical merit if nothing else, seeing that most of us wouldn't be here without it.

>> No.30863725

>>30863662
Explain to us again why we should care about your opinion.

>> No.30863741

LCB is a level of writefaggotry current /tg/ can only dream to achieve.

>> No.30863750

>>30863699
Speaking of historical, it's nice to see Weaver still post on /tg/ every now and again. RubyQuest was fun and I like some of his little doodles that he does on his tumblr when it's not pony stuff.

>> No.30863758

>>30863725

Jesus, did you write the thing or something? You're getting really bent out of shape over a minor dig at something you like but that many people dislike.

>> No.30863764

Oh great another incoming flamewar.

You know what, let's just drop this now.
Good night everyone

>> No.30863782

>>30863764

I think we just need to never talk about anything that isn't specifically porn.

>> No.30863851

>>30863764
Oh, NOW look what you've done. Your silly grudge is driving off the content creators. Now post lewd or GTFO.

>>30863782
Not out fault morons keep trying to start shit here. Anyway, what is everyone working on here? Things have been unusually slow lately.

>> No.30863877

>>30863758
Dislike is a mild term for bringing up something that's been gone for six friggin' years.

>> No.30863878

>>30863750
He came here once. The shitstorm was truly horrifying in scope.

>> No.30863898

>>30863877

I didn't bring it up though. Someone asked what it was, and I said it was a mediocre fanfic. Now can you stop bitching about peoples opinions so we can discuss porn?

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30863908

>>30863851
SH here. Trying to work on R-PSY.
Perhaps I should stick to the shock fic.

>> No.30863917

>>30863851

>Not out fault morons keep trying to start shit here.

Actually it is. This shit isn't one sided.

>> No.30863936

>>30863878

In our defense, he is kind of a fag.

>> No.30863962

>>30863936
That can be said about everyone on 4chan.

>> No.30863985

>>30863962

Which is why we bitch about everyone constantly.

>> No.30864013

>>30863962
Yeah, but he's a fag that made his own little furry fag nest. He's become a stranger to these lands.

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30864022

>>30863908
Yeah, I've just taken a look at my notes for R-Psy and it's doing nothing for me. I'm going to mothball it, with apologies to those who were looking forward to another installment sometime soon, and take a shock prompt.

> What do you never ever want to see written?

>> No.30864027

>>30863936
>>30863962
>>30863985

I stopped sucking dicks for cash in 1982 boy


On a srs note, I gotta bail soon because I gotta work tommorow. I'll post a progress of the sisters getting re-lined

>> No.30864069

>>30864013
You act like /tg/ isn't full of anthro stuff.

>> No.30864100

>>30863851
Just trying to figure out what I want to write about next. I usually let the other writefags do the requests because I'm not comfortable enough with the typical 40k subject matter to write about. If the writing sucks I'll definitely take that bullet. But the last thing I want is to get reamed because I didn't portray someone's waifu correctly.

>> No.30864125

>>30864069
It's in remission.

>> No.30864167

>>30864100
You know there is other stuff /tg/ related than 40k, right? Hell, just use generic fantasy or sci-fi races/themes and it will count has /tg/. If all else fails just write about xenophilia, /tg/ has always loved that theme.

>> No.30864230

>>30864167
Oh most definitely! It just seems that a majority of requests happen to be 40k related. But that is okay. People are welcome to like what they like! I'll keep writing regardless of how widespread the subject matter of my short stories are.

>> No.30864294

>>30864022
Surprise us.

>> No.30864322

>>30864230
You don't always have to do requests. You can write stuff for own amusement that's /tg/ related and post it here. The odds that someone else here will like are pretty good. Unless it's hand-holding you sick bastard.

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30864356

>>30864027
Newer version
http://i.imgur.com/pRsNEQb.jpg

Compared to older.
http://i.imgur.com/vHvI4cV.jpg

Those of you that asked this, yay or nay ? I overwrote the layer anyway, so it's going to be that anyway.

>> No.30864371

Hey guys, finished chapter one of Oil and Promethium (finally!), and technically there isn't any true smut in it. Well, if you define smut as hardcore sex scenes, that is.

Oil and Promethium, Chapter One

http://pastebin.com/pgMSb0ui

Synopsis: A Sister of Battle with a streak of deviancy masturbates to a prodigal novice during her morning training. Not long afterwards, she gives the novice a 'medical checkup' and tests the waters, so to speak. Finally, the meat of the story begins with the Sister leading the novice through a harrowing trial with a naughty daemonette teasing the sister while the novice looks on in shock and then has her first orgasm with the Sister's help. More to come.

In case anyone wants to look at the other two stories I've started:

http://pastebin.com/u/ChaosBeetle

I recommend Minerva's Frustration if you want a long-term, paced smutfic with a lot of anticipation and build-up.

>> No.30864380

>>30864356

Honestly here old expression was more expressive.

>> No.30864383

>>30861954
No, unfortunately.

Does anyone know if it's going to be a lobster mermaid? I liked that idea.

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>>30864371

Shoot, forgot my picture...

>> No.30864397

>>30864356
I like the new one more. Good stuff.

>> No.30864410

>>30864100
I request a story with a champion female halfling boxer (part of a halfling boxing league) having sweet, passionate love with her tall-person lover/coach/medic. Foreplay would be him patching up her injuries after a tough bout. Perhaps he has some magical ability that lets him help?

>> No.30864466

>>30864383
Actually, I think he decided to make it an oarfish mermaid instead.

>> No.30864475

>>30864356

The new lines look much better, but the old expression is superior.

>> No.30864498

>>30864410

He needs to have a lot of petroleum jelly.

So that skin doesn't tear.

>> No.30864539

>>30864410
Sounds interesting. I'll go ahead and give it a shot. I'll be heading to bed now, but I'll tackle it when I get up and hopefully knock it out before the day is out.

>> No.30864600

>>30864475
>>30864380

I didn't even actively try to change it, I guess I just erased a little too much and didn't redo it right.

http://i.imgur.com/6WVP4LB.jpg

Tried to fix it, but then again w/e.

See yall later today because I just realized we are tommorow

>> No.30864625

>>30861954
It's going to be an oarfish mermaid because the guy said he didn't prefer lobster
also I ate lobster today so, I dunno if I could have written that.

I've got it in my head and I know what will happen when I write it but I can't promise it will be done this weekend. I'm more in a mood for drawing lately unfortunately. Things fluctuate for me. But next week I plan to have mermaid stuff and another H&A done.

I'm also planning a campaign at the same time so things are piling up.

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30864630

>>30864410
>part of a halfling boxing league
No, she should be part of a normal boxing league. After taking down reigning orcish boxing champ Mork Tyson, Little Ni is having sweet, passionate love with her tall-person lover/coach/medic.

>> No.30864680

>>30864630
>Little Ni is having sweet, passionate love with her tall-person lover/coach/medic.
And for extra romance, the coach steals her first bike
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wd63P7mYXzo

>> No.30864691

>>30864630
Seems like all of us are getting distracted from writing by RL stuff. I guess it's just that time of year, huh?

>> No.30864724

>>30864630
That works too. Even better, maybe.

>> No.30865024

>>30864625
Can we get some drawings in the thread then? After all word AND pixel /tg/-related lewdness are allowed here.

>> No.30865096

>>30865024
my hands draw whatever they want but if I get any relevant stuff it will be posted like last week

>> No.30865299

>>30865096
Alright, well that sounds fair.

>> No.30865417

>>30861926

What the fuck does NTR stand for? I keep seeing it mentioned here, there, and everywhere, but I have no idea what it is aside from "Some particularly disgusting sex thing" and that it probably crawled over from Japan.

>> No.30865442

>>30865417
>>30862342

>> No.30865446

>>30865417
Read the thread.

>> No.30865506

Cyr, if you're here, I just finished reading "A Lie of Pity."

As with your story "For the Right Price," I found the atmosphere you build with the main characters' inner monologue to be great. It's not quite first person, but still gives them a great deal of personality while expanding the world at the same time. The eroticism works well, too. You build up tension in a way that's very effective, in these two stories using danger and mystery.
I found the impersonal violation in "For the Right Price" to be quite enjoyable. I was a bit disappointed in "A Lie..." for the obvious reason of its lack of actual sex. Still, it certainly got me in the mood to, um, finish up using a different story. As gateway smut, it works.

There were a few issues with missing commas, though:
>Before Brett could lift his drink to his lips he was approached by a...
drink to his lips, he was
>After the two security guards were satisfied with Brett's lack of weaponry they finally
lack of weaponry, they finally
>As he stepped through the threshold he found that it overlooked
through the threshold, he found
You know, minor issues.

I was also left wondering what happened to the glass of blood...

All in all a great job, quite enjoyable. Might I suggest you try writing a story in the first person? Your style of writing seems like it would benefit from that perspective. At times you seem to be leaning towards that already.

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>>30865024
I'm fooling around with this.

>> No.30865612

>>30865569
Might wanna delete that and post an imagur link instead. Uncensored porn is still a bannable offense.

>> No.30865650

>>30864625
looking forward to the mermaid story, if the fisherman or sailor has a Glaswegian or cockney accent I'll sacrifice an Englishmen to St. Patty in yalls honor

loved chapter 11 of H&A, had a nice lazy morning hatefuck vibe to it.

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>>30865612
My mistake.

>> No.30865715

>>30864600

I don't know, somehow the face just doesn't look expressive.

>> No.30865755

>>30865024
http://anonmgur.com/up/52b6b1fa4763b3f98fbeabc217eb3b19.png
Tonight was a Little God night.
Sometimes I wish I'd given him some sort of face or mode of expression but ehh I dunno.

>>30865650
Those accents would require research on my part. The only non-American english accents I'm very familiar with are Liverpudlian accents from Red Dwarf reruns and Sunderland accents because I had a biochem professor from around there.

And if I wrote it I wouldn't write out pronunciations unless it was an entirely different word within the local lexicon. Or that thing with the collective nouns that British English has where they can be singular OR formal, I'd do my best to do that part when I wrote it.

>> No.30865790

>>30865755
Excellent, mi amigo. Much appreciated.

>> No.30865802

>>30865755
God Emperor bless you

>> No.30865842

>>30864371
That is...pretty damn hot. Some reason I thoough the novice should squirt a bit more but oh well. Keep up the good smut

>> No.30865865

I'm thinking of writing some smut.

Namely pov stuff about fucking Space Marines like Calgar, or Tigurius, with the first one having you fuck Calgar in reverse cowgirl while talking about taking your dick up in the ass.

What does /tg/ think?

>> No.30865886
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30865886

It's finally done. I can now post in this thread without shame.

>http://pastebin.com/ifXxP9EL
Lythra's Surprise

Tags: dragon, trap, cuddling

>> No.30865894

>>30865865
To me, second person perspective doesn't work well for smut. I mean, it CAN work, but it's incredibly difficult to pull off. I'd suggest writing one at a time and getting feedback so the subsequent bits can be a bit more polished.
That is, unless you're just trolling, which seems a bit likely considering the subject matter you propose. No offense intended, of course.

>> No.30865911 [DELETED] 

>>30865865
/tg/ - pornography

>> No.30865915

>>30865886
Oh, but how I have eagerly waited. Be right back with feedfback, good sir.
And that image is fucking awesome

>> No.30865938

>>30865894
I'm dead serious. How would you suggest I write it?

Of course, I was thinking of also doing Chaos Space Marines.

I mean, who wouldn't want to fuck Kharne? Or have S&M with Asmodai?

>> No.30865945

>>30865865
I'd say you should steer clear of second person. It just doesn't work for things that are as emotional as this.

>> No.30865956

>>30865915
Mask drew it and has been eagerly awaiting my return so that I could post it.

>> No.30866001

>>30865865
I don't have a problem with space marines fucking, I dont have a problem with homosexual space marines, its just I dont buy any space marine being a bottom, unless it was to another higher ranking space marine.

hot, sweaty, oiled up rasslin between two novices (or a initiate and a older battle brother) with the build of those classical Greek statues would be allright

>> No.30866017 [DELETED] 

>>30866001
traditional games

>> No.30866019

>>30866001
They can constantly fight each other to be top.

>> No.30866044

>>30865956
I'd just like to take a second to apologize for being such an asshole to you last time you were here. I have always found your work to be very enjoyable, yet went off on the one aspect of it that didn't suit my fancy perfectly as though it made the story objectively bad, or something.
I was rude, insensitive, and insulting and for that I am truly sorry.

Thank you very, very much for coming back to us despite that completely undeserved negative experience.

btw, I'm at .62 of the current story and I'm enjoying it immensely. The way you describe Lythra's understanding of what a virgin is hilarious and your invention of the lottery to decide upon the sacrifice was an excellent touch.

>> No.30866048

>>30866019
I can masturbate to this without shame or guilt

>> No.30866050

>>30866001
I'm sorry, but what I had planned was Calgar forcing you down, taking your pecker, and impaling himself on it then moving onto him blusing while you both do some handholding and kissing while you jizz in him all the while Tigurius looks at you guys in envy.

The reason all behind this is Slaanesh finally gaining enough influence and making everyone hungry for the D.

In this case, the reader. And thus I'll work on shorts with stuff like having angry sex with Kharne after he treats you on a date or getting raped by a yandere Tigurius.

>> No.30866140

>>30866050
>Slannash's doing

"but inquisitor Slannash made me do it"

Kay, I can masturbate to this to. my dick aint picky

>> No.30866166

>>30866140
Anon, how did you know I was planning on including the Grey Knights?

>Cleanse me with your burning hot semen mortal! More! More!!!

>> No.30866250
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>>30866050

>> No.30866304

>>30866250
Something like that.

Only now you have all the guys in the 40k universe wanting your D.

From Abaddon to Eldrad.

>Ufufufu. Prepare yourself mon keigh, for you shall enter in states of pleasure unknown to your pathetic race.

Space Marines being bara, and Eldar being bishie.

>> No.30866380

>>30866304
This idea becomes funnier when you realize that also means orkz and nids are after you too.
>"Show me your squig andz I will showz you mine."
>clicks and chatters erotically
>Hive Tyrant lounging on a biomass bed with roses on him and leading to the "bed"
>rippers singing Barry White songs, but in nid dialect

>> No.30866402

>>30865886
>>30865915
>>30865956
I'm going to try out the new criticism guideline, if you don't mind.

>I personally LIKE this story because:
The atmosphere and their relationship build up naturally and believably. The characters are well fleshed out and I liked the way they interacted. They have great chemistry together.
>The objectively good things about this story are:
Interesting plot, believable relationship, just enough tension to keep the reader invested, and a steady shift into the smut that makes sense in context with the story. I also found the prose to be very fitting. Being in both characters' heads can be difficult to pull off, but you do just enough of it to keep the story moving at a nice pace without being heavy handed.
>The objective problems with this story are:
A few minor typos: at 160. you need a quotation mark after --really tasty--- and a question mark instead of a period at the end of the sentence. At 140. (time skip), you slip into using "her" to refer to Shannon once or twice.
Also, a few times you use a comma instead of a period when ending a bit of dialogue. Usually this is a style choice, but once or twice it was actually an error.
Minor things, really.
>The characters of this story are GOOD because:
Lythra's dominant roll yet inexperienced nature was endearing and cute while Shannon was actually rather relate-able. Their personalities bounce off each other well and their chemistry is spot on.

part 2 inbound

>> No.30866424

>>30866380
Imagine Necrons.

>Trazyn steals you
> Spends most of the time using various sex toys from different eras on you

>Now, let us see how you will stand up to this splendidly master crafted Eldar fleshlight, and if you survive that, I'll give you a hand job with Abaddon's hands

>> No.30866426

>>30866402
>The plot of this story is GOOD because:
The request was for a somewhat original twist on an old formula, but you managed to make it your own very well (lottery, black dragon, trap is a minor mage, which cleverly avoided potential plot holes. It's odd enough to be intriguing, but believable (in the context of the world you build) that it makes sense.
>The sex scenes in this story are good/bad because:
Good: excellent foreplay and innocent beginnings. It also went down in a very reasonable way considering the power play between the two characters.
Bad: too short! I want to see more of these two in a sequel! So, not really "bad" then
>I would like to see more/less of:
More sex, but only in the form of a sequel. This story stands very well on its own.
>I like/dislike the author's writing style because:
The story flows well and doesn't waste time. Everything in the story has a reason to be there.
You do seem to be a bit overly fond of ending dialogue with a period and having a stand alone sentence explain the character's mode of speech. While not grammatically incorrect, I believe the flow might be better with a few more commas in those spots.
>I would personally rate the story, from 1 (unreadable) to 5 (incredible):
4.5
Will certainly be reading again.


If you do a sequel, perhaps you could have Lythra get a letter from her cousin, Jarun, that makes her realize what she can do with Shannon?

>> No.30866448

>>30866380
>>30866424
oh fuck I shouldnt be liking this as much as I am

>> No.30866466

>>30866424
>and if you survive that, I'll give you a hand job with Abaddon's hands
10/10, top portrayal of trazyn

>> No.30866492

>>30866448
I don't like gay smut, but I want to read this because of how funny it all sounds.

>> No.30866513

>>30866492
I guess I can do each one as a one shot. Some will be funny, others will be more serious.

Well, night /tg/. But first, I gotta take care of this boner....

>> No.30866515

>>30864069
Giant Shark girls!

>>30865886
Good dog!

>>30866166
DRAIGO!!!

>> No.30866598

How long has it been since Beginner was in one of these threads?

>> No.30866601

>>30865886
If someone told me a few months ago that I would be fapping away happily to a female dragon giving a blowjob to a human trap, I would have laughed in their face.
That is what these threads have done to me.
This is what YOU have done to me.
Thank you

>> No.30866626

>>30866598
Last weekend someone claiming to know him irl said he'd dealing with family issues and won't be around for at least a month, but will be coming back when he can.
So, at least three weeks more without him, sadly.

>> No.30866650
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>>30866601
/tg/'s specialty is giving people very stupidly specific fetishes. Like the odd fetish this little number gave me.

>> No.30866685

>>30866044
Don't be so hard on yourself, I'm a sensitive little bitch. Your critiques were not out of line in the slightest. I know you're just trying to help and I just took one of the things you had said a little too harshly.

>>30866402
>>30866426
1. Damn it. Through out the entire writing of the story I kept catching myself write "her" when responding to Shannon because I know that transgenders prefer to be referred to by their true gender and while Shannon isn't really a transgender he's close enough to it and so my mind called him "her" a lot. I was afraid I might have missed a her.

2. I'll look into the comma things during dialogue.

3. Sequel. We'll see how that plans out. When I revisit these characters I'll be sure to add more sex. However, her cousin were not be Jarun because she's a chromatic dragon and he's a metallic dragon. One is born of Bahamut and the other of Tiamat. They can't be related.

>> No.30866708

>>30866380
>clicks and chatters erotically

>> No.30866809

So, I want to write one of my quick stories.

Currently all I have that I want to write about is a princess turned queen who becomes complacent once she assumes the throne and begins to put on weight. She's extremely bored with her new role as leader of the kingdom.

You may remember her from some of my other stories.
How can I make this smut?

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>>30866650
muh god, its beautiful

>> No.30866854

>>30866809
Her king/consort/prince, who has been harsh, distant, and uninterested up until now, turns out to be a rabid chubby chaser. He warms up to her as she gets plumper, until she's a bona fide fatty and they're spending half their waking hours screwing.

>> No.30866910

>>30866809
Are you into /ss/?
If so, you could have her order a promising young squire to "prove himself" to her before she knights him.
Or you could have her done a peasant disguise and peddle herself on the street as a common whore for a night.
Or maybe she now gets off on exhibitionism. She has one of her handmaidens (or a boy servant) eat her out while she's behind her desk and holding audience with important dignitaries.
Perhaps she's on her way to her winter palace and stops by a hot spring to freshen up and, while naked and not in her queenly garb, gets hit on by some of the local boys and decides to take them for a spin.

>>30866685
1. I thought that might be the issue with the he/she thing. If for no other reason that it keeps things clear, I suggest just sticking with "he." Too many "she's" and it might get difficult to follow.

2. The comma thing is a personal preference. Take it with a grain of salt. Don't change your style for my sake.

3. This just goes to show how little I know about DnD.
Though, it does offer another possibility. Perhaps she used to crush on Jarun, and once she learns he's into HIS human, she decides to do the same with HER human, partially to get even but mostly because she realizes what a nice idea it is

>> No.30866968

>>30866910
I like those ideas. I'm still kind of unsure what I plan to do. I may just end up writing something entirely different.

I do plan to crank out one more of my quick stories before the weekend is done.

>> No.30866984

>>30866809
>>30866854
Either this or she begins to acquire a harem of handmaidens who are more than willing to help expand their queen's "boarders" and let her indulge in her new found hedonism!

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>>30866984
>harem of handmaidens who are more than willing to help expand their queen's "boarders"

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30867200

>browsing an art thread
>someone mentions smut threads are cancer and heresy thats killing /tg/
>mfw

Been coming here ever since.

>> No.30867234

>>30862548
No, no, you didn't! The expression on Nurgle's face is priceless!

Any chance of you uploading an uncensored version somewhere?

>> No.30867288

>>30866910
>Or maybe she now gets off on exhibitionism. She has one of her handmaidens (or a boy servant) eat her out while she's behind her desk and holding audience with important dignitaries.
This sounds fantastic. Mixed with /ss/ it could lead to the serving boy crouched under dress during ceremonies, or taking her from behind while she stands on the parapets of the keep. A castle is so big and so populated, there's any number of little secret spaces that could be walked in on at any second.

> fun with cooking oil in the larder
> doing it over the open murder-holes of the front gate
> cutting a hole in the bottom of her majesty's throne
> seeing how quickly they can finish before the next guard patrol comes by in a few minutes
> blaming the screams of pleasure on a ghost that stalks the corridors

>> No.30867809
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30867809

Looking for someone to draw two of this suit, with boobs, making out with each other, helmets on.

Would really cheer up my week.

>> No.30867814

>>30867288
>not blaming the screams of pleasure on a goat that stalks the corridors looking for tin cans
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UlVCIptQj2k

>> No.30868657

>>30867079
Yes, they wait on her every whim, delighted that their mistress use them to indulge ever decadence she can think of...
Perhaps they just want to see their Queen happy, or perhaps they are relishing in how her belly continues to grow larger and softer...

>> No.30869065

I was in the last thread, but had to leave shortly after we hit 300 posts. Did Lewd post anything?

>> No.30869120

>>30869065
Check Foolz. That's just the kind of thing it's there for.

>> No.30869153

>>30869120
Thanks for the suggestion. Unfortunately he didn't post what I was looking for, but I realize he is a busy man.

>> No.30869368

>>30867200
You know what they say- no such thing as bad publicity.

>> No.30869516

>>30868657
Bonus points if the king eventually starts adding horny bisexual maids into their bedroom rotation.

>> No.30869692

>>30869516
horny bisexual maids make everything better

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>12 hours later
>1 post on my story

Damn it smut threads I'm doing this for you, you know.

>> No.30869738

>>30865842

Noted and rectified, I actually forgot to mention it in the final paragraphs.

>> No.30869777

>>30869726
I would, but the subject matter doesn't interest me that much.

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>>30869777

I guess that means the synopsis helped. Do you prefer that to a tag list?

>> No.30869933

>>30869880
Personally, I think having both would be even more effective. That way people can see if the subject interests them as well as being alerted to any fetishes that might turn them on or off.

Thanks for that criticism template, BTW. It seems to be having a good effect already.

>> No.30870159
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30870159

>>30869933

No, it was my pleasure to create it. It's basic stuff, anyone could have done it.

I see your point about the tag list. I'll try to use both from now on.

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30870328

>>30865506
I'm glad you enjoyed my stuff and I appreciate the critique! You are correct about the comma usage. It is one of those things I find myself wrestling with more often than not, but I'll keep working on it! I should take a grammar class as a primer or something. I'll also try experimenting with first person in the future. I'm still trying to pin down a style that works for me so I'm doing a little bit of everything! Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

>> No.30870490

>>30869880
I'd prefer both, but yeah, I'd rather have a synopsis and no tags over tags and no synopsis.

Not for the full list though, that's too long for synopsis'. Better to stick with tags for the master smut

>> No.30870613

>>30869726
Sorry C.B. too busy fapping.

>> No.30870658
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30870658

>read a story
>want some more
>click on posters name
>"anon has no public pastes"

My dick demands more you pricks!

>> No.30870802

>>30870658
Use the list. Many of them are unlisted for one reason or another.

>> No.30870862

>>30870802
problem is I've burned through the list, its why I come here every weekend. If only pastebins search engine wasn't retarded.

>> No.30870901

>>30870862
And I thought I read fast. Tell me if I made a mistake with any tags, will you? I can barely keep track of them these days.

Oh that reminds me, gotta add Monster's story now.

>> No.30871007

>>30861258
>Lorgar
>daemons
>gangbang

Where?!

>> No.30871086

>>30859652
Someone should update the uncensored lewd anon pic with his wonderful blowjob animation.

>> No.30871140

>>30867809

There really isn't enough eve smut.

>> No.30871166

>>30869692
Horny Bi-sexual maids and Chubby Queens!

>>30871007
Here:>>30862548

>> No.30871196

>>30871140
I wonder what that would really entail, Zero-G sex or ships/drones going CLANG? Seeing as how you're supposed to be directly linked up with the ship or something like that I'm pretty sure it could lead to at least some hilarity.
"Oh Captain! My railguns are firing!"

>> No.30871224

>>30871196

>hull breach detected

>> No.30871265

>>30871224

>strip mining

>> No.30871363

>>30871166
>Horny Bi-sexual maids and Chubby Queens!
Can we get a writefag on this idea? I know NiceDaemonette has offered part of the suggestion but I think it's bretty gud. I start a new job in twenty hours or I'd take a crack at it myself.

>> No.30871499

>>30871363
>Can we get a writefag on this idea? I know NiceDaemonette has offered part of the suggestion but I think it's bretty gud. I start a new job in twenty hours or I'd take a crack at it myself.
Monster originally posted the idea of a Queen gaining weight out of boredom and wondered how to make it smut, but I don't know if he's even going in this direction.

>> No.30871540

>>30871363

"Alyssa, be a dear and lick me clean, would you?"

"Yes, madame Queen, with pleasure."

The voluptuous maid lowered herself to the ground, brushing her bangs out of her eyes to see her master's flower, dribbling with nectar. She stuck out her tongue and started from the bottom of the slit, and lifting her head upwards, swinging her tongue in an arc until it terminated at the royal woman's throbbing clit. Thick strands of the Queen's juices spilled over the sexy maid's face.

"Oh! My dear Alyssa, do continue!" the Queen moaned, her chubby form beginning to glisten with the sweat of arousal.

"Yes, your majesty. I will perform my duties post-haste."

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>>30871540
Keep going. This story really needs to be fleshed out (heh).

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>>30871605

NOPE!

I don't have the time unfortunately (schoolwork beckons), and I was just giving an example anyways. An hors d'oeuvre, if you will.

>> No.30871746

>>30871540
Oh look, she's gone and gotten herself all sweaty...
Now Alyssa is going to have to call in the rest of the maid staff to help finish up!

>> No.30871787

>>30864371
I'm liking it a lot so far. You've captured the difference between Chastity and Syberia well, so it will be interesting to see and while the actual sex scene at the end was kinda short, the sexual content remained pretty consistent throughout.

I really liked the way you managed to set the story and characters whilst keeping up the lewd bits without detracting from either. Most stories in these threads seem to follow a "PLOT -> TRANSITORY BUILDUP -> SEX" formula whereas yours was more...granulated, I guess the right term would be? It was all mixed in nicely where both plot and PLOT played off one another and the story itself was building up and leading to the inevitable climax instead of a quick changing of gears.

I look forward to part 2.

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>>30871787

I'm glad you liked it. I'm ecstatic that you gave a long critique for it. Are there any major or minor things about it that you didn't like as much? Anything obvious that I can improve on?

>> No.30872004

>>30871926
>dem tittays
Sauce on that jiggle?

>> No.30872042

>>30872004
http://ecchinest.wordpress.com/2013/03/03/to-love-ru-ova-1/

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>>30871926
The main thing I noticed was that clothing seemed to be an afterthought. Unless I just skimmed over it somewhere, we didn't know that Chastity was wearing a black sweater until after Syberia was getting smothered in it or maybe right before that scene and I don't think we got a description of what Syberia was wearing until the daemonette was teasing her thong. It's not a huge deal and I know firsthand how easy it is to get bogged down in pointless details to the point where I try to avoid em, but it might help the set the scene a little more if you describe em a little bit more beforehand.

On a similar note, the little runaway tentacle-hair bang you gave the daemonette was genius and wonderfully described.

Keep at it, I love your work. Have sweatered blueberry.

>> No.30872247

>>30872162
Yeah I kinda know that was well as I didn't realize until way later that at no point later on in Late Night Research had I mentioned that Vahlen had removed her lab coat. Which made an odd mental image towards the end when they're cuddling towards the end.

Was also kinda hesitant by more cumswapping towards the end or not since it seemed almost a bit too much.

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>>30872162

Hrm. I understand that. I described Syberia's outfit in the medical examination as the traditional dressings of the order, and I guess I failed to specify clearly that the same outfit was what Chastity was wearing during the trial. I also didn't make it clear that Chastity was wearing a minor deviation from the normal stuff with a thong rather than high-cut lace panties until it came into play. I might go back and edit it a bit to help clarify things.

Thanks for the advice!

>> No.30872426
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30872426

How do you guys concentrate when you're writing? I often find that when I'm planning out what I'm going to write next or thinking about how I'm going to phrase something I get quite aroused. If I spent half as much time actually writing as I do rubbing my dick at the keyboard I'd be finished by now.

>> No.30872459

>>30872426

I usually take my time and alternate from fapping to writing, without letting myself go over the edge. The more aroused I am, the more motivated I am and the faster I write. Unfortunately, the downside to this is that finishing means all the motivation just flows out of me.

>> No.30872536

>>30872426
I just tend to take breaks occasionally to release some steam. Also serves as good source of inspiration too at times.
Other times I just manage to ignore it to a certain degree.
I'm probably broken from too much porn or something like that.
Otherwise I just tend to put on the most background-y calm music I can find and go to town with the writing.
Although I'm pretty sure I could've knocked out LNR in half the time it really took if I focused a bit more instead of breaking for fapping and other things. But it's just a thing I've come to accept when it comes to me writing.

>> No.30872871

>>30872426
Last thread someone else suggested this and I think it's the best advice you can get.

Being a smut author is like being a drug dealer. You don't sample your own wares.

>> No.30872900

>>30872459
>>30872536
Sounds like good advice.

>>30872871
But then how do I write what I know?

>> No.30872909

>>30871499
I'll be honest, I could give it a shot... but lesbian sex/group sex isn't really my thing so I'm not entirely sure how well I could make it.

I may just leave this up to someone else.

>> No.30872974

>>30872909
First rule of writing porn: never write a lesbian threesome.

But the other suggestions made earlier for Queenie might be nice

>> No.30872999

>>30872974
I was thinking of taking the exhibition servant boy one.

>> No.30873011

>>30872999
That was my favorite

>> No.30873051

>>30871540

"M-mother?" the young, barely pubescent Prince said, his face the picture of shock and awe as he walked in on his mother being serviced by her personal maid, her tongue buried deeply in the queen's thick love mound. The Queen, however, was happy for her son to see her like this.

"Oh, Richard, son, do not avert your eyes. You have reached manhood, and now it is time for you to claim your right as royalty," the Queen smiled, wiping the beads of sweat off of her forehead and soaked hair with a handkerchief. Prince Richard looked at the comely maid that stopped devouring her master's sopping pussy long enough to lock eyes with the young man. "Look at me, and look at her. We are women. You are a man now. Do what a man must do. Take her!" the Queen demanded.

The Prince was frozen in fear, unable to process what was happening in his naive, innocent mind. But the maid Alyssa smiled at the cute boy, and she reached back to pull her skirt up, revealing her beautiful ass and sex to him, indecently nude beneath her dress, quite unlike a lady. The Prince felt a familiar reaction stirring in his shorts at the sight of his first crush revealing herself in such a vulnerable position, one he had struggled to deal with for weeks whenever he saw the beautiful maiden. Little did he know, that the tanned and shapely maiden had been deliberately bending over in front of him and brushing against him, on the Queen’s orders, to stimulate his desires and seduce him.

"Do not fear it, sir. I am but a humble commoner. It would be an honor to be taken by you," Alyssa said sweetly, looking at him with her beautiful azure irises as she always did. "Surely my body is not displeasing to you?" she asked, even as her lover’s folds leaked a drop of fluids from the anticipation.

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>>30873051

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>>30862052
>Trude's the only one who writes that kind of thing
So what you're saying is... I should write more?

>> No.30873157

>>30873051
>Prince Dick
That was subtle.

>> No.30873368
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>xeno falls in love with human colonist
>attempts their species' courtship and mating rituals with the human
>human does not understand what xeno is trying to do, assumes that this is everyday behavior for xeno species
>xeno doesn't understand why nothing is getting him to shed his outer layer for intercourse
>eventually, sexytimes ensue

Can someone please make this happen?

>> No.30873432

>>30873368
That sounds like something Beginner would be awesome at. It really sucks that he's going to be gone for so long.

>> No.30873447

What sexuality are y'all? I'm just curious because I don't really see much gay stuff from this thread that isn't lesbians.

>> No.30873462

>>30872974
That one's true- pronoun trouble is not a pretty sight.

>> No.30873480

>>30873447
Straight male. I'm sure you could find someone to write m/m stuff - I imagine there would be an audience for it.

>> No.30873493

>>30873447
Because 90% of /tg/ thinks themselves straight when they are actually closeted gays jerking off to Futa fucking man. And they don't think as themselves being the futa.

>> No.30873505

>>30873447
Straight as an arrow- statistically speaking, it's the most common orientation there is. (The relative abundance of lesbian stories is a byproduct of this for reasons I can neither explain or understand.)

>> No.30873520

>>30873447
I like girls and girl-like creatures.

>> No.30873529

>>30873505
Arrows are not straight. They play straight until you fire those sluts from a bow, then they are curvy as fuck.

>> No.30873540

>>30873447
Utterly straight, but I'm fujoshi, so I'd actually like to read some gay stuff, too. Apart from that one semi-furry thing which was utterly stupid I haven't found anything in that list so far, though.

>> No.30873548

>>30873493
That's strange- I can count the number of futa stories here on one hand. Mostly because the people who prefer that sort of thing have an entire board to themselves and even have their own writers (if the recent proliferation of CYOAs on /d/ is any indication).

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>>30873051

The Prince could not resist his own desires anymore. He clumsily stumbled forward, grabbing the maid by her haunches, greedily groping her backside. Alyssa smiled at the cute boy’s first experience with a woman’s ass, turning back to continue her duties on the Queen when she heard his trousers fall to the ground. She froze mid-slurp when she felt something far wider than she expected probing at her slick entrance. As she glanced back with wide eyes, she felt his enormous royal manhood pierced her suddenly, in one smooth motion, taking in several inches at once as her flower twitched and clenched at the sudden invader, her silky inner walls rippling around him.

“By the gods, he’s huge…!” Alyssa gasped out, gritting her teeth tightly to resist the sudden blast of pleasure.

“Indeed, Alyssa my dear, he’s of his father’s stock,” the Queen giggled. “Now do your duty and teach him the pleasures of a woman. Servicing me can wait. I want to watch this.”

With a moan, hanging her head low, Alyssa gave in to the pleasure, bucking her hips backwards and deeper onto his shaft, impaling herself to his hilt, causing the young Prince to groan weakly as the sensations shot through him like lightning. He stood there, unable to quite process this staggering new revelation about himself and women, his Dick throbbing inside of the lusty maid. Alyssa smiled when she glanced back out of curiosity and saw this. He was still the same Prince as before, just… with a huge cock.

She slid forward and then pushed back against him again, her soft, round ass bouncing against his belly. She didn’t mind doing all the work. She thought it was cute, and she had to admit, power was a huge turn-on. This was the future king she was fucking. How many thousands of girls her age would have killed to be in this position, taking the crown prince’s virginity, especially one so well-endowed?

>> No.30873593

>>30873548
Just because /tg/ers doesnt post futa on here doesn't mean it's not their preference. Go to the ERPG profiles on the ERPG thread and check for yourself

>> No.30873595

>>30873447
That's kind of an odd issue for me. IRL my interests lie in women in their mid to late twenties. But when it comes to porn, and written porn in particular, I find my tastes are incredibly broad. Loli stuff and bestiality kind of creeps me out, but when it's well written that shit can be incredibly hot. Same with gay and bi stuff. I'm not a prude, but seeing two guys make out just doesn't compute quite right in my head (honestly, I'm embarrassed to have that kind of reaction). But I've fapped to a few of the m/m stories on the master list without being bothered by it. Like the loli and beast stuff, I think the unfamiliarity I have towards it makes it exotic and fresh, since I'm not sure what's going to happen next.

It's weird. I'm weird.
But I just like well written smut.

I've never written any m/m stuff for the same reason I find it appealing on occasion: I have no experience or familiarity with it.

>> No.30873614

Asexual

>> No.30873637

>>30873614
Asexual as in you don't like sex stuff at all?

>> No.30873661

>>30873447
90 to 95% straight, I can find men good looking and attractive but never sexually desirable.

And why my second story involved futa? Errr I dunno, I just thought it would fit with a story involving alien mcguffin goo that let's you make people into mechs and give them superpowers. (Which it kinda does in XCom:EW.)

>> No.30873663

>>30873586

Oh, nobody worry about collecting this stuff, I've got it all down on Word and I'll go ahead and compile it into my pastebin.

>> No.30873675

>>30873595
Also, I just realized I compared homosexuality to bestiality and pedophilia. So. Many. Fallacies.
My apologizes if I have offended anyone with my bigotry.

I'll just go back in my corner now.

>> No.30873679

ITT: I'm not gay but...
It's 2014, just come out the closed already.

>> No.30873709

>>30873540
If you are a man then you are fudanshi

>> No.30873729

>>30873447
I like male, female, and cuntboy. No dickgirls, though.

>> No.30873780

>>30873709
Yes. But I am fujoshi. There was no mistake there.

>> No.30873792

>>30873637
Its hard to explain sometimes. It doesn't really do anything for me. I mean, it feels okay. Doesn't hurt. But I am not really interested in it. If I were offered the choice of sex and petting a cat, I'd almost always choose the cat. If somebody showed me a picture of a man or woman in lingerie or a swimsuit I'd be critiquing the clothes.

>> No.30873826

>>30873792
And now I want to see a smut fic where one partner is completely apathetic, for some reason.

>> No.30873852

>>30873792
Well, that sure makes your writing much more impressive.
What made you decide to write smut?

>> No.30873868

>>30873447
Straight Male, but I wanna be the lesbian!

>>30873505
Because Lesbians are AWESOME Anon!

>>30873520
Aye!

>> No.30873876

>>30873663
Where is that, for future reference?
1st time on a /tg/ smut thread and this topic interests me immensely
seriously what are the odds that the first time on a smut thread you'll find your fetish (chubby girls) ?

>> No.30873910

>>30873876
Master list is here:
http://pastebin.com/JbeDnCAP

C.B.'s personal page is here:
http://pastebin.com/u/ChaosBeetle

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>>30873826
Brilliant idea. I'll make it happen.

>> No.30873932

>>30873910
Thank you based anon

>> No.30873942

>>30873876
I'm kind of surprised we haven't had any sooner, big girls are decently popular on /d/ right now.

>> No.30873982

>>30873927
Bonus points if the "involved" partner tries to goad the apathetic one into talking dirty, but then asks them to stop because it sounds so forced.

>> No.30874013

>>30873982
Or hilarious even. I mean I would chuckle at least a little if my partner was stonefacing while saying "Yes. Deeper. Fuck me harder you bastard. Harder" constantly.

>> No.30874030

>>30874013
That too also.

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>>30873586

She gave another long, slow, and very wet thrust backwards, and was surprised when it was met with a weak thrust from the Prince in response. He was finally starting to get it. With a feline grin, Alyssa picked up the pace of her backwards thrusts, feeling him twitch and throb deep inside of her as his young hips tried to match the force and rhythm of her backswings. She knew it wouldn’t be long before he reached his peak. She felt eager to show him the marvels of sex, so she began to roll her hips back against him, adding another layer of pleasure to her movements on him.

Meanwhile, the Queen casually moved her fingers down to begin caressing herself as she observed her son’s introduction to sex. That distressed look on his face, the sweat dripping from his chin, his eyes sealed shut from the ecstasy of his first time, combined with the smug, sexy, confident grin of her personal maid as she bucked against him, her large bosom swinging back and forth in the tight blouse she wore, the way the Prince could only give half-hearted thrusts into her because of the weakness in his knees, all of it reminded the Queen of her rosy past with the King.

With another deep, wet splurch of a thrust, Alyssa panted like a dog, the blush on her cheeks turning her beet red. “M-mother, I feel funny… like I’m going to… explode!” Prince Richard moaned, begging for help.

“Don’t worry, my son, you are nearing the point of climax. Do not be afraid of it. Let it wash over you, like a tide, and ride it as far as it can go,” the Queen said in a motherly tone. And so the Prince did, releasing his load inside of the maid in thick, ropy strands. He sprayed her full of his seed, his mind a haze of white and fire, nothing on his mind except the orgasm itself.

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>>30874039

“Oh!” Alyssa moaned when she noticed he was cumming inside of her. While she of course could not feel the fluids shooting into her, the thought of being filled with his seed was terribly hot to her. She did not climax, of course, for the Prince hadn’t done much to earn it, but she did shiver a little in pleasure, pressing her ass against him even harder with each spurt.

“Very good, very good, both of you,” the Queen smiled. “Now, Richard, you have become a real man and tasted the very beginning of the pleasures women can bring you. Come here, my sweet child,” she said, holding her arms wide. Richard groaned, sliding out of the horny, half-satisfied maid and stumbling into the arms of his naked mother, his half-hard and cum-soaked penis rubbing against the Queen’s snatch. “Oh, you lovely little boy, you’ve done wonderfully. Now, let’s do it together…”

~~~

The end. Or is it? I may do more next weekend. Maybe not. Who knows. I prefer my porn with plot anyways, but this is quick and dirty and easy.

>> No.30874110

>>30874039
>A busy MILF who loves Gundam model kits and runs her own store.
No wonder she's gotten really popular.

>> No.30874122

>>30874073

Here's the pastebin link to it:

A Royal "Coming" of Age

http://pastebin.com/eESDD873

>> No.30874148

>>30873826
There was an analogy that I liked that I'll use here. To an asexual, sex is more for other people than for yourself. Its like if your partner told you that they got off by fingering your nostrils.

>>30873852
First and foremost, its fun. (Its not my thing but that doesn't mean that I don't understand the appeal!) Also sex is something that is easily wielded to evoke an emotional response out of most people. That emotional response is what makes readers get sucked up into literature. The reader laughs, loves, gets angry, frustrated, or sad right alongside the character. Sex is a universal concept that transcends culture, but at the same time it is something that is viewed from a million different angles. It is initiated and performed in a million different ways. It is such a simple thing, a simple act, yet countless stories have the potential to revolve around it, the pursuit of it, the results of it.

>> No.30874154

>>30874039
>>30874073
Also, reading this makes me just wanna flip a table and delete all the later parts of LNR because I just keep getting hit in the face with how atrocious my writing was for that entire part.

Should be noted that I am really really self-critical most of the time.

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>>30874013
>>30873982
Whose point of view would be most appropriate? I want to provide a lot of internal monologue on the absurdity of the event.

>> No.30874175

>>30873876

I recommend My Bloody Valentine if you want another fic with a chubby (daemon girl!)

>> No.30874189

>>30873780
Just making sure. I've heard a lot of guys refer to themselves as fujoshi.

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>>30874154

It's fine, friend. Trust me, I have a lot of experience. This isn't my first rodeo, if you dig it. Take this as an opportunity to improve. There's no need to delete it, I love that one. See if you can find what you dislike about it, though, and take notes for later stories.

>> No.30874283

>>30874172
I would almost say the 'normal' partner in this case.
For an odd analogy I'd say it's more interesting to listen to the internal dialogue of someone trying to fuck Rei rather than listening to Rei's internal dialogue.

>>30874234
I really won't delete it since someone posted last weekend that they liked that part despite not liking futa.
Odd analogy time again, but that just makes me feel I'm writing American porn compared to your French porn.
(I have no clue if that even works.)

>> No.30874361

>>30874073
nice, good, crude and lewd

>> No.30874385

>>30871196
this needs to happen

>> No.30874404

>>30874073
I kinda want to draw them. Care to describe them more or should I just do whatever I want?

>> No.30874419

>>30874283

Well, using your analogy, keep in mind that Edgar Allen Poe is the most world-renowned author of all time, with the most prevalent and printed stories of all time, and that France is the country that first noticed his brilliance.

>> No.30874510

>>30874419
>most world-renowned author of all time
Who, ironically, also wrote one of the worst novels of all time. Seriously, look it up.

>> No.30874511

>>30874404

Wow, that's awesome! I'll just give you guidelines, rather than a specific description:

Alyssa: busty maid, hourglass figure, short-haired brunette and blue eyes, average height (taller than the other two by default)

Queen: chubby, wide hips, huge chest, short

Prince Richard: young man, probably in his first growth spurt so definitely short. Not much detail on him aside from his package, so he's mostly up to you.

I don't mind if you change some of it for personal preference. I trust you.

>> No.30874523

>>30874073
MOAR! this was really really good!

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>>30874510

What do you mean ironically? That's natural. The worst stuff sells the best.

>> No.30874538

>>30874511
Be sure to slap all of that into a pastebin so it doesn't vanish when the thread dies.

>> No.30874570

>>30874538
He already did.
>http://pastebin.com/eESDD873

>> No.30874573

>>30874511
The prince should be blonde. Just because all young boyish princes are blonde. Blue-eyed not a requirement though.

>> No.30874625

>>30874570
Oops, didn't see that.

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>>30874573

Yeah, I was originally gonna put that in the description, but decided not to. I figure an artist does best when not constrained by too much.

>>30874523

I'll do more, then, but next weekend, probably as a cool-down from working on my other stories.

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>>30874573
I don't think I'll colour it, to be honest, it's already late and I'm not really good at that anyway.
I don't know if I'll find space for the queen, I was more thinking of drawing it from her perspective. So apart from some chubby thighs there won't be much of her, probably. Personally I'm not so thrilled about her anyway, to be honest.
In the meantime, have a naked lady whose clothes got stolen while she was bathing.

>> No.30874724

>>30874696

Queen's perspective sounds wonderful. I know chubbies aren't for everyone. Hell, they're not even a fetish of mine, I've just found that they're easy to write.

>> No.30874824

About an eighth of the way through the mermaid story. I fell asleep writing it last night.

>>30873447
Straight except that I really like drawing womens' hips and butts and I don't understand it. It's like I am gay only for hips and butts.

>> No.30874859

>>30874824
Even grills like other grill butts and hips. They're so... hypnotic.

>> No.30874898

>>30873368

Are we talking humanoids more or less around the 'uncanny valley' or abominable non-humanoid x human derping that may give you weird boners that 'feel wrong'?

>> No.30874908

>>30874175
Thanks, quite nice indeed

>> No.30874922

>>30873368
Read Beginner's "Fair Trade"
http://pastebin.com/RBhCGanv

It's not what you're looking for, exactly, and the genders are switched, but it has the same basic idea. But with a giant spider.

>> No.30874940

Did that "dragon x giantess" story ever get made?

>> No.30874950

>>30873868

>Straight Male, but I wanna be the lesbian!


Why?

Reminds me of Chris-Chan
>"I'm a gaybian, a male lesbian."- CWC the Arsonist

Fucking hell.

>> No.30874965

>>30874898
I was thinking humanoid, say Mass Effect aliens, but I'd be fine with either option.

>> No.30874969

>>30874950
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ptC9N9YJ24Y

>> No.30874977

>>30874940

Not yet. I don't even know if anyone has it on their backlog.

>> No.30874980

>>30874940
>all of this chubby chasing

Absolutely disgusting. Go back to /d/.

>> No.30874996

>>30874977
I remember SOMEONE saying they would do it, but I don't remember who...

>> No.30875004

>>30871926
I recognize that hair and black outfit.
Pretty sure it's from "To Love-Ru".
One of the aliens has an ability to change any part of her body.

>> No.30875006

>>30874980
Er, wrong post.

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>>30873051

>> No.30875048

>>30874996
Who's working on the Dragoness x Trap?

>> No.30875052

>>30875048
Monster finished it, scroll up.

>> No.30875071

>>30875052
Nothing can live up to the hype I'm feeling right now.

Wait... what do you mean "finished"? It was supposed to be slow.

>> No.30875094

>>30875071
Well, he said he might add more to it eventually, but it's done for the time being.

>> No.30875112

>>30875071
he did the first big chunk but there may be more later

>> No.30875114

>>30875094
If there's sex in it already, it's probably too fast.

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>>30873447

Heterosexual, but when it comes to fictional porn it doesn't have to be a human female.

Knawamsayin, nigga?

>> No.30875149

>>30875114
No sex, just a blowjob. Try reading it before making assumptions.

>> No.30875231

>>30875149
>probably

Try reading before making assumptions about making assumptions. That guy only said that it was likely to be too fast.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KiIP_KDQmXs

>> No.30875302

>>30875140

>great human warrior goes to slay a dragon
>dragon gets his kink on
>suddenly he's pounding it in the ass

It's aalllll good. Dragons are made of magic so it ain't gay.

>> No.30875338

>>30873447
Straightish female.

>> No.30875407

>>30874965

I also dig the idea. But aliens that are identical to humans are a let down. If there be aliens, they better be 'alien' for sure. They can still have boobs, birthing hips and booty though. Though those may have clear alien aspects to them also.

I like Meandracos stuff a alot because he draws girls that often can be qualified as non-humanoid, yet are still around the 'uncanny valley'. It's an area of weird boners still though.

>> No.30875466

>>30875048
Lythra's Surprise (Black DragonxTrap, oral:male, transvestism): http://pastebin.com/ifXxP9EL

>> No.30875483

>>30873447
More-or-less straight male. I like dickgirls and beatiality. Lesbos are pretty damn fine, too.

>> No.30875497

>>30875466
That it's a black dragon having a maid cleaning makes it all the more hilarious.

>>30875483
>dickgirls
>besitality
>>/d/

>> No.30875543

>>30875497
>dickgirls
>besitality
>>/d/

We've had fics related to both of these posted here before.

>> No.30875568

>>30875407
I'm trying to find this image of the exact alien I had in mind when I first thought of this prompt, but it might take some time.

>> No.30875578

>>30875543
Some pretty good ones, too.

>> No.30875610

>>30875497
Beastiality is illegal on /d/.
And the question was for preference, so why judge people for an honest answer?

>> No.30875655

What do you think the chances are that we could get a sequel to Carnal Carnivale where they actually do end up going to Lelith's place?
I know Smutomancer is on hiatus, but someone else could pick it up, right?

>> No.30875690

>>30875655

I'm not very comfortable doing a direct sequel to someone else's work.

>> No.30875704

An outstanding niche, I know, but has anyone written anything involving sexual symbiosis/parasitism?

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>>30875704
I'm not even entirely sure what you're asking for.

>> No.30875758

>>30875704

Funny you should ask that!

http://pastebin.com/7XLzV363

Basically devoted entirely to that on the first chapter and the extension.

Assuming our definitions of the term are the same, that is.

>> No.30875855

>>30875704
Would a sorceress who wants more lewd dickings in her relationship, but wants to remain faithful to her lover, and therefore binds a tentacle demon inside him, giving him tentacle powers at the cost of becoming horny all the time, needing sex with women to live, and losing most of his sexual inhibitions fall under the category of "sexual symbiosis"?

>> No.30875877

>>30875745
I blame T.I.T.S. for this, but there's a creature in there called the "Cunt Snake". Feeds off of fluidds and, if you lose to it, might attach itself to its victim as a tail with a powerful compusion to seek out fluids. Read the scenes (few as there were) and thought, "Yeah. This is my jam!"

>>30875758
Checking it out now.
>>30875855
Sounds about right,too.

>> No.30875959

>>30875466
The author mixes up gender pronouns a lot. After the trap is revealed, it should always be "he", yet the author fucked up all the time, calling the trap "her".

>>30875877
That doesn't sound symbiotic at all. Also, TITS disappoints me greatly. What I expected: interesting aliens. What I got: furries and monster girls with a twist every once in a while.

>> No.30876007

>>30875959
This has been addressed. Monster was trying to decide whether or not to refer to the trap as a she or he, but settled on he since he's not -really- a transgender person (where the issue came from). The mixed up pronouns are minor editing mistakes, Monster has said he will go back and fix it.

>> No.30876215

sooo time to smut it up.

>> No.30876264

>>30876215
Excellent news. Working on anything in particular, or taking requests?

2 Sisters of Battle having sex while cosplaying as their favorite primarchs?

>> No.30876286

>>30876264

Fuck.

You made me laugh

>> No.30876307

>>30876215
How is your hand?

>> No.30876331

>>30875959
After what happened to CoC, that's to be expected. I'm frankly surprised that Urta 2.0 hasn't been added yet.

>> No.30876334

>>30873447
Monster made a barbarian on knight sex scene.

The Barbarian's Way
>http://pastebin.com/cBjQENQY

>> No.30876458

>>30876334
Monster does all kinds of stuff.

>> No.30876608

>>30876458
It's nice to have someone so willing to experiment. Really helps us add some diversity to the collection.

>> No.30876679
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30876679

>>30874724
>>30874039
There ya go. I'm not quite content, but I don't know what to do with it. So criticism is very welcome.

>> No.30876689

>>30876264
I don't think Sisters of Battle really like Space Marines that much. They would be more likely to recreate the Age of Apostasy where one SoB dressed up as Sebastian Thor and railed another pretending to be High Lord Vandire

>> No.30876691

>>30876215
Maybe you could draw some uncovered [spoilers]udders[/spoilers].

>> No.30876727

>>30876679
Disembodied legs there look kind of strange, but apart from that I have no complaints. Nice blush lines, BTW.

>> No.30876735
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30876735

>>30863128
I guess this will have to wait until next week.

>> No.30876739

>>30876679
Is the corset pushing her bewbs up like that? It might look a bit more natural if you let them hang down a bit more naturally.

But I'm loving their expressions.

>> No.30876741

>>30876689
Replace Primarchs with Saints maybe? Granted there aren't that many well known SoB saints I can really think of other than Celestine and possibly Sabbatine as well. (Even if Sabbatine wasn't technically related to SoB I think.)

>> No.30876772

>>30876741
Saints all look the same tho

>> No.30876774

>>30876608
Speaking of which, I'm gonna crank out one of my quick stories. So, that queen one will be on the back burner for a bit.

Anyone have a request?

>> No.30876790

>>30876735
Oh god that is terrifying yet boner inducing, my brain and penis are both confused and aroused.

Good job Lewd.

>> No.30876792

>>30876727
They're for the people who want the queen there.
>>30876739
Yes, that was the idea, but I guess I can have them plop out a bit. Uno momento, mon signores.

>> No.30876819

>>30876772
I guess.
Not to mention the only picture I can remember off Sabbatine is from the BL Sabbat Worlds crusade book and even then I can't really remember how she looked in that.

>> No.30876854

>>30876774
Did anyone pick up my request for a female halfling boxer getting some sweet lovin' from her coach/lover/medic after he finishes patching her up after one of her bouts?
If not, I'd love to see it get made.

>> No.30876856

>>30876819
That means I have full artistic freedom !


WOOOOOOOOOOOH

>> No.30876906
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30876906

>>30876679

It's brilliant. I love it. I don't have the artistic expertise to really give any pointers, though. The expressions are great. I do think that her breasts could be a bit less pushed up, make things look a little more natural.

>> No.30876929
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30876929

>>30876856
Oh wait, found one. Although her only real noticeable thing is that she is short haired instead of the normal SoB haircut.

>> No.30876932
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30876932

>>30876856
Fancy hats? Please say your artistic vision includes fancy hats.

>> No.30877000

>>30876854
I was interested in that one, but I'm not sure if it was picked up either. Also, is it okay if her coach is a half-giant? I find that especially adorable.

>> No.30877072

>>30877000
Have you ever seen a picture of a chipmunk eating a banana?
I have a fetish for that scene Fellatio

Besides, multiple writers do the same premise all the damn time, so no worries. I'd like to see your take on it, too.

>> No.30877144

>>30876792
>>30876906
>>30876727
- legs +nipples, hope it's better now.
http://imgur.com/BWhyHOT

>> No.30877186
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30877186

>>30877144

>filename: BWhyHOT

Indeed, imgur, indeed. I think both are great for different reasons.

>> No.30877210

>>30877144

The nipples and the blouse line seem a bit sketchy. Personally I think if that was cleaned up a little it'd be even better.

>> No.30877243

>>30877144
Yes. Much, much yes.
You're getting great at expressions, Mask

>>30877186
I didn't notice that, but it's perfect.

>> No.30877302

>>30877243
That one wasn't me.

>> No.30877315

>>30877302

Wait, someone else modified it? Or it was someone else doing it from the start?

>> No.30877354

>>30877302
And now I feel dumb.
Sometimes anonymity kicks my ass.

My apologies to the both of you.

>> No.30877360

>>30877315
Wasn't me at all, some other anon did that whole thing. No worries.

>> No.30877395

>>30877000
I think it was discussed, but I'm not sure anyone said outright that they'd do it.
The half-giant idea sounds amazing, btw.

>> No.30877577

>>30876679

dose expressions, dat cleavage
.......unf

>> No.30877703

>>30877354
Yea, I'm not Mask, but no problemo, comes with being an anon with no signature.
I fixed some lines, but now I'm done.
http://imgur.com/VYNZU9N

>> No.30877725

>>30877703
I-it's beautiful.

>> No.30877775

>>30877703
that is niiiiiiiice, like the subtle nip slip

>> No.30877807

>>30877703

You should decide on a name, or let us pick one for you. Every content creator should have a name.

>> No.30877839
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30877839

>>30877703

Perfect. Beautiful. I couldn't ask for a more talented drawfag to illustrate a scene from my writefaggotry.

>> No.30877964
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30877964

>>30877839
Wow, I'm honoured. T-thanks. Glad you like it.

>>30877807
It seems it's been decided that I'm Pizzajuice. Not sure I like it...

>> No.30878005

>>30877964
You'll learn to like it soon enough. Always good to have another drawfag here.

>> No.30878034

>>30877964
Choose one you like, then.

>> No.30878038

>>30878005
Oh, and stand by for next thread. We're on the last page.

>> No.30878064

>>30878005
Good to be here. I just found these threads three weeks ago and I feel like I already got more ideas from them than I had all year.

>> No.30878309

>>30878038
Can I make it?

>> No.30878323

>>30874073
>she of course could not feel the fluids shooting into her
Actually I've been wondering about that, since it's written in several of the stories in the list. Apparently some women claim to feel it, but I don't see how that's even possible. Are they lying? Or imagining it?

>> No.30878393

>>30878323

It's reasonable to believe that some might be more sensitive deeper inside their lady bits, and that sometimes a guy really just floods them, but the vast majority of internet wisdom on the subject implies that it is not a common thing if it even is a thing.

A woman feeling the cum burst inside her is damn hot, though. Of course, I think that her not feeling it and realizing what happened because of the man's movements and the way his penis throbs is pretty hot too.

>> No.30878413

>>30878323
>vaginas being able tp feel the most minute nuances of whatever's inside them
>cum and ladyjuice being sweet to the taste
>big breasts being more sensitive than smaller ones

Welcome to smut written by virgins.

>> No.30878427

>>30878309

No need.
>>30878387

>> No.30878484

>>30878413
more like smut written for the human psychology, its more entertaining and arousing to read and imagine those feelings than the reality on a purely mental basis

>> No.30878489

>>30878323
Some can, some can't. At least that's what a quick google search tells me.

>> No.30878517

>>30878323
It varies from person to person. Personally I can usually tell when my partner ejaculates because I can feel his dick pulsing and throbbing inside me. If he's especially hard and comes a lot, then I can sometimes feel the fluid itself - it's hard describe. Warmth and a sort of vague feeling of weight or pressure.

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