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Well /lit/, why do haiku threads here never produce content like this?

also haiku thread go

>> No.6339490

>>6339486
That flawless attention to form
>creative subversion of the traditional Haiku form
>dem ontological themes. dat desein

>> No.6339498

Reminder that you can't write haiku in English.

>> No.6339503

>>6339486
Tangentially related but I just bought Basho's Narrow Road to the Deep North and I can't wait to get into it.

>> No.6339520

>>6339503
>Basho's Narrow Road
Tell me about it

>> No.6339523

That's actually adorable, and clever too.

>> No.6339527

>>6339503
Is it anything like invisible cities by Calvino but foccusing on real life places?

>> No.6339542

>>6339520
>>6339527
Haven't got it yet, but you can read the first paragraph on its Wikipedia page. Seems to be a prosimetric (prose and haikus) travel account, and probably quite unlike Calvino's book. I'm somewhat reminded of Hesse's Siddharta, both in terms of prose and subject matter.

>> No.6339597

tomorrow I will
write my essays and will cease
addiction to /lit

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6340672

>>6339486
>that pic
woah

>> No.6340674
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6340674

>>6339486
Poop Poop Poop Poop Poop
Poop Poop Poop Poop Poop Poop Poop
Poop Poop Poop Poop Poop

>> No.6340676

>>6339486
Why do haiku threads
Never produce works like this?
This thread won't either.

>> No.6340688

>>6340676
>5-7-4
fucked up

>> No.6340694

>>6340688
1. This
2. thread
3. won't
4-5. either
You were this close to basic competency keep it up

>> No.6340700

>>6340688
>>6340694
HAHAHAHAHA
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
HAHAHATOPLEL

>> No.6340706

Yaz zamanımı
Kac günüm daha kaldi
Yaz zamanımı

>> No.6340707

I saw bananas
Who were wearing pajamas
They went thataway

----> >>>/out/

>> No.6340712

>>6340694
>>6340700
fuug
pls dont tell anyone ?

>> No.6340728

Damn I don't even wanna be a writer but even I feel rekt by that kid.

>> No.6340733

>>6340712
>1
>6
Also a haiku doesn't have to be exactly 5-7-5 in the first place. That's just what's an easy pattern for people to follow. Most people.

>> No.6340734

This is nuts! she said
No, these are nuts! he replied
Rape in a haiku

>> No.6340740

Behind clouds, the sun
Its light falls on my keyboard
I can leave my chair

>> No.6340763

>>6339486
In This Thread: people like the work of someone they'd label a STEMfag.

>> No.6340782
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6340782

>>6339486

That's one perceptive 9-year-old.

>> No.6341011

>>6340763
>In This Thread: people
>like the work of someone they'd
>label a STEMfag

>> No.6341018

>>6339486
That's one of the best haiku's I've ever read in my life

>> No.6341091

shitposting on a
Chinese cartoon forum, kek
how pathetic, lel

>> No.6341095

>>6339486
That kid is going places.

>> No.6341121

>>6339490
>>6339523
>>6340672
>>6340728
>>6340782
>>6341018
>>6341095
>>>/r/eddit

>> No.6341767

>>6339498
you just did, autist

>> No.6341846

a lifeless bare rock
no moss nor lichen crept up
before, after Man

>> No.6342161

>>6341846
nice

>> No.6342172

o, listen to me
english haiku is shit
may god forgive us

seriously though, there is nothing smart about english haiku. In japan they hold significance however, as poetry and literature is a big part of their culture

>> No.6342186

Ave he says proud,
Black mask and Legion banner,
So true to Caesar

>> No.6342196

haiku?
i don't know--
how they go.

>> No.6342202

>>6342172
Hey, the literature of any culture is a big part of it bell end, and while they are often much more intricate and poignant in japanese, it doesn't stop them from being amusing or diverting in English. Stop being such a psuedo-intellectual. You're posting on fucking 4chan man.

>> No.6342353

>>6339486
what a beautiful mind

>> No.6342408

where are my headphones
where is my medication
where are my slippers

>> No.6342862

>>6342408
where is my wallet?
did I leave it in my pants?
where are my damn pants

>> No.6342887

>>6342862
I swear I saw them
Just before mom started to clean
God damn it, mother

>> No.6342916

The poor nigger on the wall. Look at him.
Look at the poor nigger. Look at the poor nigger on the wall
Fuck him. Fuck the nigger on the wall. Black man is debil