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What does /lit/ think about my poetry.

>> No.19605957

didn't read

>> No.19605976

>>19605957
yeah

>> No.19606044

>>19605948
not a poem

>> No.19606166

Formatting your text
like this
does not make it
a poem.

>> No.19606245

>>19605948
As someone who has an anti-poetry collection coming out, I must say that this is absolute garbage. Try harder next time.

>> No.19606275

>>19606166
What makes a poem then retard

>> No.19606281

>>19606275
rhymes

>> No.19606284

>>19606281
Kek. Based retard

>> No.19606293

Cock, cock and balls-
in my ass; cock.
Balls and cock,
my ass, my balls.

My ass, cock and balls,
your cock; my ass.
Balls cock ass cock,
balls ass ass cock.

Cock filled with ass-
filled with balls.
"Balls" and cock-
in my ass.

My ass filled with cock and balls,
balls; cock.
Cock and ass in my balls.
Ass cock.

>> No.19606301

>>19606293
You have to be over 18 to post here

>> No.19607078

>>19606166
I dont give a fuck, I despise poetry

>> No.19607122

>>19605948
Cheap Chinese shit from thou deepest crevasse
How I long for the dungness of dung
When you leave up mine nostril
Thine divine snice melange
'Tis I who shallst coometh
'Tis I who shallst cry (tears joyous delighte)

>> No.19607325

>>19607078
you hate poetry because you have thr wrong understanding of what it is

>> No.19607329

>>19607122
terrible. even for a shitpost. just give up.

>> No.19607602

>>19605948
Marianne did it better.

>> No.19608552
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19608552

>>19605948
>I hate poetry
>Poetry is always awful
>I will prove this by writing a 'poem' that is awful

>> No.19608595

>>19605948
OP is a fag
His poetry is shit
We will forever nag
Because he knows not even a bit

>> No.19609430

https://vocaroo.com/aPYGCMo17wO