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Hello /Lit/, I wrote a short story. Can you please point out how garbage it is. Also, critique thread?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b7cHeRa3hTXAbnxmmdWRIb6Sd6klK4_EEF0OIoLyVdg/edit?usp=sharing

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16768515

>>16768495
might aswell get some critique. Here are my writings: https://www.litpublication.com/
I'm really trying to develop.

>> No.16768601

>>16768515
based

>> No.16768933

bump ;_;

>> No.16768941

>>16768495
fuck off there's a thread for this

>> No.16768950

>>16768933
There's a critique thread right here >>16759096
I won't insult you because you seem to have good intentions and appear emotionally fragile. I hope things get better for you.

>> No.16768955

>>16768941
>>16768950
Thanks guys.