Haiku Thread

[Anonymous No.16647202]

time for another
haikus are good for the soul
relate an image

[Anonymous No.16647218]

SEASON, MIND TO WORLD
THESE RULES ARE MORE THAN COUNTING
TURN: WORLD TO MIND

[Frater Asemlen !XS8vrClKs2 No.16647251]

gems of the market
they cannot satisfy me
I seek the Great Pearl

The Pearl of great price
is obscured by three dark veils
Mind, body and I

oh my nightingale
drink the flower of my I
then I will have peace

Moon over jade seas
I behold The fish Kun soar
I saw it transform

Kun flying as Peng
This the profound mystery
Metamorphosis

Dying willow trees
I pass as I go fishing
Is the sea too cold?

The old man mines jade
“I feel so hungry and cold”
He returns back home

Emerald blossoms
Carried by a golden fox
Such a lovely dream

I entered heaven
I saw Barking and running
My dog was there too


The cloud covered sky
And the blur in my mind’s eye
Are just your Goodbye


I wish I could speak
As basho or like Dante
But I am nothing

Where is cold mountain?
And Alph, that sacred river?
Cities feel lonely

There is a brown leaf
damp wind blew it in my pot
Goodbye pot of beef

[࿇ C Œ M G E N V S ࿇ !KNDYYIIins No.16647366]

NOCTO DESVELO;

DESCÚBREME EL ALBOR

—HORA DE DORMIR.


« 零 »

[Anonymous No.16647520]

>>16647251
>>16647366
>posting some gay shit
come on anons write something
you can do better

[࿇ C Œ M G E N V S ࿇ !KNDYYIIins No.16647532]

>>16647520


?

[Anonymous No.16647595]

>>16647366
Is that a man or a woman

[Anonymous No.16647602]

The stuff tripfags write
is constantly shit and gay
tripfag anhero when?

in loving memory of >>16647520

[Anonymous No.16647996]

Three in the morning

Wide awake I pray to God

My heart is at rest

[Anonymous No.16648055]

>>16647366
lol

[Anonymous No.16648066]

No one in the haiku community writes in the 5-7-5 anymore, anons. Also, the idea isn't to use archaic Western constructions or overly simplistic quasi-Eastern constructions.

An example from John Stevenson:

revising poems
a third cup of tea
from the same bag

t. award-winning haiku poet

[Anonymous No.16648097]

>>16648066
Bad turn, poor imagery

[Anonymous No.16648107]

>>16648066
that is not the point
don't take yourself serious
way of the road, Bubs.

[Anonymous No.16648124]

>>16648097
Anon, I don't know how to explain this to you any better than to say that this guy has had hundreds upon hundreds of haiku published in all the relevant haiku magazines of the modern era. I think you're missing the point of what I was saying.

[࿇ C Œ M G E N V S ࿇ !KNDYYIIins No.16648132]

>>16648066


1. THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS: «THE HAIKU COMMUNITY».

2. A HAIKU IS A POETICAL FORM WHICH, AT ITS MOST BASIC, CONSISTS OF ONE STROPHE CONSISTING OF THREE VERSES, THE FIRST, AND THE LAST, OF WHICH CONSIST OF FIVE SYLLABLES, WHILST, THE SECOND, OF SEVEN.

THE FACT THAT MISCELLANEOUS INEPTS VIOLATE THIS FORM IS OF NO IMPORTANCE, OR RADICAL EFFECT, TO HAIKU POETRY AS SUCH.

[Gassoo No.16648173]

Dad has metal fists
Bruises, pain and suffering
Bliss is a torture

[Anonymous No.16648187]

>>16648124
Praising my doorstep's turd,
While others praise a great many,
Is Catastrophic Fire Danger

[Anonymous No.16648192]

>>16648132
I guess it's true what they say about tripfags.

[Anonymous No.16648194]

[Anonymous No.16648351]

Numbed Earth:
Haiku Trilogy For The Insomniacs

I
I promised the sun
That I wouldn’t sleep alone.
Moon, please ease my mind

II
When the moon hangs
Streetlamps will pray to its light.
I pray to the stars

III
Sun is rising now
Whiskey bottle is empty
Sleep is betrayed.

[Anonymous No.16648382]

>>16647202
>DADDY WANTS TO FUCK
>:nitrous oxide envelopes:
>Sandman tiptoes in

[Anonymous No.16648406]

>>16647202
>so I went to church
>after hours without a priest
>the saints were awake

[Anonymous No.16648415]

we took the long way
home. two small goodbyes, our masks
for the day thinned out.

[Anonymous No.16648445]

one hundred and three
one hundred and forty five
I want off this ride

slide slide slide the thread
neurons fire you are tired
exhausted human

stop meandering
go straight one step at a time
the result: goals reached

a world without me
is a world without stuff
as far as I know

taste the bread and meat
cheese on burger epic fail
burger is ruined

the boat moves slowly
one weaving stream of conscious
destination known

[Anonymous No.16648578]

just pounded my wife
butt massage turned into sex
time to go to bed

[Anonymous No.16648728]

my spirit is weak
tfw no trap gf
no i am not gay

[࿇ C Œ M G E N V S ࿇ !KNDYYIIins No.16649260]

>>16648406
>>16647996


ME GUSTAN.

[Anonymous No.16649270]

Nothing is quite like
A piping-hot cup of tea
After a long day

[Anonymous No.16649289]

my shadow
also taking
a shabby meal

[Anonymous No.16649308]

>>16647202
Guest from the fitness
Working out at library
Giving you BOOBA

[Anonymous No.16649310]

>>16647202
Butterfly is gay
These two tripfags also gay
Penis limpens fast

[Anonymous No.16649321]

>>16649310
Aren't butterfly and the ALL CAPS autist the same person?

[Anonymous No.16649332]

lost in the sea
no rescue in sight
mind in despair

[Anonymous No.16649360]

>>16648445
based

[Anonymous No.16649361]

>>16649310
Based

[Anonymous No.16649365]

>>16649310
In primary school
Springs forth our gym coach teacher
Penis inspection day

[Anonymous No.16649395]

>>16647202

only three
syllables make up the first
line of this haiku

[Anonymous No.16649411]

Restore the Emperor and
Make America A
Japanese Protectorate

[Anonymous No.16649416]

[Anonymous No.16649488]

siblings on the yard
playing and jesting around
rolling on the lawn

[࿇ C Œ M G E N V S ࿇ !KNDYYIIins No.16649494]

>>16649416


I LOVE POETRY BY CHILDREN.

[Anonymous No.16649705]

>>16647202
月が出る
友人が居ない
涙から