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16132526 No.16132526 [Reply] [Original]

there's a party scene in my story

i've never been to a part so i have to research party on google

>> No.16132535

>>16132526
kek this dude is sadder than me

>> No.16132551

What kind of party? I was going to recommend BEE's ones focused on college/teenage kids, but that's a specific kind of party.

>> No.16132556

there's a party in my pants

>> No.16132572

>>16132526
I've never been to a party either. It's alright anon

>> No.16132587
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16132587

what are your thoughts on nacho fixins?

>> No.16132600

>>16132535
Don't you mean "sadder than I?"

>> No.16132604

>>16132526
I promise you that you're not missing out on much, aside from not having the experience to base some writing off of

>> No.16132629

>>16132604
yea fun sucks

>> No.16132632

>>16132526
i think i'm thinking about this wrong, when i write typically like to thing this is something that should explain it's self and make sense.

when instead of should be trying to convey a feeling.

>> No.16132646

>>16132526
ive been to some parties anon, you're not missing out on much

>> No.16132657

>>16132629
Parties are only fun if it's just you and a bunch of bros having a good time. The college/highschool type parties where it's a bunch of thirsty guys competing to get laid are not fun

>> No.16132661

>>16132604
Depends on the party. Themed parties are pretty cool (eating/drinking challenges), and parties with good games and dancing are great too.

>> No.16132668

>>16132657
college parties are fun if it's a sports team or club party, where everyone knows eachother already and has common interests. Frat parties where people are just pretending to be having fun and trying to get laid in crowded noisy basements suck.

>> No.16132687

>>16132657
it's a party man - if you don't want to hang out with the douchers acting like douches trying to get laid, then just don't
if you just want to hang out with your bros having a good time, then what's stopping you?
i always hung out with the stoners in the back room or the people playing drinking games

>> No.16134084

>>16132661
Those are reddit parties

>> No.16134093

>>16132526
It's not that hard, just write some people doing dumb bullshit and that's it. That's all a party is and nothing more.

>> No.16134099

>>16132600
kek THIS dude is sadder than I

>> No.16134101

Yo, parties fucking rule. Some of the best times of my life have been at parties with my best friends, just hanging out, drinking beer, smoking cigarettes. Vibing. You don't care about the hangover tomorrow or about the lung cancer from the cigarettes because the world could end right then and there and you'd be okay with it. You should go to some parties, anon.

>> No.16134104

>>16132526
Just write a bunch of empty laughs and unfunny jokes and guys trying to hit on gurls and then some puking and you will be fine. Whenever I need to go to a party due to some social obligation, I am utterly depressed and feel emotionally empty for the next two weeks because of all the empty laughing and alcohol-induced good feeling which doesn't actually make you feel good even in the moment, just gets you talky and smiling and looking like you enjoy yourself. It's horrible

>> No.16134112
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>>16134101
Disgusting

>> No.16134113 [DELETED] 

>>16134101
> just hanging out, drinking beer, smoking cigarettes. Vibing. You don't care about the hangover tomorrow or about the lung cancer from the cigarettes because the world could end right then and there and you'd be okay with it
This is unironically how I envision Hell is like.

>> No.16134120

>>16134101
>just hanging out, drinking beer, smoking cigarettes. Vibing. You don't care about the hangover tomorrow or about the lung cancer from the cigarettes because the world could end right then and there and you'd be okay with it.
This is unironically what I imagine Hell is like.

>> No.16134128

>>16134112
>>16134113
I feel sorry for you guys. The thing which virgins don't understand is that parties are never intrinsically good. What makes them great is your friends, and having time to just cut loose, hang out, and speak freely with your best buddies.

So really, what you're lacking is not some kind of innate ability to have fun at parties but good friends that you're comfortable around. And that is sad.

>> No.16134139

>>16134128
Friends don't participate in dead end degeneracy to merely bullshit, you would call what you have an acquaintance. None of my friends needed the bottle to just talk honestly.

>> No.16134144

>>16134101
Cringe

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>>16134139
>>16134139
>>16134139

>> No.16134153

>>16134128
(I was >>16134113, posted >>16134120 to fix grammatical error)

I don't really disagree with your claim (I have no friends I'm comfortable around), but I am confused on why you find that sad.

>> No.16134155

>>16134128
See >>16134139, the party isn't necessary, what does it add? Personally I can't deal with high stimulation environments like crowded parties with loud music because I'm probably autistic or something. Sure you can try to find some little corner with your friends where it sucks less and you can do your own separate thing, or you could just hang out with your friends without the "party" trappings. I guess you could call hanging out with a few bros in somebody's house a "party" but it's not what anybody is talking about in this thread.

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>>16134149
What you have is nothing to be proud of or boastful and you should seriously reconsider your life.

>> No.16134170

>>16134153
It's sad because its a whole dimension to life that you're missing out on. Having friends that you're comfortable around and being able to have a good ass time with them really helps a person become confident in themselves not only in a social context but internally. Because, you can say "this is who I am, these are the things I find funny, these are how I really feel about things" and your friends are like "that's fucking cool man", and that's a powerful feeling.

Sorry, I didn't mean to be like "that's sad" in a demeaning way. I meant that it is genuinely unfortunate. I move around a lot and so there's always periods of my life where I don't have friends to be with, and those times are always the loneliest and bleakest times for me.

And by the way, when I vigorously espouse parties, I'm not necessarily talking about 100 person bangers in a frat basement. A party can be 7 guys hanging out and bullshitting, just sitting under the stars and drinking a beer. Sharing a moment together. A party can be what you make it.

>> No.16134183

>>16134170
>"this is who I am, these are the things I find funny, these are how I really feel about things"
>Gets arrested or handed over to the secret police
I shall never break the mask!

>> No.16134185

>>16134155
Your point is fair enough.
But >>16134139 is just a snide asshole.

>> No.16134201

>>16134170
Sharing deep bonds with other human beings is a profound experience, but whether you experience this or not has little to do with whether or not you go to parties, and not everyone has the same social needs as you. There's something to be said for genuinely enjoying periods of solitude, it's a dimension and experience of life in it's own right.

>> No.16134211

>>16134201
And that's fair enough. What I was more getting at is being able to be with a group of friends and be yourself in the public sphere of a party is a truly liberating experience. I don't think everyone has to love parties. Maybe, you only like them with close friends. Or, you only have been to one or two that you have enjoyed. But if you truly view parties with such incredible disdain and scorn as >>16134112 >>16134120 >>16134139 these people, then you are probably a very broken individual.

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>>16134211
>then you are probably a very broken individual.
>has to suck on a bottle of piss and do drugs to feel anything or even communicate
>being this dead inside and calling others broken

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>>16134222

>> No.16134286

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bg_GuSf9Xw4

>> No.16134906

>>16132687
based
always get high in the backroom/bathroom with the stoners. none of them give a shit.

>> No.16135989

>>16134128
nice larp bro.

>> No.16136002

>>16132600
No, "this dude" is the subject of the sentence

>> No.16136242

>Chad unhinged his jaw so as to expose his gaping gullet to the crowd of teenage girls. "Anybody wanna see my slam a beeros?" he declared, awesomely. The crowd was unanimous - they wanted to see Chas cram that beer down his throat. Chad began drinking. One sip after another, beer running out of his mouth gradually soaking his sheer white crew neck T. His parents had moved here from China. Memories came back to him glimpses, fragments - never whole moments. Half finished motorways stretching over farmland; metalworkers crowding open garage spaces; old men in their blue communist uniforms playing cards outside of noodle shops. "Dare me to shove this beer bong up my ass??" Chad roared to the crowd of decreasingly aged (and dressed) girls. The crowd was triumphant and naked. Chad shoved the beer bong into his ass and started chugging. Two men from his kendo club were sucking his dick. His dick was hard and shrivelled like a daikon. The beer bong in his ass exploded and gasoline began pouring everywhere, flooding the shag carpet and soaking the feet of his preteen guests. Chad pulled his eyes back: ME SOO SOWWY he uttered. The house went up in flames. It took seven days to scrub the scent of burning virgin flesh from those tiles that remained.

How'd I do?

>> No.16136622

>>16132526
It's way more boring than what's depicted in MTV shows.
Full of normies, obviously.

>> No.16136749

>>16134228
>if I post a photo of myself I refuted him hehehe
I'm not that anon but he is right, I hang out with several friends and I don't have to drug me, drink shit or whatever to feel something, are these the only things your friends do?

>> No.16136791

>>16132687
american parties sound horrid

>> No.16136837

>>16136242
Only unrealistic part is that the flesh that was burned was virgin flesh.

>> No.16137301

>>16132526
Why would you want to be surrounded by a bunch of normalfags?

>> No.16137302

>>16132526
Go ask the chads in /fit/.

>> No.16137309

>>16137302
If you think that /fit/ is full of chads then you've never actually browsed /fit/

>> No.16137325

>>16134170
Replace the word friends with NPC.
Honestly, i can, and have, made friends. The problem is, most are NPC, and mean. Some are nicer, but still NPC. I have yet to find a group of people who are not NPC.

>> No.16137329

I'll give it a try

Bob relinquished his jaw to reveal his great performance to the majority of teenage girls. "Everyone wants to visually perceive my potation slam?" he misinterpreted. The audience disaccorded - they wanted to visually perceive Bob put the potation around his neck. Bob commenced imbibing. One tractor after another, a potation from his mouth gradually inserted into his white T-neck. His parents had left here from China. Phrenic conceptions came back to him effulgent, fragmented - never full minutes. High-ascend roads over fields; metalworkers enter the garage open spaces; old men in blue communist uniforms playing cards outside the noodle shops. "Am I trepidacious to put this potation on my donkey?" Bob exploded against an astronomically immense number of older (and dressed) girls on the way down. The audience was stunned and unclad. Bob threw the donkey's potation on the donkey and commenced masticating. Two men from his kendo group suctioned his cock. His net was as hard and deep as a daikon. The error of his ass potation exploded and the petrol commenced to spill all over, dragging the shag days of inchoation and bowing down to their twelve guests. Bob rolled his ocular perceivers: HE'S VERY TREPIDACIOUS. The house went up in flames. It took seven days to spray the scent of unburned virgin flesh on the remaining hair.

>> No.16137348

>>16137329
schizo general? schizo general.

>> No.16137350

I used to play in a band and would go to parties when we got asked to play them. They suck, OP. A bunch of retards getting wasted and giggling about nothing. Just don't worry about it, man. It's not worth the trouble.

>> No.16137373

>>16132526
I'm about the 51st person to say this, but they are utterly overrated. The most important aspect to a realistic portrayal will be that every single person is either intoxicated, and enjoying themselves due to being blitzed, or sub-intoxicated, and inwardly wondering why they're even there. Don't go ham and have people fucking and sucking in every bedroom and closet having a blast. That stuff does happen, but it needs a dose of the pathetic. Make sure you have one or two loners who stay kind of sober and seem bored in the corners. Also make sure to end it with a noise complaint investigation.

>> No.16137388

>>16132526
I went to a lot of parties in high school/early 20s. They were fun but I don't think about them very often. You didn't miss out on much OP.

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>>16134139
>>16134120
>>16134112
>While you were out having fun with others, I was studying THE BLADE

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16137827

>>16137802
>Yeah bro getting fucked up and shitfaced is the epitome of life. Look at how successful I am

>> No.16137834

>>16132535
You're not sad, you're pathetic and depraved.

>> No.16137872

>>16137827
Lack of sunlight is bad for you faggot, go outside

>> No.16137881

for me parties are at their best when you're drunk and bonding with people you've never met and never will meet again. there's a certain social chaos that comes from a bunch of strangers getting blitzed together in a stranger's house. buncha weird characters and moment to moment flirting and anxious lines for the bathroom.

>> No.16138048

>>16132556
urine vited

>> No.16138139

>>16132526

Sometimes people fuck at a party, so why don't you go fuck yourself OP and write a story about that.

>> No.16138198

>>16137872
Weed and alcohol is bad for you faggot, reconsider your life

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>>16138198
I know, and I dont care. I dont go around the internet and preach about good health and good morals.

>> No.16138264

>>16138239
I do because I care but's like one poster said
>being this dead inside and calling others broken

>> No.16138275

>>16138264
But it's like*

>> No.16138305

>>16132526
I went to one once, drank too much, talked to people about Kaczynski, and apparently told people I was the first bisexual member of isis. Wouldn't do it again.

>> No.16138310

>>16138264
>>16138275
Whoah, you calling me broken? You dont have to worry about me, my good sir. I can see where you're coming from if you are talking about doing drugs ALL DAY EVERY DAY, but doing the right drugs only occasionally is really not that bad my dude