Script help

[Anonymous No.15950369]

I just wanna show people my script and get some pointers but don’t wanna show my family or friends. Can anyone help?

[Anonymous No.15950376]

>>15950369
Ask /tv/

[Anonymous No.15950384]

How is that cave man NOT thinking about a woman in that image?

[Anonymous No.15950391]

it’s not a tv script it’s a movie but it isn’t fleshed out in terms of set and blocking which is why I kinda consider it more of a creative writing piece

[Anonymous No.15950396]

>>15950384
It's not mating season

[Anonymous No.15950431]

>>15950369
>the agriculture Jew
kek

[Old Man No.15950439]

>>15950431
That's a good catch, I thought it was a crude menora

[Anonymous No.15950472]

>asks /lit/ for advice on a piece of writing
>uses random ass meme taken from ifunny bc 4chan won’t let you post without an image
>image gets more attention than your request
>mfw

[Anonymous No.15950505]

>>15950472
Why haven't you posted the script yet you fucking autistic faggot

[Anonymous No.15950563]

Fuck you want nigga a Pastebin link? I’m going to rape you four ways by friday

[Anonymous No.15950605]

>>15950391
If you try to dictate blocking in your script the producers will set it on fire

[Anonymous No.15950690]

>>15950384
It's such a fucking meme that men and primitive men spent time obsessively thinking about women because "muh dick muh reproduction". a total fabrication by postmodern neoliberal coomers who just want to make everything about sex. i guarantee you that the cavemen where thinking about wheels and shit far more than women.

i mean take my experience, i consider myself a pretty average guy. i was athletic in high school and i can remember spending way more time thinking about what i saw when i showered with my team mates than anything the girls ever showed us. in fact if i thought of women at all it was only to compare them with the bodies of my team mates and note how lacking in muscle and overall sculpted form compared to the guys'.

one of my team mates for baseball i remember had a really impressive body. like a goddamn Adonis tier physique. after i showered with him I'd spend the afternoon wondering how to train my body to be on that level. once when we were showering he caught me staring at all the little minute muscles on his biceps and abdomen and he went over what workouts to do to get them. then my glance strayed further down (he had a pretty massive penis but it was aesthetic as fuck too not clumsy but like, idk, graceful and uncircumcised and you couldn't help but look at it) and he smiled and joked 'fraid that's something that god just has to give you.'

the point is i spent more time thinking about that or future plans like whether i wanted to get into finance or biology than i did about women. women in general just aren't an interesting thing to think about. hell, I'd find myself thinking about AoE2 competitive strats rlbefore women.

[Anonymous No.15950699]

>>15950690
>I'd find myself thinking about AoE2 competitive strats

Based, FUCK women. I've never even seen a woman good at AOE2

[Anonymous No.15950714]

>>15950699
>Based, FUCK women. I've never even seen a woman good at AOE2

[Anonymous No.15950729]

>>15950690
you're unironically homosexual, anon.

[Anonymous No.15950756]

>>15950690
>once when we were showering he caught me staring at all the little minute muscles on his biceps and abdomen and he went over what workouts to do to get them. then my glance strayed further down (he had a pretty massive penis but it was aesthetic as fuck too not clumsy but like, idk, graceful and uncircumcised and you couldn't help but look at it) and he smiled and joked 'fraid that's something that god just has to give you.'
When will you publish your homoerotic fiction anon?

[Anonymous No.15950773]

>>15950690
if those cavemen thought like you the human race would be extinct lmao.

[Anonymous No.15950795]

>>15950472
You could have used a painting or a photo of a landmark. You brought it on yourself, OP.

[Anonymous No.15950816]

>>15950396
Human mating season spans 365 days a year.

[Anonymous No.15950823]

>>15950472
Lmao it cracks me up whenever this happens. My condolences OP

[Anonymous No.15950828]

>>15950369
Is it better to use an iframe?

[Anonymous No.15950833]

>>15950690
How old is this pasta?

[Anonymous No.15950847]

>>15950690
>anime poster
>homosexual tendencies
Of course.

[Anonymous No.15950852]

>>15950690
>in fact if i thought of women at all it was only to compare them with the bodies of my team mates and note how lacking in muscle and overall sculpted form compared to the guys'
Anon...

[Anonymous No.15950864]

>>15950852
He just needed to look towards the direction of 2D.

[Anonymous No.15951234]

>>15950690
Wew anon just say you're gay

[Anonymous No.15951516]

>>15950729
>>15950756
t. porn addicted r*dditors who seek to lower everything down to carnal crudity instead of being able to contemplate the maximal majesty of the human figure that the male form alone can attain

that anon is an aristocrat of the spirit. A Roman among Greeks.

[Anonymous No.15951528]

>>15951516
So a bunch of fags

[Anonymous No.15951565]

>>15950690
Kys faggot

[Anonymous No.15952419]

>>15950369
I like that one image about the muscular caveman thinking about abstract, wish I saved it

[Anonymous No.15952579]

>>15951516
"The male form is height of aesthetics" is the gayest opinion anyone could have

[Anonymous No.15952617]

>>15951516
>defending an animefag after he meticulously described the shape of the penis of his friend while they were showering together

[Anonymous No.15952738]

>>15950816
its before the julian calendar incel. ceaser specifically made the calender to line up with rhe make mating season to increase the taxable population and army.

[Anonymous No.15952776]

>>15950690
nice pasta bro

[Anonymous No.15953068]

>>15952738
Stop typing, you fat-fingered brainlet. I don't want to make out what the fuck you're trying to spell out.

[Anonymous No.15953098]

Is there a reason OP isn't posting his screenplay here? We aren't his family or friends

[Anonymous No.15953199]

>>15951516
>the maximal majesty of the human figure that the male form alone can attain
>that anon is an aristocrat of the spirit. A Roman among Greeks.
That doesn't exclude homo-eroticism, it invites it. And that's a good thing.

[Anonymous No.15953300]

>>15950472
>faggot posts thread on /lit/ asking for advice
>stubbornly refuses to post anything which might help with advice
>blames gay picture he posted to begin with
Give us a quick rundown of the synopsis along with an excerpt that you believe showcases your best work or your worst work or stfu and let us continue debating cavemen sex lives.

[Anonymous No.15954885]

>>15951516
So many stupid alliterations. Carnal crudity, maximal majesty

[Anonymous No.15955045]

>>15950690
This got gay really fast.

[Anonymous No.15955099]

>>15950369

Post the first page of the script. That should be enough for us to see if you're serious.

[Anonymous No.15955113]

>>15950472
Lol!

[Anonymous No.15955169]

>>15950690
Not sure whether this is the right board for your coming out but congratz. Must been hard living in the closet.

[Anonymous No.15955175]

>>15950472
>uses an image not related to request but enough to invite a discussion
>probably starts all the homo talk himself
I'd you got what you asked for.

[Anonymous No.15955207]

haha cavemens

[Anonymous No.15955221]

>>15950690
fc into ca bro

[Anonymous No.15956362]

>>15952579
If you've never found the male form attractive, I feel sorry for you. There's more to life than qt anime girls, or sucking your priest's cock and thinking that finding men even remotely attractive will send you straight to hell. Please don't tell me you're into lesbian porn because it has no dicks.

[Anonymous No.15956392]

>>15950690
>'fraid that's something that [G]od just has to give you

If digits this is a meme now

[Anonymous No.15957325]

>>15950729
IT'S NOT HOMOSEXUAL IT'S FAGGOT.

fag

[Anonymous No.15957573]

>>15950369
I would like to read it anon

[Anonymous No.15957999]

>>15950690
Wrong board dumbass
>>>/fit/

[Anonymous No.15958140]

>>15950690
t. Mishima

[Anonymous No.15958431]

>>15950431
>>15950439
Agriculture and civilization were not kickstarted by simple humans, without any external influence.

[Anonymous No.15959375]

>>15958431
Stone tools were first used 2~4 million years ago. Do you really think that during all that time, (proto-)humans wouldn't have figured out at some point that you can bury seeds and get plants? And that if you can grow plants, you can settle in a place instead of having to continuously travel? And that if you settle, you can/have to create more advanced social structures?

[Anonymous No.15959440]

>>15950472
shoulda posted yer script then ya daft cunt

[Anonymous No.15959619]

>>15950690
nigga you gay

[Anonymous No.15959786]

>>15950690
Lol good post

[Anonymous No.15959821]

>>15950690
you are gay anon. good post though.

[Anonymous No.15959853]

>>15950369
show script or btfo OP

[Anonymous No.15959987]

>>15950690
lmao, thanks anon.
I really enjoyed your short story.

[Anonymous No.15960151]

>>15950690
Based but homosexual

[Anonymous No.15961311]

>>15956362
I only like seeing dick when it's going into a woman. That other guy who talks about showering with guys like it's a stroll through a high-end bakery-- yeah he's a flaming faggot, and very imbalanced: 100% dick and muscles, 0% female body. Get your shit together, weeb-poster.

[Anonymous No.15961321]

>>15956362
Also,
>There's more to life than qt anime girls, or sucking your priest's cock
Wew, projecting this hard are we?

[Anonymous No.15961349]

>>15956362
There's nothing wrong with finding the male form attractive, but you have to admit that it's gay

[Anonymous No.15962316]

>>15950690
bassed /litfit/

[Anonymous No.15962720]

>>15959375
except according to the record agriculture only started 12k years ago, when aliens engineered us

[Anonymous No.15964243]

>>15950690
Purely aesthetic homosexuals idealizing the platonic ideal of the male body are the only homos I'll ever respect. You will never convince bodybuilding fag that woman aren't gay. I respect that.