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14552433 No.14552433 [Reply] [Original]

>I have tried to write Paradise

>Do not move
>Let the wind speak
>that is paradise.

>Let the Gods forgive what I
>have made
>Let those I love try to forgive
>what I have made.
:'(

>> No.14552441

>>14552433
Nigga this shit don't rhyme

>> No.14552457

>>14552433
>The poem doesn't rhyme
Yeah there's a word for that its called a random bunch of fucking words lol This is not poetry!!! When will you learn????

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14552476

>>14552433
if it doesn't rhyme, I'm not wasting my time.

>> No.14552486

>>14552433
>to be men, not destroyers