/lit/ - Literature

[Anonymous No.10849714]

It’s that time again.

[Anonymous No.10849721]

Radiance.

[Anonymous No.10849722]

Fuck that sucks

[Anonymous No.10849726]

>>10849722

Ain’t seen nothin’ yet

[Anonymous No.10849732]

Behold

[Anonymous No.10849739]

Praise emoji goes here

[Anonymous No.10849757]

[Anonymous No.10849802]

I'm so glad I'll actually be held to a high standard if I ever write (being a white man) instead of been treated like a child

[Anonymous No.10849812]

>>10849714
top kek, i can't tell if this is done by you guys or if it's from the actual book

[Anonymous No.10849825]

>>10849812

Real as can be. I did put a parody on Amazon though, she’s way too easy too imitate

[Anonymous No.10849880]

>>10849726
This one is redpilled af, idk why people think she sucks

[Anonymous No.10849895]

>>10849714
she isn't even bad. You guys just don't appreciate her because yall are virgins

[Anonymous No.10849903]

>>10849895
it's macaroni art tier

[Anonymous No.10849912]

[Anonymous No.10849918]

real or fake?

[Anonymous No.10849920]

>>10849714
please kill me if this is poetry now

[Anonymous No.10849928]

>>10849920

Number one bestseller

[Anonymous No.10849976]

>>10849928
lol, i guess this one makes sense if she accomplishes that by leaving the bar this low

[Anonymous No.10849981]

>>10849714
this looks tumblr tier.

[Anonymous No.10849986]

[Anonymous No.10849990]

>>10849981

Rupi Kaur’s the physical manifestation of tumblr. Well, instagram technically.

[Anonymous No.10849999]

>>10849918
real

[Anonymous No.10850001]

https://thebaffler.com/latest/instapoetry-roberts

[Anonymous No.10850010]

>>10850001
I get it because she is a whore filled with men. Fucking hilarious.

[Anonymous No.10850013]

>>10849825
lewd

[Anonymous No.10850018]

A challenger appears.

[Anonymous No.10850045]

>>10849714
Jesus Christ, this one is just stupid.
>>10849721
Oh Rupi, you are so clever, I bet you are realy proud of yourself.
>>10849726
Gay and retarded. Original sin BS btfo
>>10849732
I like that Rupi is so full of herself that she needs to tell the world she is full of herself. Truly, this is the generation that will end humanity.
>>10849739
I would roast this one... But this one is okay. Gay. But okay.
>>10849757
What does she mean by this? Is Rupi talking about pro-life people or about Muhammed? Probably the first because I bet she ignores brown people's mistakes because they are brown.
>>10849825
She is a master in the art of saying a lot but nothing at the same time. Fucking awfull Rupi, just awfull this one.
>>10849912
This one is okay. I kinda like it even.
>>10849918
I bet this one is real.
>>10849928
I actualy like this one. Could be better writen, but the I like the message. Finaly Rupi talking some sense.
>>10849986
Fuck. You fucked up at the ending. Loneliness is a sign you need of yourself? Realy Rupi? Fuck you, you fucked up at the ending.
>>10850001
Fuck off Rupi.
>>10850018
11/10, literary master piece.

The worst is that Milk&Honey do have some cool messages, if they weren't so awfully written. In the end, I can only say: Rupi... Stop.

[Anonymous No.10850057]

>>10850045
the messages are incredibly boring
>ladies are good
>bf cheated on me :-(
>feminism!
she hasn't said anything new in any of the four-line simplistic bullshit "poems" she's written. so many people deal with one or all of these themes while actually contributing something substantial

[Anonymous No.10850061]

>>10850045

Riffing on her feels like fishing with dynamite, I love it.

[Anonymous No.10850070]

[Anonymous No.10850076]

>>10850057
I personaly like it, tho yeah, when she starts with "muh bf" gets boring. Probably because they are awfully written more than usual.
>>10850061
It's the only way she will grow up from her chieldish ways and awfull writting.

[Anonymous No.10850077]

>>10849714
At first I thought this was made by the little girl who made the Tiger poem

[Anonymous No.10850083]

>>10850070
feet

[Anonymous No.10850093]

>>10849825
Lavos plz go

[Anonymous No.10850096]

>>10850077
The Tiger poem is a literary master piece in comparisson to Rupi self-masturbation with her Twitter poem's.
The first is a kid being exploring her limited world view (not in the negative sense) and working her way with to write at least a cute short poem.
The second is a supposed grown up woman with a awfull writting and a self-pandering pseudo-intelectual garbage. Rupi can do much better, but the shit she is publishing and the people that are consuming aren't helping her to develop her style by praising the majorly garbage in the books (she does sometimes write okay stuff)

[Anonymous No.10850101]

[Anonymous No.10850108]

>>10850096
Agreed

[Anonymous No.10850109]

>>10850076

It's not really in her self interest to grow up. It'd be like lighting a stack of money on fire, Nolan style.

[Anonymous No.10850111]

i was
born
in a small
village

i was just a
child
when soldiers came

[Anonymous No.10850112]

>>10850045
>What does she mean by this? Is Rupi talking about pro-life people or about Muhammed? Probably the first because I bet she ignores brown people's mistakes because they are brown.

Let's just agree that all religion is terrible and call it a day

[Anonymous No.10850114]

>>10850112
Some religions are more terrible than others.

[Anonymous No.10850120]

god i hate
modern "poems"
theyre not really poetic they
just say shit normally
but
space it out on arbitrarily selected
lines
so it looks profound and deep

[Anonymous No.10850121]

>>10850114
You're right, now that I think about it's mostly the abrahamic ones that are shit. Also hinduism seems pretty fucked too. All aboard the buddhism train I guess.

[Anonymous No.10850126]

>>10850121
>

[Anonymous No.10850127]

>>10850121
You misunderstand me.

White religions = fine.
Other religions = shit.

Look into your heart. You know it to be true.

[Anonymous No.10850132]

>>10850126
Ahh fuck, I can't believe they've done this

[Anonymous No.10850150]

>>10850132

Grim shit.

>>10850109

kek

[Anonymous No.10850158]

>>10850109
Her self interest is less important than mine. I wish to see her full potencial, not her twitter posts in book format.
>>10850111
Fuck...
>>10850132
Religions itself are meaninless, is the followers actions that will define said religion value. Also, didn't you knew about buddhist terrorism? It's on the rise in one part of Asia, just like Hinduism is getting more radical in India thx to chauvinistic narratives.

[Anonymous No.10850202]

I propose a new term--Lilalo: anything that carries the essential sentiment of Live, Laugh, Love.

Never before have I read any of these poems. Knowing they are some of the best selling contemporary poems, I weep. I am devastated. What hope can exist for the English language when it's range of expression has somehow been condensed to the space between Rupi Kuar and Kendrick Lamar?

[Anonymous No.10850220]

>>10850158

Fair enough. I can't even imagine what an evolved version of her output would look like. Maybe it'd even blow me away.

[Anonymous No.10850235]

>>10850202

Fun fact: Rupi plagiarized an equally talentless hack named Nayyirah Waheed. This is one of Nayyirah.

>>10850220

Ruby Coen for new instapoet queen.

[Anonymous No.10850257]

Guys I came up with an idea.
Lets create faux rupi kaur "poems" with obnoxious and off-putting content and dissipiate them in the web.
Like why not. They seem to be easy to imitate.

[Anonymous No.10850259]

>>10850235

Actually, I take it back, Rupi Kaur is slightly more talentless than Nayyirah.

[Anonymous No.10850285]

>>10850235
Holy shiet, thats why I don't venture into poetry: I cant write shit.
>>10850257
I support this idea.

[Anonymous No.10850305]

>>10850235

I wonder what would happen if the two of them touched.

[Anonymous No.10850320]

>>10850305

I’m mildly retarded: Ruby Coen’s a parody right? Or does Rupi’s intern hate her

>>10850235

That’s fucking great

[Anonymous No.10850343]

I don't know who this Rupi chap is, but the quotes of him posted here seems to range from shit to fucking shit in quality.

[Anonymous No.10850357]

[Anonymous No.10850378]

>>10850357
wtf, that sounds rapey

[Anonymous No.10850381]

>>10850343
Reminder that Rupi is short for Rupert.

[Anonymous No.10850389]

>>10850357

That's a parody. So are the ones in black.

[Anonymous No.10850436]

i dont know about her poetry but i' fuck the shit out of her, god damn she makes my dick hard hnnnnng

[Anonymous No.10850445]

>>10850436
how much hair would make you reconsider?

[Anonymous No.10850473]

>>10850070
Tfw no Dom gf with cute feet

[Anonymous No.10850481]

>>10850111
Such
LUUUUUST

[Anonymous No.10850493]

[Anonymous No.10850523]

[Anonymous No.10850544]

>>10850493
lost

[Anonymous No.10850548]

>>10850045
>What does she mean by this? Is Rupi talking about pro-life people or about Muhammed? Probably the first because I bet she ignores brown people's mistakes because they are brown.
Fuck, you’re daft.

[Anonymous No.10850663]

>>10850523
Oh god, keep going.

[Anonymous No.10850777]

>>10850101
The problem I get is she's not flexing. The collection reads like the notes app of someone who has the potential to be talented--If she were to put some work in to string together something with depth and cohesion.

These aren't poems. These are at their best fragments which, if strung together, have the potential to become poetry. At their worst, they're platitudes and limping husks of assertions.

[Anonymous No.10850791]

>>10849714
my turn
>what is a bird
>soaring high as can be
>yet still eating worms
i'll take my Oscar now

[Anonymous No.10850866]

>>10850777
>someone who has the potential to be talented
gtfo

[Anonymous No.10850881]

>>10850866
Again with the knee-jerk meme-ing. How about you develop your own sense of critical thinking?

It cannot be denied that the pun on "spine" is the beginning of a potential extended metaphor. There is a seed of cleverness here, albeit a minimal clearly half-assed amount.

I don't know, maybe I'm just feeling contrarian tonight.

[Anonymous No.10850885]

>>10850777
>have the potential to become poetry
m8 like really read some real poetry first m8

[Anonymous No.10850933]

>>10849714
you took
me from my meadow
to play
in your forest

when
you let go
i was
lost
from you and
from me

1 million dollars please!

[Anonymous No.10850941]

J. J. Abrams
walking down the street
look to the skies
not at your feet

[Anonymous No.10850962]

a fruit in the tree
is no better than
a baby
in the womb

[Anonymous No.10850979]

>>10850001
Great article. Actually takes a lot of the criticism of Kaur commonly seen on this board and makes it more... eloquent.

[Anonymous No.10851005]

>>10850001
this one has to be fake, right? It's a rip off of a john green quote ffs

[Anonymous No.10851070]

>tfw half this thread probably considers William Carlos Williams good

[Anonymous No.10851233]

I like reading her poems because it makes me feel like the garbage I write when I'm feeling emo is good enough to be sold in a book, but I know it would never sell because I have a dick.

[Anonymous No.10851255]

>>10851233
it's the current year, just put a skirt on

[Anonymous No.10851263]

>>10851233
>>10851255
and post a pic in your pajamas with shit in them on instagram

[Anonymous No.10851290]

>>10850881
She lacks potential because she lacks any insight. Her poetry is devoid of any real meaning, it's just telling women they don't need to change and everyone else is wrong. No analysis into the individual whatsoever.

[Anonymous No.10851315]

>>10851255
>>10851263
I don't like skirts and I don't own pajamas, but I could definitely shit in my clothes if it would make me famous.

[Anonymous No.10851351]

>>10849739
but this is just people who don't deserve love wasting their souls on false ties repeatedly until they're desensitized and lose their capacity for entanglement with the Other. there's nothing noble about it, the human heart does break, when it does the person usually dies within a few decades, loses their mind or becomes a husk

[Anonymous No.10851521]

>>10850493
>>10850523
Fucking kek
>>10850941
The fact that this is better written than Rupi raises concern.

[Anonymous No.10851839]

>>10849739
I like this picture though

[Anonymous No.10851866]

[Anonymous No.10851891]

>>10849903
i'm not saying she's any good, because she isn't, but you lot dislike her for the wrong reasons

[Anonymous No.10851897]

will one of you post one of your own poems for reference

[Anonymous No.10851904]

>>10851891
tf are the right reasons?

[Anonymous No.10851914]

>>10851897
OF Mans First Disobedience, and the Fruit
Of that Forbidden Tree, whose mortal tast
Brought Death into the World, and all our woe,
With loss of Eden, till one greater Man
Restore us, and regain the blissful Seat,
Sing Heav'nly Muse, that on the secret top
Of Oreb, or of Sinai, didst inspire
That Shepherd, who first taught the chosen Seed,
In the Beginning how the Heav'ns and Earth
Rose out of Chaos: Or if Sion Hill
Delight thee more, and Siloa's Brook that flow'd
Fast by the Oracle of God; I thence
Invoke thy aid to my adventrous Song,
That with no middle flight intends to soar
Above th' Aonian Mount, while it pursues
Things unattempted yet in Prose or Rhime.

[Anonymous No.10851922]

>>10851914
not that moribund academic concoction

[Anonymous No.10851969]

>>10850111

[Anonymous No.10852052]

>>10849739
you mean the conscience, mental perception.
if the heart shattered you'd die almost immediately.

this is simply a telling of how feeble their mind is.

[Anonymous No.10852125]

>>10850202
Kendrick is a lot better than this shit

[Anonymous No.10852139]

>>10850436
She smells like curry poo. Not to mention her man hands

[Anonymous No.10852143]

>>10849714

Oh yeah. Reminded me to add her to my 4chanx filters. Thanks for that OP.

/Rupi/i;boards:lit

[Anonymous No.10852156]

>>10849895
>You don't like this poem because it does not appeal to your personal lived experiences of being virgins
This isn't an argument that the poetry is good. This is just an argument that the art is less universal in nature than it could be.

[Anonymous No.10852171]

>>10850257

[Anonymous No.10852201]

>>10849714
It's like Shel Silverstein with brain damage.

[Anonymous No.10852209]

>>10851914
If I wanted to praise Jesus I'd read the bible. What does your poem add in value over that?

[Anonymous No.10852243]

>>10851897
Wrists interlocked
Off-hands armed
A dance of death
Winner gets my soul

An analytical mind
familiar with formalities
Quick to read
Quick to judge

A hardened heart
No stranger to pain
Willing to bleed
Willing to martyr

Neither heroes
Nor villains
Just two being
claiming what's theirs

[Anonymous No.10852254]

>>10852243
see look. you're using the 's' sound too much in your first stanza

[Anonymous No.10852266]

>>10852254
But 's' is one of my top 5 favorite sounds

[Anonymous No.10852273]

>>10852266
the art of poetry consists in knowing exactly how to manipulate the letter s

[Anonymous No.10852278]

>>10852273
How would you rewrite the first stanza for reference then? Thinking about it more I think I did use it too much.

[Anonymous No.10852291]

[Anonymous No.10852312]

>>10852278
i couldn't really answer, i write in a very different style.

[Anonymous No.10852325]

>>10851914
How can you beat this?

[Anonymous No.10852340]

grupi
write sad
poe
try

[Anonymous No.10852343]

>>10852325
by being homer, shakespeare, or a dozen other poets.

[Anonymous No.10852357]

>>10852343
Gotta agree with this, but the passage about ADAM and EVE fucking in the Garden and Catholics being shriveled hypocrites is one of my favorite in all blank verse

[Anonymous No.10852374]

>>10852357
it's very eloquent but the whole poem has none of the sublimity that you're supposed to get from an epic. or that's my thought.

[Anonymous No.10852375]

[Anonymous No.10852385]

listen if you don't have feminist sympathies you're probably not a poet

[Anonymous No.10852393]

>>10849721
jaden smith can write better poems

[Anonymous No.10852402]

>>10852052
The poem is shit, but this response is shit too.
>>>/r/iflscience

[Anonymous No.10852403]

>>10849918
I kekd at that blank space

[Anonymous No.10852410]

can you imagine being this obsessed with a mediocre poet

[Anonymous No.10852427]

>>10852402
i suppose you have something better then?

[Anonymous No.10852429]

>>10852374
This said unanimous, and other Rites
Observing none, but adoration pure
Which God likes best, into their inmost bower
Handed they went; and eas'd the putting off
These troublesome disguises which we wear,
Straight side by side were laid, nor turned I weene
ADAM from his fair Spouse, nor Eve the Rites
Mysterious of connubial Love refus'd:
Whatever Hypocrites austerely talk
of puritie and place and innocence,
Defaming as impure what God declares
Pure, and commands to some, leaves free to all.
Our Maker bids increase, who bids abstain
But our Destroyer, foe to God and Man?
Haile wedded Love, mysterious Law, true source
of human ofspring, sole proprietie,
In Paradise of all things common else.
By thee adulterous lust was driv'n from men
Among the bestial herds to range, by thee
Founded in Reason, Loyal, Just, and Pure,
Relations dear, and all the Charities
Of Father, Son, and Brother first were known.
Farr be it, that I should write thee sin or blame
Or think thee unbefitting holiest place,
Perpetual Fountain of Domestic sweets,
Whose Bed is undefil'd and chast pronounc't,
Present, or past, as Saints and Patriarchs us'd.
Here Love his golden shaft imploies, here lights
His constant Lamp, and waves his purple wings,
Reigns here and revels; not in the bought smile
Of Harlots, loveless, joyless, unindeard,
Casual fruition, nor in Court Amours
Mixt Dance, or wanton Mask, or Midnight Bal,
Or Serenate, which the starv'd Lover sings
To his proud fair, best quitted with disdain.
These lulld by Nightingales imbracing slept,
And on their naked limbs the flourie roof
Showerd Roses, which the Morn repair'd. Sleep on,
Blest pair, and O yet happiness if ye seek
No happier state, and know to know no more.

[Anonymous No.10852436]

>>10852410
That's what happens when you try your hardest to impress dead people and tryhards with prose instead of writing something people will actually care about.

[Anonymous No.10852452]

>>10852436
I bet you keep up with every superhero and star wars movie

[Anonymous No.10852462]

>>10852452
No but I bet you have so you can compare every single one to citizen cane.

[Anonymous No.10852465]

i took a crap
my exit was wide
once it was through
it clogged the loo

[Anonymous No.10852470]

>>10852462
>I know you are but what am I

[Anonymous No.10852472]

>>10852465
unironically better than anything "Poo-pi in the Loo-pi" Kaur has ever written

[Anonymous No.10852507]

>>10852470
I'm modern art and you're cave paintings. Hate to break it to you, but your dated standards of what constitutes greatness is the result of pop culture for people who had no idea how toilet paper works. You have no true measure of greatness, just relative basis on what people read simply because TV wasn't invented yet.

[Anonymous No.10852509]

>>10852429
often in dream i chase a fleeing man,
eager to catch and kill him if i can;
yet there's no finish, struggle how we may:
i cannot reach him, nor he get away.

[Anonymous No.10852513]

i woke up
and saw the shape

of your face
in the creases of the cold sheets
good morning

[Anonymous No.10852515]

>>10852507
the cave paintings are better than any modern art picasso said

[Anonymous No.10852538]

>>10852515
And now he's fucking dead. Who's smart now?

[Anonymous No.10852576]

>>10852538
picasso will never cease to live

[Anonymous No.10852598]

>>10852576
If I can't see him he's gone.

[Anonymous No.10852606]

>>10852291
Underrated.

[Anonymous No.10852611]

>>10852598
>he is gone
>yet decades later you are talking about him

[Anonymous No.10852628]

>>10852598
where's your mum can you see her
this could turn tragic

[Anonymous No.10852635]

>>10852611
That is how history works, yes. His mark was left but it's still simply a marker. It's time to move on. He set a nice foundation but nobody wants to waste their time with traced images from some child with trace paper and the markers that are a little more expensive from Target.

[Anonymous No.10852666]

>>10852375
I like it

[Anonymous No.10853801]

>>10849721
I don't need to
fall
at your
Feet
Just cause you
Cut
Me to the bone

[Anonymous No.10853915]

wow raerly maed me thignk

[Anonymous No.10853920]

Can she even rhyme?

[Anonymous No.10854079]

This is my intro to her and at once I imagine this is what Shel Silverstein's diary looks like, only much more interesting and artful

[Anonymous No.10855067]

i ate a bag
of grapes
so i could
put
the bag on my
head
but grape bags have
holes

[Anonymous No.10855083]

got the stiffy uh
lil dicky uh
got blicky uh
law can’t stop me uh
cum on your kitty uh
cum on a kitty uh

[Anonymous No.10856284]

>>10850933
This is actually pretty good

[Anonymous No.10856296]

>>10855067
Kek, got a real good laugh out of this one.

[Anonymous No.10856346]

Quit making fun of Pupi

[Anonymous No.10856368]

>>10856346
I mean, I like reading about femininity too, but Im sure you could find something better than this

[Anonymous No.10856402]

>>10856346

Imagine being this much of a loser that you are so moved by elementary observational tripe that you take the time to log-on to an account for people who fancy themselves literary critics but don't have the stomach or intelligence for academia and pen this gushing review so these other people on the internet can know how "moved" you are. SAD!

[Anonymous No.10856497]

please

[Anonymous No.10856521]

>>10850101
Is that a fucking wordplay? In my Rupi? Get the fuck out with that poetry fag shit

[Anonymous No.10856535]

>>10849928
Doesn't really mean much though does it. Number one bestselling music, movies and novels aren't indicative of what the medium is at the moment.

[Anonymous No.10856635]

>>10856346
he sorta provides the key for this paragraph in the opening line doesn't he? he's so desperate to have an emotional experience but all he can do is wrap everything he feels in pretty words. it's so anxious and self-conscious.

>This collection, while in many ways simple, addresses some of the darkest and most hopeful matters of the human heart.

what does this even mean? it sounds like the abstract for a whitepaper on cardiology. and why can't 'matters of the heart' be simple?

fucking pseuds make me angry

[Anonymous No.10856715]

poop
in my pants
it runs
like i should

[Anonymous No.10856804]

>>10856346
fucking chinks

[Anonymous No.10856817]

>>10849721
you know the point trying to be made is actually pretty proper but it's just worded in what seems the absolute worst way possible.

[Anonymous No.10856850]

>>10856346
>it slayed all my emotions, my feminist desires, and my love for vulnerable writing
that is the gayest thing I have ever read
and I am gay

[Anonymous No.10856885]

>the state of modern """"""poetry"""""""""

[Anonymous No.10856889]

>>10851897
??? Are you not seeing all the satire in the thread?

[Anonymous No.10856914]

Holy shit /lit/ why did I toss all my shitty poetry I wrote when i was 14? I could have made a killing off it.

Honestly who in the world couldn’t write “poetry” of this caliber if they tried? Anybody could do this shit if they thought about it for ten seconds.

[Anonymous No.10856916]

[Anonymous No.10856934]

>>10856916
Masterwork of the ages

[Anonymous No.10856943]

[Anonymous No.10857039]

[Anonymous No.10857094]

>>10849714
I wish she'd eat the fucking thorns too

[Anonymous No.10857127]

>>10850070
How about look in the pusy

[Anonymous No.10857685]

>>10850235
this one is actually feels inducing :(

[Anonymous No.10857978]

>>10849757
anti abortionists BTFO

[Anonymous No.10858092]

>>10849714
I read "I ate them" like it was Anakin talking about sand people.

[Anonymous No.10858207]

>>10852291
the drawing made me lose it

[Anonymous No.10858775]

>>10851969
Beautiful, thank you anon.

[Anonymous No.10858906]

>>10849739
From a structural point of view, putting a broken thing back together a bunch is going to leave you with some weak-ass materials. Unless she's annealing it or something.

[Anonymous No.10858911]

>>10849986
What the fuck? I'm lonely, I need anybody but myself.

[Anonymous No.10858923]

>>10850493
Absolutely histerical

[Anonymous No.10858945]

the actual poems are really good. lemme try im not so good but

its been so long
how could i forget
i dont need to see
to know what love begets
my heart goes out
received or not
because i love you
itll be war well fought

[Anonymous No.10858949]

>>10858945
ya know what it'd sound better if it was just "because i love" actually

[Anonymous No.10859083]

>>10849999
"kek"

[Anonymous No.10859089]

>>10850126
fuck off kike you're not going to trick me into loving muslims

[Anonymous No.10859124]

>>10858945
Is there a form to this I haven't picked up on

[Anonymous No.10859136]

>>10856346
>marinating in your feelings

[Anonymous No.10859138]

>>10859124
idk dude i'm just writing

when it comes to mind
i write and find
in the words, what was always mine
its not so hard, to be a bard
and show myself
like a greeting card

[Anonymous No.10859145]

>>10849739
Whoa...

[Anonymous No.10859158]

>>10859124
Fuck, that was good.

[Anonymous No.10859445]

>>10856943
gold

[Anonymous No.10859544]

>>10850436
I'd cum over her hairy hands

>>10852139
This will change if she changes diet

[Anonymous No.10860463]

A man
Looked at
My butt
Today

Fifteen years
Without bail

[Anonymous No.10860484]

Poets write before they die; some are so shite,
That they should die before they fucking write.
S.T.C

[Anonymous No.10860508]

>>10858945
theyre not

[Anonymous No.10860515]

>>10851897
sorry dont write in eng

[Anonymous No.10860588]

>>10856943
kek I fucking love EndlessJess

[Anonymous No.10860616]

lol this was too easy

[Anonymous No.10860653]

>>10860616

Eve had to hide
her privates with plants
now everybody
look at my pants

[Anonymous No.10861770]

>>10856346

Nice one, Punchy.

[Anonymous No.10861817]

It's uncanny how Trumpian she sounds.

[Anonymous No.10861840]

In a way I have to admire this bitch's absolute confidence in dogshit poems

[Anonymous No.10862573]

>>10852243
not bad but

"A hardened heart
No stranger to pain
Willing to bleed
Willing to martyr"

is brutally childish

[Anonymous No.10862655]

>>10850436
Where's her forehead?

[Anonymous No.10862689]

>>10851897
Fuck off. I don't need to be a chef to know I'm being served shit.

[Anonymous No.10862706]

>>10862689
poets write poetry for other poets

[Anonymous No.10862765]

I actually went to one of her shows

[Anonymous No.10864200]

>>10851005
I knew it sounded familiar
fucking hell this better be fake

[Anonymous No.10864219]

>>10850045
This is either a misplaced shitpost or a complete fucktard talking

In either case please lurk more.

[Anonymous No.10864225]

Another dream, passing blankly
Another morning, boring frankly
I wish I'd wake up, next to you
Or someone
I'm tired of being a fool
Of being nothing