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7959553 No.7959553 [Reply] [Original]

I wrote this recently. How is it? Give it a chance. Picks up halfway through.

>> No.7959559

The sentences are a bit short and sharp but the grammar is decent enough to understand. To be honest I liked the first half more, I'm not one for plea endings.

>> No.7959564

Did you paint the cover yourself or asked they guy who made it if you can use it? It's pretty cool.

Also you didn't post any links to the book expecting people to know were to get it.

>> No.7959565

I just marathoned the first two pages and realised that it just isn't for me.

>> No.7959567

>>7959553
>Picks up halfway through

You're certainly right about that. And before I knew it, it was over

>> No.7959577

Stop samefagging. Link to the book?

>> No.7959578

>Small towns give the sense of lasting peace, and the idea that you can be contempt with whatever life you have.

Nigga.

>> No.7959591

>>7959553
Why the book cover man? Do you wanna give me nightmares?

>> No.7959603

Stop samefagging no one has read your book.
And it's illegal to use just any picture you find on the internet to put as the book cover. It's copyright infringment.

>> No.7959609

>muh edgy horror novel

no thanks senpai

>> No.7959612

Bump. Not terrible OP

>> No.7959633

>>7959553
Use the critique thread OP.

Also, am I missing something?
What the fuck are you people even reading, there's no text or link anywhere.

>> No.7959637
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7959637

How is highschool going OP? But I guess if you only want money you are on the right path.

>> No.7959641

This thread is pathetic and full of samefag. Sage

>> No.7959642

>I am a student in Ontario. I was born 25/09/98. I like writing, and like to consider that I'm fairly good. For some reason I hate reading, so it makes it a real chore when I need to read over my work, and edit it.

>>7959633
reverse image search m9

>> No.7959644
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7959644

>being underaged

>> No.7959655

>>7959633
>What the fuck are you people reading
It's OP samefagging no one has read it.

>> No.7959658

>>7959655
>11 IPs

I haven't read that shit but it's not only samefagging.

>> No.7959660

>>7959655
>>7959633
What is wrong with you dumb niggers. You're on a board that's dedicated to READING.

Fucking google "Ganama Book." Holy shit.

>> No.7959666

>>7959658
Yes it is. There was no link to he book in the OP. The first reply was made three minutes later. You expect in that time someone reverse image searched the cover and name, bought the book, read it and commented.

>> No.7959670

>>7959666
My comment wasn't about the book though. I'm not going to track down and read some losers novel

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>>7959660
And there we have it. OP raging. more samefagging.

No one would be this mad about the book other than OP. Thanks for the laugh.

>> No.7959672

>>7959666
Nice trips
Here you go, found it by reverse image search
https://www.smashwords com/books/view/631467

>> No.7959676

I'm really sorry that you wrote a whole 90 pages of this OP
It isn't good. The prose is very bad.
Try again when you're older and have read more.

>> No.7959677

ITT: people who have never written a novel offer their worthless opinions.

>> No.7959681

>>7959672
>whoring out your shitty novel for a payment of zero dollars

>> No.7959682

Book

http://www.amazon.ca/Ganama-Leveles-ebook/dp/B01ELRE9ZE?ie=UTF8&keywords=ganama&qid=1461503232&ref_=sr_1_1&sr=8-1

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>>7959682
wtf are you doing OP

>> No.7959694

>>7959689
>8 pages for $4

>> No.7959703

OP why do you have a subreddit that only you post in? Is this all some kind of obscure joke?

>> No.7959722

>>7959689
I gotta make money some how. I don't think that something I put effort into should be unavailable to people because they can't afford it.

>> No.7959726

>>7959703
I try to keep the two separate. Subreddit is more of a blog. Notice how Ganama isn't on it?

>> No.7959744

>>7959726

I haven't read your book and I'm not going to but I would bet money that it is bad (as the vast majority of books are bad). Some advice:

1. Get better at writing (statistically i am confident about this one).
2. Be older than 17.
3. Pay for PR or find an agent or something don't contrive 4chan threads kid :(

>> No.7959750

>>7959722
>I gotta make money some how.
You do realise $0 = no money right? Charge $1 or something at least, Jesus!

>> No.7959758

The cover's really spooky but I thought the main arc had an uplifting message to it. Truly a tour de force.

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7959762

>>7959750
I raised the price of my joke book $200 recently.

>> No.7959764

>>7959744
Check it out. It's free, and will only take a few hours to read.

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>>7959762
It's also the 16th banking ebook

>> No.7959796

You seem like a typical annoying teenager to be honest. Stick to reddit

>> No.7960204

>>7959660
>Fucking google "Ganama Book." Holy shit.
Fun fact, your post contains the very first mention of the word "Ganama" itt.
You retard.

>> No.7960722

>>7960204
It was written in the OP image. Not him btw.