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22174473 No.22174473 [Reply] [Original]

>Author includes sex scenes
They are never necessary honestly.

>> No.22174475

>>22174473
>we need the woman readership

>> No.22174509

>>22174473
example?

>> No.22174521

>>22174475
They only read pornography, so it makes sense.

>> No.22174530

The best type are those where it fades to black just after the start.

>> No.22174533

>>22174473
These honestly ruin serious scenes for me. How can I think with all my horny monkey neurons activating?

>> No.22174539

This opinion is genuinely common on reddit.

>> No.22174634

>>22174539
Isn't the core userbase of Reddit composed of roasties, simps, and trannies? All of them are terminal coombrains.
Anyway, you need to go back.

>> No.22174715

>>22174473
Women have needs to, you know, you misogynistic pig.

>> No.22174722
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>NOOOO YOU CANT JUST DESCRIBE THE NATURAL PROCESS OF LOVEMAKING THATS NOT HECKIN ALLOWED THATS NOT HECKIN BASED AND WOMANPILLED AT ALL NO SIRREE NOW SHITTING IN SOMEONES MOUTH THATS WHAT I CALL KINO BRAVO PYNCHONOLAN

>> No.22174728

>>22174722
Nobody gives a shit. Only degenerate cucks enjoy reading/watching other people have sex. Do you also like to read about people taking a shit in vivid details? It's just a natural physiological process.

>> No.22174735

>>22174539
are you on a fucking crusade to call everything on this board reddit
kindly shut the fuck up

>> No.22174739

>>22174473
Even when it's erotica?

>> No.22174741

>>22174735
Many anons build their whole 4chan persona around being anti-reddit. Very herd-like mentality, just in the opposite direction.

>> No.22174742

>>22174728
Every healthy post-pubescent pre-menopausal human being enjoys sexual ideation, you bitter inceloid faggot.

>> No.22174756

>>22174739
I would think that that's different, as you dive into erotica already expecting and anticipating those scenes.

>> No.22174761

>>22174473
What does 'necessary' mean in the context of art?

>> No.22174763
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>>22174742
And how did the world around you turn out because of coombrains populating it? A healthy adult has self-control and knows how to rein in his lust and spill his seed only in his wife. Not pathetically jerk off to other people having sex. Which other animal does that? Imagine being more subhuman than animals.

>> No.22174768

>>22174763
>Which other animal does that?
Which other animals write literature?

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>>22174473
False

>> No.22174786

>>22174763
OK mom

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>>22174741
No, reddit smells

>> No.22174799

>>22174768
Which other animal pleasures itself by watching other members of its species beating it at the mating game having sexual intercourse? Is there anything more pathetic and beta bitch behavior than that? Even animals have more self-respect than humans. Let that sink in.

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>>22174763
>Which other animal does that?
Most primates.
Horses.
Porcupines.
Pigs.
Elephants.
Squirrels.
Dolphins.

Mammals are degenerate AF bro

>> No.22174809

if on a winter's night a traveler chapter 7 was kino though

>> No.22174810

>They are never necessary
Nah. I'll give one example, Rabbit, Run. The detailed sex shows us why Rabbit is fucking some thot instead of his wife in a way which would take pages of exposition otherwise

>> No.22174814

>>22174473
The Puritan incel has been a plague on this board

>> No.22174872

>>22174473
they're only cringe if the author can think of nothing better than describing everything mechanically/anatomically and pile on the verbal cliches. If described allusively, an with creative language use, they're great (like in Ada).
Also it should be about the psychology, not the description. Novels are the only medium that truly let's you get into another *inner* world, ambitious erotic writers should be aware of that.

>> No.22174881

>>22174763
fuck, siamese twins offer truly infinte potential for psychological speculation. It's like real-world scifi

>> No.22174884

>>22174473
>le sex should disappear from books since it doesn't exist on my life
KEK

>> No.22174887

>>22174881
please kill yourself

>> No.22174890

I usually have at least one sex scene in everything I write. It's just such an interesting thing to explore with a more critical eye. It's really bizarre when you take a step back, that our psyches have developed such incredible complexity while our sexual urges and instincts are still, ostensibly, almost completely unchanged. Sex is an amazing opportunity to examine this kind of "layering" of the human brain — progressively higher and higher ordered functions overlaid upon the most basal and instinctive autonomy. I love sex scenes, just not for their erotic component.

>> No.22174909

If it fulfils a purpose relevant to the plot then I'm fine with it.
I was completely put off by the constant, jarring sex scenes in A Time of Changes by Robert Silverberg, but it kind of makes sense. It's a society that treats sex and nudity as an open commodity but love and affection are taboo and forbidden. The sex scenes are still cringeworthy but they make sense.
I was so grateful that McCarthy cut out any real sex scenes from All the Pretty Horses. I felt everything was leading up to it but it never happened - all that gets mentioned is them lying naked together, kissing and a moment where Alejandra bites the main character's hand during sex that goes undescribed.
I'm reading Dune Messiah right now and the amount of times Herbert mentions 'flesh' is plain creepy. I'm far from sensitive but I can't bear gratuitous GRRM-style descriptions of female characters in SF or fantasy.
Honestly, I don't know how I'd navigate fiction if I was still a virgin. It would make me feel incredibly alienated. I got into reading after losing my virginity and I'm thankful for that. I remember watching movies and feeling that way, but there's way more intimacy in reading a literary description of sex.

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>>22174909
>constant, jarring sex scenes
>(((Robert Silverberg)))
Imagine my shock.

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>>22174940
>instead of linking the actual videos/books he posts a screenshot of screenshots with some poledittor clumsily reinterpreting and paraphrasing the source material through his own 80 IQ lens and spicing it up with faceberg quotes
This will never not be funny.

>> No.22175222

>>22174473
Best editing error I ever read was
<insert sex scene here>
The story was so much better without a sex scene.

>> No.22175250

>>22174634
Ghislaine Maxwell was the super moderator of Reddit. Of the founders, one was suicided by the Feds, one married a massive negro athlete that weighs twice as much as him, all muscle. The third is a self admitted cannibal and ownership is now in the hands of Jewish bankers. Its a massive intelligence honeypot with a founder effect based on human trafficking, sex slavery, eating of human flesh, suicidal anarchism and race mixing as sexual humiliation.
The subreddit for encouraging childless young women to sterilize themselves had a quarter of a million membersa 5 years ago.

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>>22175250
>a quarter of a million members
Oh no! An entire .0000001% of the world population? Say it ain't so...

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22175272

>>22174473
>Author doesn’t include sex scenes because he’s never had sex

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22175301

>author includes sex scenes directly lifted from his cbt ryona sissy femdom hentai collection

>> No.22176579

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=91gT68xeDMM

>> No.22176646

>>22175261
>An entire .0000001% of the world population?
Its more relevant as a percentage of fertile women, and consider the impact of half a million or more children never being born, and anons membership numbers were apparently from 5 years ago...

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>>22174473
>buys erotica
>reads
>no sex scenes

>> No.22176731

Stop abandoning me

>> No.22176738

>>22174763
>Not pathetically jerk off to other people having sex.
Not everyone is you

>> No.22177631

>>22174509
Bolaño does it all the time