/lit/ - Literature

>>20924244
because a tranny wrote it

>>20924244
I’d kill myself if I looked like him

>jewish

>>20924244
Ernest Cline is a fag
He cannot write one word of poetry
Despite the fact that slam poet
Is a credit listed on his Wikipedia ent[e]ry
Ready Player One
Sucked mongo donkey dick
And Ready Player Two
Was a scheme to get-rich-quick.

Cline is a loser
Ego stinking in his words
High horse, up so high.

>>20924244
That's not poetry, but has nothing to do with the fact that it doesn't rhyme. It is prose with bad formatting.

>>20924244
You do know poetry comes in various forms, right?

My guy has never watched a single JAV in his entire life.

>>20924706
>poetry comes in various forms, right
if it doesn't rhyme it's not poetry
simple as that

>>20924244
>>20925234
Based. Poetry rhymes.

>>20925499
>>20925234
Thoughts on John Milton?

>>20924244
What makes poetry is not rhyme, nor is it metrical rhythm, the essence of poetry is a form that is coherent with the content insofar as the meaning of the words are amplified and unified with their sound and presentation after a manner. This cline fails and is a shit poet because he shows no skill and has no rhetorical power, we feel it is chopped prose because his line breaks and word choice are all bullshit, add to this how mundane his conception and subject matter is.

Plenty of Christ poetry doesn’t rhyme or have meter, like the psalms.

>>20925607
Sorry meant “plenty of good poetry” but Christ poetry works fine too.

>>20924244
>Paradise Lost isn't a poem
Hurr durr

>>20924244
Guy hasn't looked for porn at all, it sounds like to me.

Peepee
Poopoo

As shit as that is in every possible way, a poem is not measured by rhyme. Pic related

>>20925665
Ernet Cline?

>>20925681
Based Coup-de-désposter

>>20924244
Post the rest, op.

>>20924244
Is this supposed to be feminist / empowering? Jesus Christ.

>>20925607
>>20925610
The psalms haven't always been considered poems; certainly not by the society that wrote them.

Based autist Frater is back, what joy.

>>20924244
the first couplet is irrelevant to anything, and should have been left in his diary.

most of that long stanza is decent enough
(it could do with a touch more punctuation, in my professional opinion.)

the last part is horrible, verbally and as an expression of the narrator's character.

its a strange piece of writing, and i wish i hadn't read it.

>>20925234
If it rhymes, it’s not poetry.
See how fun it is to make up shit?

>>20925622
It honestly isnt

>>20924244
It isn't poetry for way more obvious reasons than a lack of rhyme.

>>20925234