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"Tale of a handmade" says America's greatest poet, whose accolades are based on merit and nothing else.

>> No.20610214

>>20610208
The queen of /lit/?

>> No.20610216

>fixate on a typo
>ignore the substance
>ignore the poetry
Typical /lit.

>> No.20610221

>not be masquerade
Wut

>> No.20610237

>>20610221
masquerade
verb: to wear a mask, to take part in a masquerade
She means she'll not take part in the sham that is Christofascist moralising that justifies oppression.

>> No.20610247

>>20610237
Whoa... the eloquence and brilliance is so overwhelming...

>> No.20610249
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>>20610208
>we will not be masquerade
She's mocking us, lit. She's pointing at us and laughing for caring about literature

>> No.20610300

>>20610208
straight up gay, i dont get poetry because i look at this and i say: wow that was really fucking retarded now when we check out a simple translation of the poet li bai it is far more powerful then this nigger shit

>> No.20610304

We will not be sneeded.
Our words left unheeded.
Our bait won't be saged.
Or by jannies deleted.

>> No.20610322

>>20610216
the typo is the only interesting part

>> No.20610333

>>20610237
>Christofascist
Based

>> No.20610349

>>20610304
Unironically good

>> No.20610508

>>20610322
fpfpfp

>> No.20610514

>>20610208
I entitle this work: jannies tongue my anus

"the blacker the nigger
the bigger the crime"
I chime in to snigger
and crack up in rhyme
in time if too late
this bait will call jannies
paid not even pennies
they whine all irate
"you lack all respect
these poems are heinous
I hecking expect..."
- "NO FOAM ON MY ANUS"

>> No.20610536

>>20610514
"you lack due* respect

>> No.20610547

>>20610514
>jannies: sneeded

>> No.20610549

N

>> No.20610553

>>20610208
Are you faggots going to make this thread everyday? If you don’t like her, don’t give her publicity

>> No.20610564

>>20610553
>/lit/
>publicity
There's maybe a few hundred of us here. Passing her name around between a few fellow degenerates isn't going to do anything

>> No.20610635

AAAAAAAHHHHHHH I HATE NIGGERS!!!!! NIGGERS!!!

>> No.20610637

>>20610208
fuck off, if james joyce wrote that you would be praising his genius for the wordplay.

>> No.20610646

>>20610637
I must be forgetting the part in Ulysses where Stephen goes on a woke, barely coherent rant

>> No.20610647

>>20610564
Either way you know how this thread will turn out. What will make it different from the previous 20 threads made in the last week?

>> No.20610651

>>20610637
Yes all poetry is trash

>> No.20610658

>>20610637
>word play
The poem is just a bunch of terrible rhymes

>> No.20610660

>>20610237
She's using it in the passive voice though, and masquerade is not a transitive verb, so "we" cannot be the object of masquerade. The grammar is wrong.

>> No.20610677

>>20610216
>typo
it's called a typo when it's a mistake due to muscle memory, not when you're an ignorant nigger who doesn't know English words

>> No.20610684

>Notice the typo but not the incorrect grammar
/lit/ is full of retards

>> No.20610704

Why are women so obsessed with murdering small children?

>> No.20610719
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>>20610704
Because they hate God. Pic related is what abortion truly is.

>> No.20610720

>>20610704
Because many women are evil. Same with men, but women have been a lot more open and flagrant with it in recent years since public shaming and shunning is no longer really a thing unless you're amish

>> No.20610725

>>20610704
women are insane and don’t like being held responsible for anything
they literally just wanna shitpost their way to life

>> No.20610780

>>20610208
In the future, please include relevant keywords like “I am a lost poltroon here to derail the board; no one has ever been happy to see me enter a room and I smell bad” so that filters can catch this until the janitors get a handle on it.

>> No.20610841

>>20610304
Forgot the accent on saged.

You should be better than this.

>> No.20610845

>>20610719
>Imma keep it real with you bitches
>I'm seriously just a goat
>keep the child blood coming tho

>> No.20611145
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>>20610719
>>20610845

Your Christian moralizing is the doom of the West. Overwhelmingly, bipoc have abortions more than anybody else. This will accelerate demographic change.

>> No.20611172

>>20610237
>She means she'll not take part in the sham that is Christofascist moralising that justifies oppression.
It's amazing how the Nazis now pose as the compassionate ones. You're literally ripping little babies apart and tearing their guts out while talking superciliously to us about "oppression". Abortion is the worst crime in history, worse than slavery, worse than the Holocaust in sheer numbers. You support this and then scold me for being mean. Hilarious.

>> No.20611180

>>20611145
Yea because african migrants dont come in droves regardless of the abortion status. Having more of em will turn DA HOOD in a powderkeg though so expect more prime time george floyding. If it improves the US, good. If it makes the US more of a shithole, even better.

>> No.20611196

>>20610216
The poem is terrible don't get me wrong but it's not a typo- it's intentional wordplay on The Handmaids Tale and the handmade quality of the situation; that is the dismantling of Roe v Wade is purposeful and calculated and not just a freak tragedy that's come out of nowhere. It's man made and by design.

>> No.20611212

>>20610704
Feminism. Women were designed by God to be housewives, subservient to their husbands. This is replete throughout the Bible and the Tradition of the Catholic Church. Feminism tells women that they can break free of the bonds of their nature, go to work, and get fucked by 20 cocks until they finally "settle down" and have maybe 1 child. Since Nature itself rebels against this notion, they have to resort to extreme measures, even murder, to keep it going.
>>20611145
All men are made in the image of God; no innocent life can ever be taken. The criminality of white society now is much higher than the criminality of black society in the 1960s. This is because the moral fabric of society has collapsed. Feminism won out, divorce skyrocketed, fatherless homes become common, and people stopped believing in God. It's not race that's the issue, though personally I have no problem with segregation.

>> No.20611303

>>20611212
You're correct that race is not *the* cause, but certain races do have predispositions towards certain types of behavior. That is to say, it's making the situation worse than it already would be.

>> No.20611311

>>20611212
>All men are made in the image of God
niggers not so much

>> No.20611318

>>20610237
>She means
You have no fucking idea what she means because neither does she.

>> No.20611325

>>20610216
What poetry? It’s just random line breaks from a paragraph

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>>20610553
>Are you chads going to make this thread everyday?

>> No.20611333

>It should never require the permission of a politician.

Ironic.

>> No.20611338

>>20610704
because they like to get fucked raw and cummed inside. it is the most important thing to them.

>> No.20611340

>>20610208
Violation of the Masquerade
Ventrues are gonna be piiiiiissssssed

>> No.20611373

>>20611325
>What poetry?
>It's just
>random line breaks
>from a
>paragraph

-e.e. anon

>> No.20611396

>>20611373
>this nigga doesn't know what a paragraph is
/lit/ af

>> No.20611408

>>20611373
a cisman asked
me
what is a
poem
and I told him
it's the
ART
created by bi
poc
and he will
n e v e r
understand

-shantee'quia n'gudundu

>> No.20611411

>>20610208
what goes through the mind of the 3,202 people who gave a like?

>> No.20611414

>>20610237
It's passive voice. The verb should be past participle. It should read, "be masqueraded".

>> No.20611419

>>20611411
not much

>> No.20611420

/lit/chuds just hate it because she's a black woman. They would be jerking themselves off if Guenon or Pynchon or whichever other dead white man they worship wrote this.

>> No.20611428

>>20611420
0/8 she literally belongs in a zoo

>> No.20611429

>>20611414
Wrong. Masquerade is an intransitive verb and thus it cannot take an object. The grammar in the poem is fundamentally wrong.

>> No.20611434

>>20611420
it unironically would fit in a pynchon novel as one of his jokey songs

>> No.20611438

>>20611408
>shantee'quia n'gudundu
Usually ghetto names are followed by basic american last names like Jackson.

>> No.20611458

>>20611429
The subject of the poem is opposing authority; it themeatically fits to defy conventional grammar rules.

>> No.20611460

>>20611458
Then don't bother correcting it if you think it doesn't matter whether it's correct, fucking retard.

>> No.20611463

>>20611458
>defy conventional grammar rules.
Wouldn't you have to know what they are first?

>> No.20611468

>>20611458
Is that why you "fixed" it with incorrect grammar as well? >>20611414

>> No.20611471

Mup da doo
Didda po mo
Gub bidda be
Dat tum
Muhfugen bix nood
-Shandaquarius Roberts

>> No.20611481

>>20610564
>There's maybe a few hundred of us here.
Honestly there are about 15-20 people who post on this board

>> No.20611483

>>20610237
Masquerade can be a verb or a noun. As a verb it should have been "we will not masquerade", as a noun, "we will not be the masquerade". She had two chances and she fucked it up both times. This is primary school level grammar, the most basic of you can get when using language. Incidentally, not to out too fine a point on it, the noun usage would have at least had the same amount of syllables as the first line, though I suspect Miss Gorman has never heard, or much less read, anything with metre in it.

>> No.20611488

>>20611481
There are dozens of us

>> No.20611491

>>20611468
I'm not the same poster. I think the poem is awful but anons in this thread are being making themselves look stupid by dunking on aspects of the poem which are not the reason the poem is bad.

>> No.20611492

>>20611483
metre is for dead white men

>> No.20611500

>>20611212
>This is because the moral fabric of society has collapsed. Feminism won out, divorce skyrocketed, fatherless homes become common, and people stopped believing in God.
Books on this topic, that recount the history of this change?

>> No.20611501

>>20611491
It's only bad in the context of human poetry.

>> No.20611503

>>20611420
>pynchon
>dead
I’m falling for the bait

>> No.20611504

>>20611458
Don’t ruin your joints with that reach

>> No.20611510
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20611510

what is it with gormans?

>> No.20611514

>>20611458
The subject o-
f the poem is opposing
a
u
t
hority;
it themeatically fits
to defy convent-
ional grammar
rules.

>> No.20611516

>>20610208
>pregnancy is private
>meanwhile i get sexually harassed every single day for being a 5'11" man
fuck you

>> No.20611519

>>20611514
Stunning AND brave

>> No.20611522

>>20611516
>i get sexually harassed every single day for being a 5'11" manlet
based gay chads

>> No.20611528

>>20611196
yeah youre right its meant to be just another wedge issue to get democrats out voting for the upcoming midterms.

>> No.20611543

>>20611522
i'm not fucking gay, man. i'm straight. the people who call me gay are gay. fucking faggots. fuck society. goddamn chimpanzees. all they do is fucking prey on anything smaller than them, even children, and assume that everyone else does the same. monsters

>> No.20611634

>>20611510
>I sit in captivity and do nothing, I am so strong and brave
wowie

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>>20611180
You have a bucket quickly filling with water from two taps, just because stopping one does not solve the problem does not stop you from shutting it off.

>>20611212
All men are made in the image of God; no innocent life can ever be taken.
This is not at all true, God is made in the image of man. If we are truly made in God's image he must be terribly made.

>The criminality of white society now is much higher than the criminality of black society in the 1960s.
This is easily proven false with a rudimentary grasp of google and data.

>This is because the moral fabric of society has collapsed. Feminism won out, divorce skyrocketed, fatherless homes become common.
This is because Christianity fails to endorse aggression, violence and strength. It celebrates and courts the weak, meek and victimized. For they shall inherit the earth. Remember, you are weak, nothing and powerless without Christ.

>. It's not race that's the issue, though personally I have no problem with segregation.
Yes it is, Christianity evolved in Europe for hundreds of years, in the face of a truly multicultural society it lasted less than 50.

It is the lack of bold, strong men that let society fall. If you blame females for the state of the world, you are part of the problem. The inaction and willingness of European men to let it slide so far is the real cause. Soon strong men, willing to do violence will attempt to correct the problem once again.

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20611662

>>20611458
I have an alternative idea.

>> No.20611694

>>20610221
>>20610237
Modern black 'poets' tend to use words they don't actually understand to an embarrassing degree. I've noticed this more and more.

>> No.20611734

>>20611637
Lmao the only reason "they" had the world turn into what it is today is because they didn't want bold strong men willing to do violence to nuke every city possible and turn this world into a fallout 2 plot

>> No.20611765

DEMAND 24/7 abortion access for BIPOC women, NO QUESTIONS ASKED

>> No.20611777

>>20611765
Abortion is a right that should be reserved for BIPOC women only to address the inequalities that they have experienced by society favoring white women.

>> No.20611786

>>20611734
>this is just like the marvel movies
>this is just like that videogame
>he is just like this tv show
>gonna slam another hoppy ipa

You, and many others in this world, are the Last Man.

>> No.20611790

>>20611777
This, just so much this.

>> No.20611791

>>20611765
>>20611777
This I'm so sick of this false dialectic. I'm strictly pro human life from here on out.

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>>20611791

>> No.20611800

>>20611662
i think theres a bit of confusion with that perspective of the horrendous modern day leftists, in that, they think its a conscious action. they know its unconsciously that these systems are built on white men succeeding because...well...america was not founded with blacks in mind. and even in the 1900s fresh after slavery, people just didnt want to give jobs to black people, or live near them for fear of being seen as associating with them. its an actual thing, but the fact they think we should completely destroy western civilization because of it is absolutely absurd.

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>>20611800
>but the fact they think we should completely destroy western civilization because of it is absolutely absurd.

They want to destroy the Western Man, not his society. They want to take what another built for themselves, after having removed the man who built it.

Having realized that, their actions make sense and have been repeated countless times throughout all of history.

They want was is built.
They do not want who built it.

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>>20611798

>> No.20611832

>>20611823
The joke is that if only BIPOC women abort their babies then we'll get less niggers and more white babies. Does that help you?

>> No.20611838

>>20611832
I don't need help understanding your joke. They're not human, does that help you?