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18293749 No.18293749 [Reply] [Original]

I wrote a verse earlier and have nowhere to share it. I tried reddit but quickly was reminded of why reddit is known as "the faggleverse."
So I'm gonna do it here. Post any original work you have in the thread. It should be poetry, or raps/verses, but if you can fit a short prose excerpt in a few replies that will work too.

Then we will all look at it together and tell you why it sucks. Let us begin

>> No.18293750

>>18293749
I try to pray north toward the sun,
In my path I seek one, deceive none
The blessing of the drum
Annihalate the essence of the gun
If the question is, what have we been
well what will we become?
Stressed out monkeys, swiggin' on bullets?
or liberated triggermen, when we gonna pull it?
Pull the rug from under, pull the wool off their eyes
Show the people who did the whats, whens and whys
Why they run from the government
and run from the cops,
run from the punishments,
run from the glocks
run for the fuck of it
running out the clock
why they run and when they run they always run
And never stop
Its on and on until apocalypse
Powermen with powermoves and iron grips
upon the souls of the livin, nowadays the living dead,
soon resurrected by the wisdom that I spread,
I said hello world, its a pleasure to meet ya
call me by my title: poor righteous teacher
A world without leaders, what a bright idea
There can't be worries if there ain't no fear,
So just unwind and take a trip through time
to the time when man was no mastermind
no master plans, no master crimes
his mastercraft was to master divine
For man is God, and God is mind,
for we are One, but then we tried
greed, glitz, glamour, ego trips and politics
they couldnt follow truth, so now they swallow shit
and as they wallow in the muck that they helped to create,
each man points a finger at his brother who he hates
OOooooh, now how the fuck that sound?
7 billion relatives can't rally round
the Kings of Kings and the Crown of Crowns
They follow the Beast through streets and towns
through cities and suburbs, through verbs and nouns
through action packed, and surround sound
Its in everything, everywhere I look and what I hear
Hatred, the sole fruit of fear
Love: the soul proof, its clear
Lift up ya chest, mon, lift up ya ear
Unwind ya spine, girl, shake up ya rear
TOGETHER WE CAN TAKE BACK THE POWER THIS YEAR
THIS WEEK, THIS DAY, THIS HOUR, THIS MINUTE
A ROCKEFELLER CANT STOP THE FLOW OF THIS VISION
THATS GUIDED BY TRUTH, UNITED BY LOVE,
HUMANITYS PROOF OF THEIR IGNORANCE
SO WHAT THE MOTHERFUCK WILL YOU MOTHERFUCKERS DO
WHEN THE PEOPLE SAY, NO WAY FUCK YOU
I WON'T KILL MY BROTHERS TO FILL UP YOUR POOL
I WON'T WORK FOR PEOPLE WHO THINK IM A FOOL
I WON'T SELL MY CHILDREN TO BOOST UP THE STOCK
I WON'T DO SHIT FOR YOU, SUCK MY COCK
And your drones won't fly, you ain't got missiles,
the guns won't go off, the soldiers won't listen,
the people won't work, and the slaves won't starve
the security is gone, and we paid off the guards
7 billion motherfuckers running through your backyard
Who can see now that your backyard is ours
join us now, or will you make this hard?
commit to love? or die with your God?
The goat horned devil whore prince Babylon
His time is up, but the time travels on
the time travels on
the time travels on

>> No.18293766
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18293766

>>18293749
>rap

>> No.18293787

>>18293766
Rap is poetry yo
Your mind got polio
I'll shag your mum
Make a video

>> No.18293791

>>18293766
>>18293787
you guys are no fun

>> No.18293843

>>18293787
>>18293791
You know what's even less fun, anon? Zoomers pretending to be black. Get a grip.

>> No.18293846

>>18293843
im not a zoomer nor pretending to be black, I'm just cooler than you and you're insecure about that, so you talk shit.
you talk shit about black people's style for the same reason. sorry you're lame, faggot.

>> No.18293853

>>18293846
My mistake anon, I did not realise you were actually black. I thought you were just a larping zoomer. With that said, you should not address others so disrespectfully without good reason.

>> No.18293884

>>18293853
im not black either, im white and cooler than you are, you're a dork

>> No.18293887

>>18293853
lmao you're the reason we don't breed

>> No.18293889

>>18293843
chup bhenchod

>> No.18293897
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>>18293884
I've been there too, anon. I, too, was a white zoomer who wrote rap lyrics once upon a time. The thing is though, not only is larping as a thug rather worthless, but you won't even look like a thug - you will look like a clown instead. You'll see one day.