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ITT: We write "poems" in the style of Rupi Kaur. I'll start.

I started from the beginning
where the end left off
time is a grand circle
and we do more than go through the motions
working towards justice
towards peace
towards providing vaccine to at-risk kids
towards providing vaccine to health care heroes;
a living wage for Susan Waller the Wal-Mart bitch,
who bags your groceries in wanhope laying,
wanhope of Susan Waller the Wal-Mart bitch
lays at the end of time.
We are at the End Times.
Repent
Eat the Bugs
Live in the Pod
Watch Netflix
Suck Captain America off
Talk about the Super-Bowl
Eat
Drink
Drive
Masturbate to excess
Die of a heroin overdose in a Texaco bathroom
and show the world how free you've become.
I am the freest of all.
I live.
A strong, poo-poo woman
who writes doggerel that earns her
more than you'll ever make
and the criticism of which
will cancel you
and erase you
from a "tradition"
Not worth preserving

Shop at Poundland

- Rupi Kaur

>> No.17560965

>>17560960
I got
Shit
In my
Butt

I don't give
A
Fuck

>> No.17561072

>>17560960
there is something repulsive about her.
like she looks ok when you look at her quickly but the more time you spend looking at her face the uglier she gets, yet i can't exactly pinpoint a single reason.

>> No.17561478

ay
yo
we wuz
poets
n sheet

- tyrone

>> No.17561483

>>17561072
She‘s indian. That‘s it.

>> No.17561503

Today
I went outside
The warm sunlight kissed
My penis
Right
Before
I got tazed for public
Indecency at a
School yard

>> No.17561504

We met
At ten
I was
Fourteen
He was
Thirtytwo
He paid
Fivehundred
It lasted
Sixteen minutes
I counted
One moon
It hurt
Infinitely

>> No.17561506

>>17561483
i find a lot of indian women very attractive.

>> No.17561511

>>17561506
That‘s only possible if you‘re indian yourself.

>> No.17561514

>>17561511
Not him but the same thing and I am pretty white

>> No.17561523

>>17561514
Then the two of you must have a humiliation fetish.

>> No.17561536

>>17561511
you should go out more and also spend less time on /pol

>> No.17561537
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17561537

>>17561523
No I have a self-inflicted colonizer fetish

>> No.17561558

my belly swelled
with love
for him
but he bought
a coat hanger

>> No.17561559

>>17561537
That IS a humiliation fetish.

>> No.17561564

>>17561559
Explain

>> No.17561565

>>17561536
True

>> No.17561573

>>17561564
It at least is humiliating to the theoretical person being colonized since it implies superiority. It‘s also humiliating to fall so low as to mingle your genes with slave genes.

>> No.17561612

>>17561573
You have very unhealthy views about sexual relationships.

>> No.17561624

>>17561612
I‘m not the one here with a colonizer fetish. But explain why you think my views are unhealthy because i think they are very healthy.

>> No.17561640

>>17561624
That's someone different retard.

>> No.17561643

>>17561640
Ok reverse albino

>> No.17561650

>>17561624
It is. But you’re nowhere near as sexually perverted as the other dude. Ffs that guy needs some help if he can’t be attracted to a woman free of some fetish conditioned by his race.

>> No.17561671

>>17561650
Are you referring to my comment about it being humiliating for a white man to breed an indian woman?

>> No.17561686

>>17561671
More about the genetic selection component. Sometimes you just need to get your rocks off, you know? Doesn’t mean you have to “breed” them.

>> No.17561716

Take this argument back to >>/pol/
I want poetry

>> No.17561724

>>17561686
You don‘t seem to understand human sexuality anon. On the instinctual level, it is always about breeding. Our base instincts don‘t understand birth control. So if someone feels a desire to theoretically breed in an unhealthy way, that is a red flag, even if it doesn‘t actually result in offspring. It will always be the symptom of an unhealthy person. Having a desire to breed outside of your tribe is suicidal and therefore a warning signal.

>> No.17561744

>>17561716
Whenever i bleed
I remember the seed
That was wasted
In my mouth

>> No.17561750

>>17561511

READ FLASHMAN

>> No.17561757

One night
I
Stood
In a puddle of blood
Trickling
From my fingertips
For i did unravel
My round arms
To unleash
The hot furry
Trapped under my skin
Aching to erupt
And pool
At my feet

>> No.17561776

my face is brown
my soul is brave
when will a man with
decency
realize that
I
brown face
brave soul
am a rose
and every
rose
has its
thorns

>> No.17561787

All in all
It was in fall
That my legs
Start to get warm
For hibernation
And my pits
And where i sits
Twirly sprawling
Locks

>> No.17561788

>>17560960
her pussy
and my cock
together they write
the softest poem
unseeming sounds
her eyes look up
her mouth agape
yes
I could
I should
take out the knife
better to die
while you cum.

>> No.17561805

I feed on him
I breath his mouth
I sweat his veins
And laugh his ears
But
When he leaves
I stay
But
Nobody here
To drink me
To hear my eyes
To pant my sinews
And cry my nose

>> No.17561810
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17561810

I realize
suddenly
but gently
like the flicker of
an incandescent bulb
of course

>> No.17561821

Forever
Is
A lonely
Time
When
All you do
Is wait
And die

>> No.17561823

>>17561810
lol

>> No.17561829

>>17561511
Okay retard.

>> No.17561840

>>17561829
>>17561750
I see a lot of indians and degenerated coomers are itt

>> No.17561880
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17561880

my lips
are half
a total kiss
and they are
left
missing the imprint
of his

>> No.17561891

Her power
Flickers like a flame
Falling from her curtains
After three hours of coitus
Rape is bad
I love you

>> No.17561900

>>17561891
fucking kek

>> No.17561913

>>17560960
Sneed’s
Seed
And Feed
(Formerly Chuck’s)

>> No.17561917
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17561917

my gardener
has stopped weeding
and is resting

his back hurts
and he has to work such long
hours
for such low wages

employer and employee
what stern words they are
how can we be truly
human
when we must fit these roles

i like to think
that if he could
see into my heart

he would work for nothing

— rupi kaur

>> No.17561933

>>17561917
kek perfect

>> No.17561984

>>17560960
https://youtu.be/tkSNnR0aZTw

>> No.17562025

Fixed by shadow-play
Chained by others
and especially
you
You
loose my chains
let me off the lead
just a bit
champing at the bit
I gather to the fire
distracted by its warmth

Fixed by its light
the light of a false sun
the light of my self
It's warm enough
here
No need to go out
No need for a new
prescription
adjustment
But outside
everything is

Fixed by the Good
made visible by it
Beauty is the only spiritual thing
that we love by instinct

>> No.17562057

>>17560960
roses are
red violets
are blue
but
brown girls
from india
are
jiggapoos

>> No.17562550

>>17561724
>So if someone feels a desire to theoretically breed in an unhealthy way,
by your own admission, sexual desire is base. You’re referring to intellectualized attraction which is what colonizer anon is displaying
I don’t totally disagree with you, but I find issues with your reasoning and shortcoming with your perspective
All in the pursuit of health, dear anon.

>> No.17562561

Cum
Made me dum
Cause I swallow
And now I wallow
In puddles of
Cuddles because
I’m lonely and betas
Ball fuzz
Is good for flossing
So chad can cum through
And give my face a glossin’

>> No.17562566

>>17560965
Based death grips poster

>> No.17562583
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17562583

>>17560960
>time is a grand circle

>> No.17562711

>>17561821
based

>> No.17562798

I sometimes think
warm under my blankets
about the condensation
of the glass
you drank from
when we talked
for the last time

I sometimes drip
like that glass
that you finished
and left on the table

>> No.17562806

idgi, its like its supposed to be ironic but then some of you are making trying to make real poems.

>> No.17562883

I glance at the dirt
The scent was a fart
Or maybe Pajeet’s shart
It disguised like a mint
It’s warm like a duvet
But not as warm as my cunt

>> No.17563047

recess
we were 10
he told me
his pee pee tasted
like strawberries
it did not

>> No.17563763

i was a
sunflower
but he
was a
lawnmower

>> No.17564097

i wanted to fuck
but he
only wanted me to suck
and feed on his seed
and not sow it

>> No.17564257

>>17560960
your mom told you
she said you she said
dont you go having a poop at school you hear me?
those toilets are filled to the brim with bacteria from who knows what and who knows where
you better hold your poop till you get home from school
its ok if you poop your pants

>> No.17564266

>>17563763
i feel this one deeply

>> No.17564296

>>17561506
no

>> No.17564321

>>17561840
Not either, retard.

>> No.17564612
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17564612

>>17560960
wow
he let gentile sleep
what a sweet dude
did he go bung bung bung in
mun's anus
after