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please help me

>>14501978
what country?

>>14501978
Why are Africans in Africa so based?

ridle me th..-

>front dude works as merchant on the market
>just turned 50 kids are mostly out of the house except for his little daughter he treasures a lot
>everything is kinda boring and settled down
>on an errand in the city center he sees two old European gentleman with other African "fashion dudes"
>this moment is so vivid to him he finds some new drive to become like that too
>he calls his buddies and wants them to accompany him on this journey
> the story of an aging man who wants to break out and relive a youth that he never had because xy
>the last scene is the pic after they all made it

Kinda cliche but whatever.

>>14502073
Ohh and the big finale before the end is more or less a heist on some warehouse to get the marching socks for the dude in the right.
Something silly and unreasonable that makes the connection to him/them finding the their youth again (or failing depending on where you want to take the story)

>>14501978
they guy in the green suit is obviously the bad guy who betrays his friends

>>14502145
A prodigal sinner, though, his commupence is merely to have his boyhood tie torn from him at the climactic scend which resolves to him finally wearing his uncle's loudly patterned heirloom

>>14501978
Lagos Police Department contacts with the Dapper Squad. The Kimbu Diamond has been stolen just before the King's Parade! A mystery that only our heroes can solve.

>>14502255
uh i like this a lot

>Front, tan: Pastor Scirocco
>Blue: Mr. Clear Skies
>Green: Jingles
>Red: Professor Holmes
>Black & White: Tao a.k.a. Zuang zi

>>14502104
Forklifts in queue, the characters darting about Senegalese hulks who pull pairs of pallets atop log buttressed wheels too weak to take "dee full ting"

>>14502262
thank you sir !

>>14502073
thanks anon !

>>14502038
IDK but this picture has so mouch emotion and style

>>14502355
>Jingles

>>14502073
>kids are mostly out of the house except for his little daughter he treasures a lot

That’s a black african. He probably never lived with his kids. Much less does he have have a special one that he ‘treasures a lot’. It’s probably for the best since a black father’s presence is more dangerous to his offspring than his absence is.

>>14503018
It sounds like you're talking from personal experience. Sorry about your dad dude.

>>14502355
Like the names, maybe wanna add a characterization

>>14503026
I’m not a nigger, “dude”. I just want to dispell this cloud of sappy sentimentalism that our culture surrounds blacks with. You see it everywhere; movies, tv, commercials. But go out into the real world and interact with blacks on a personal level- they are not like us.

>>14503039
>I’m not a nigger, “dude”.
Oh sorry, I just assumed with the way you write... are you sure? Maybe you're albino..?

>>14503043
If I was black I would be improperly using big words in a failed attempt to sound smart.

>>14503018
man why are you so mean to other people and make these over generallization

>>14501978
>>14502038
>>14502073
>>14502145
>>14502262
They're a subculture called the "Congo Dandies" or La Sape. Vice did a documentary on them, if anyone is interested.

>>14503043
kek

>>14503059
I’m not being mean. It is only the truth. Go to a black country. See how they live. You will be shocked and horrified. It’s not because of poverty. Outside of Africa, even the most deprived slums in the worst poor countries have people living with some dignity. Among blacks, none.

>>14502038
they destroy their families for those clothes

>>14503057
It should be "using big words improperly", but good on you for trying and not letting whitey keep you down!

>>14503018
>I don't like that I found an actual pleasant thread about writing and will try to inject as much racist negativity into it as I can

>>14503112
No. I got it right.

>>14503130
What was so racist about my post? Did I use the ‘n-word’?

>>14503146
The chart agrees with me ESL, the manner you used it was improper. I don't want to sound racist, but you're pretty dumb dude.

>>14503130
>NOOOOOOOOOO YOU CAN’T JUST TELL THE TRUTH ABOUT BLACKS NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>>14503084
I have been to more than one black country you stupid moron and they are normal humans like you and me

>>14503130
this thread is pretty based desu lets come back to the topic and present some ideas to these picks

>>14503253
Can't. The insecure cocksucker ruined it

>>14503721
I will never apologize for being based and redpilled.

>>14503130
Tbh I was about to make a few racist jokes, but then reconsidered it upon seeing the thread.
So refreshing not have a picture of some black guys plastered with ‘nigger’ and stale memes.

>>14501978
love blacks

>>14503103
Better them than malaria.