/lit/ - Literature

kys

>>13277760

> she is still friends with rapist
> guy stays with her
>epic love story

I don’t get it

>>13277760

OP I would find your main character and beat the shit out of him. What a fucking cuck story.

>>13277760
LMAOOOOOOOOOOO

>>13277760
>I was driving her home and suddenly everything went black.
>I would be driving around town and my mind was constantly thinking about it.
> Last summer we drove up to my parents house
>I have fractured spine from a car accident

OP. YOU ARE OBVIOUSLY A GENIUS. WHY ARE YOU BOTHERING WITH KEK STORIES? PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER STORY, THIS TIME, WITHOUT RAPIST KEK AND WHORE.

This ain't it, chief

>>13277760
Yeah, this "love story" is about your life and you're looking for answers. If she really loved you she wouldn't be friends with her "rapist" (though somehow I imagine this was more consensual than she is letting on).

At the moment itself just an obvious self insert from a desperate guy who's girlfriend has either cheated on him or he's that lonely that he's trying to virtue signal that he's okay with being cucked so long as some give him attention.

The only way it would work (make money) is if it was from the girls perspective who finally realises how to accept the person who truly cares for her after being abused and continuing to act out of this 'trauma' (you need to make it feel like the girl is doing nothing wrong even when she continues to fuck the chad).

>>13277760
10/10 would read to my children

cringe, you have to work before you post your shit stories. You can't just write out your self-inserts and anticipate positive feedback, you dumbass.

Hahahahaha.

https://youtu.be/MTWgRoBRaIQ

mfw

>>13277838
You don’t seem to understand. OP is writing Le Epic Love Story

>>13277816
This

IF SHE REALLY LOVED YOU SHE WOULDNT STILL BE FRIENDS WITH HER “RAPIST”. 100%

>>13277760
probably one of the greatest love stories of all time OP well done

>>13277760

This is fucking bait

>>13277942
thank you for sharing your wisdom with us

>>13277819
>The only way it would work (make money)

It’s funny you should say that cuz I was thinking that OP could make it so the boyfriend becomes a billionaire, and then the girl becomes a devout and loyal wife. Because there’s nothing more true than the fact that money makes the pussy crumble, amirite my fellow chads?

>>13277985
He would still be a cuck tho.
>you have more money
>now we can really be together
story would would just get shittier and shittier

>>13277985
He would still be a cuck tho.
>you have more money
>now we can really be together
story would just get shittier and shittier

>>13277760
Please don’t tell me this actually happened

>>13277760
It's obvious bait but
>I was driving her home and suddenly everything went black
Is the funniest line you can read about cuckolding

>>13277760
the power of a big butt

No rival for literature.

>>13278145
facts

>>13278149
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

>>13277760
Whose the semen demon?

>>13277760
>The story ends with the guy staying loyal to her
Write from the heart, I guess.

>>13278149
ig?

Why is OP trying to sell us his cuck dreams tho?

>>13278162
Natasha Aughey is such a babydoll. Closest thing I've ever come to having a waifu.

>>13278267
same

>>13278263

>>13278296
Fuck off cuck

>>13277760
I wish I was a girl so badly

>>13278411
why?

>>13278434
he wants to be fucked by men

>>13278440
No he wants to fuck himself
t. hegel

>>13278434
Would make up for all the prolonged abuse and the fact that there is nothing worse than being an emotionally fragile male, I get jealous of them in person if they're especially timid and wearing the things I would wear if I could

>>13277760
>I was driving her home and suddenly everything went black.

So he died, the end. This is your problem right here OP, your plotting is fucked

>>13277760
Dam I was feeling pretty low about my life until I read this. Thank you OP. I really am grateful for my girlfriend. She is amazing. If only I can stop arguing with her over little things we could be good all the time. Grateful it’s not like the story lol

>>13278455
don’t be stupid to confuse the emotionally fragile male with the sensitive man. The former is a bitch who usually hides his insecurities through the veneer of his exploits, material possessions etc. this kind of guy will be fucking pissed if you ever ask him Philosophical questions, or even just basic questioning of his ideas. His whole worldview is fragile. The latter is a King. Aristotle saw in Ulysses the greatest of virtue, I forget the Greek name, but it essentially means doing the right thing at the right time in the right context. For Aristotle this was the most supreme virtue, in fact what all the other virtues supported to attain as an end goal. If you think about it, this virtue requires the utmost sensitivity in all circumstances so that one may act accordingly. Everyone else nowadays, especially the emotionally fragile male, tries to play by a set of rules and when the set of rules fail they take it out on everyone around them. Where is the sensitive man is always in tune with the truth, not only in perception as in being in tune with his body and his feelings, but with his mind, intellect and soul. Don’t mistake the two. One is a coward. The other is your master.

>>13278469
>If only I can stop arguing with her over little things
Remember this next time you start to pick a fight over some dumb shit.

>>13277819
>you need to make it feel like the girl is doing nothing wrong even when she continues to fuck the chad

Why is he a chad? From the story: he got another guys girl drunk, forced himself on her, and continues pursue her. What part of that is Chaddy?

>>13278589
I will. It’s crazy but this story really helped me realize how fortunate I am. Some people are so fucked. Thank you OP, is this a new genre btw? Kind of reminds me of reality tv, where you watch for the pure purpose of being grateful for not being like the people on the screen.

>>13277760
You don't know how to green text. NEWFAG/10

>>13278546
Μῆτις

>>13277760
Look at this midget lol

>>13277760
Alright OP.
Keep writing and pouring out whatever you to make it feel right.
When you're done, throw that shit in the trash and burn it, because it's garbage.
That's okay though, it was a great exercise in writing, but never ever ever show that to anyone else.
One day you will hopefully look back and cringe a bit, but feel like you've come a long way.

>>13279187
I actually wrote out 2000 words and sent it to the New Yorker

>>13277760
I would definitely read the full version of this. Keep developing it OP. Keep it as cringey as possible, you already have a great start

>>13278267
How low are your standards anon, by god

>>13279326
I could definitely keep it going.

Trey owned a blue Chevy Malibu that he would often take pictures in front of. After two years of saving his mom was finally able to afford to get him that nose job he had been begging for. “I don’t wanna look like a Jew anymore you fat bitch” he would say to his mom. She would continue washing the dishes, ignoring his behavior as she often would. He was also the shift leader at McDonald’s. Despite all these things, he was a real Chad!

>>13279381
I would pay to read an entire book like this

>>13278267
>>13278162
>when her height starts with 4'

>>13279358
I know it's hard to understand, but people have different standards of beauty from your own. Don't be an autist.
>>13279804
She is 5'6' IIRC

>>13278162
Why am I attracted to this so much, why am I only attracted to girls yet I have urges and thoughts about being fucked by men yet I'm not attracted to men?

>>13279873
Either AGP or extreme fantasies of submission by way of demasculinization. For the second part that is. The first question is dumb.
>why am I attracted to a pretty girl with an ass the size of my entire chest???

>>13279924
How is wanting to run my soft girly hands by my limp "5 wrists across a guys body while he forces his dick into my mouth not homosexual/bisexual? I don't even feel like I would even want sex with girls anymore or be in a relationship with them
Why don't I feel attracted to men in porn, in person, in any media, even those I've known for a while or been close to, there is no romantic or sexual attraction/intimacy there

>>13279948
This is either b8 or you're the least self aware person on the planet.

>>13280014
Obvious b8 by fematard

>>13277760
>Would you read it?
god no

>>13280014
You're saying I'm gay/bi? I only feel attracted to girls I wish I wasn't serious

>>13279381
10/10

>>13280025
>I'm not attracted to men
>how am I not gay?
You're not gay, you're a fetishist. You want to be dominated by someone physically bigger and stronger than you and forced to do taboo things as a sign of subservience. Masculinity=Strength, and being forced to please cock is the ultimate taboo for you, a heterosexual man. I bet you fantasize about getting dicked down by a dominatrix tranny too, don't you?

>>13280139
>I bet you fantasize about getting dicked down by a dominatrix tranny too, don't you?
I'm glad you've reassured me and I'm glad I can still be considered hetereosexual, I've been getting off to femdom since I was 11 but in the past year its just been gay encouragement and women calling me a faggot etc telling me to accept myself however wouldn't I still want this on some level if I've sought it out? I've also been self inserting as the girl in guy on girl for years and now self insert as fem bottoms in gay porn so long as their faces are off screen
Traps/trannies/femboys do nothing for me as tops though, like I wouldn't even want to do anything with them unless it was just platonic or something less sexual

>>13280139
My fetish is being loved by a girl who is loyal, honest and kind to me. I know! Im crazy

>>13280220
I want to lick those thighs

>>13280139
This still doesn't explain why I get intrusive thoughts constantly whenever I'm alone and not distracting myself or especially when my eyes are closed and I'm lying in bed trying to sleep about bottoming for men, its a really strong persistent urge. I never had this before I was 19. Isn't femdom used as a cope for bisexuals/latent homosexuals? What if I've never had any serious experiences with girls? Isn't this going to genuinely make me homosexual eventually? It feels like something is uncoiling inside my brain, why is it that I've crossdressed since I was 8 and everyone around me including my own family has always said I was gay?

>>13280236
It’s Satan. Ur getting cycled by the enemy faggot

>>13280204
>>13280236
You need to stop watching porn my dude.

>>13280302
>my dude

Ur talking to a woman

>>13280324
there are no women or men now there are just dudes with more or less muscle mass

>>13280327
ALOT LESS

>>13277760
fucking christ

>>13280204
>>13280236
Why are you so concerned about being "considered heterosexual"? Who gives a shit? It doesn't sound to me like you're traditionally gay, you do like women after all, but you do have some sort of attraction to men, even if it's just the idea of strength or domination. Things don't "turn you gay" either, by the way, there is such a thing as latent homosexuality.
>I'm 19
There's a reason that "experimenting in college" is a stereotype, people go through some weird sexual stuff in their early 20's. Just relax and keep an open mind. It's actually CURRENT YEAR, who fucking cares if you're gay/bi/pan/whatever? Do you boo boo.
>>13280220
The true patrician fetish. And holy shit her skin is amazing.

>>13277760
I feel really bad for you dude. You should leave her. You deserve better than to be lied to and cheated on. Have some self worth.

>>13277777

>>13281151
>Alain De Bottom

No thanks

>>13281151
Love and Strife, that’s the valiant life. Only for the loyal and brave awaits the kingdom of heaven. You bet your ass it’s not “common” sense, they would call it irrational. They always have and always will. Funny though, how it’s always us they end up talking about

>>13278643
That another guys girl willingly got drunk with him and had sex with him. If he had raped her, she would have gone to the police.
Yeah, I know what I said, but if she doesn't say no before, during and after the act, how is it rape?

>>13281324
>he got another guys girl drunk
>forced himself on her
>continues to pursue her
>What part of that is Chaddy?

I know that what she did was some whorish shit to do but you think a real Chad needs somebody else’s girl? needs to get her drunk? needs to force himself on her? would pursue her Like that? LOL

>>13281414
Yes, Chads do that all the time. You seem to think that Chad has to share your conservative morals.

>>13281498

Chad, the ultimate alpha male, is so desperate he needs to unnecessarily force himself on some willing cheating drunk skag? And then creep on her behind her boyfriends back? Chad? The ultimate Alpha Male? LMAO

You must live in the Southern States, where Chad is also your brothers name

>>13277760
SWEET VISHNU THE TOILET ON THIS BICHE

>>13281519
>he needs to unnecessarily force himself
>willing cheating drunk skag
You're refuting yourself in the same sentence.

>then creep on her
He's publicy commenting on her sexy pictures, which she uploads herself. Nothing creepy about that, especially not after they had sex.
>behind her boyfriends back
It's in public, right in front of the boyfriend. That's a chad powermove.

It's simple. When a woman says she has been raped and has neither struggled physically or gone to the police, she is lying.
Reread OPs story under the assumption that she wasn't raped, but had consensual sex with the guy. Suddenly it switches the perspective around completely.

>>13281544
Here comes your chad with the powermove

>>13281544
>You're refuting yourself in the same sentence.

No that’s you. If she’s willing why does he need to force himself? Beside the fact that he’s a beta bitch

>>13281567
She's lying about having been forced? Plausible deniability is a huge part of the female psyche. Offloading risks, social or otherwise on men plays a part of that.
If it hadn't been consensual, she would shut down his advances, any furher communication even. Instead she takes sexy pictures and uploads them where her "rapist" will see them.

>>13281567
No you don’t understand. He has liberal morals. Meaning as long as she doesn’t go to the police it’s consensual. You would know that if you weren’t such a conservative faggot

>>13281586
and the Chad likes this girl?

>>13281610
Imagine being this autistic.

>>13281668
Autism is looking a lot better than Chad rn anon

>>13277760
this happened to me except I was the girl

>>13281689
You mean your boyfriend was taking sexy pictures for Stacey behind your back?

>>13277760
This was excellent bait OP. Perfectly crafted to get a rise out of this board

>>13278296
where's that from?

>>13277767
How can one man be so based?

>>13281847

>>13277760
Post this to r/relationshipadvice and they'll believe it I guarantee you. Add at the end

>what should I do? I think I love her but is this too far?

Those soibois will slurp it up.

dog shit. cute girl though

this reminds me of the stupid shit I used to write during a bad breakup in my late teens. Looked at it as an outlet, but in reality it was just me being a whiney twat with literary delusions. What you've written is objectively bad (and embarrassing), so make sure to keep it off paper and password protected.

One day you'll wake up and your hard feelings about all this will be gone. Don't take it out on her; she's already gone and any attempt to "win" her back will just compound things. If it gets really bad, talk to your doctor about an alprazolam rx. Just don't be a retard and abuse it

>>13282003
I don’t have hard feelings just soft feelings. Like, why people gotta hurt people? Why is love so difficult for some people. I don’t think there are answers to these questions, but I think stories like these validate the asking of these questions. So much unnecessary pain. And for what? It’s not a sad world. It’s a very beautiful world and there are a lot of beautiful wonderful people out there looking to do good. But every once in awhile you come across people like in the story, and it makes you wonder- in a world so beautiful and full of love as our own, what a waste of fucking life. It’s not like the whore and the rapist are evil. They surely have reasons for being depraved. It’s just that they are engaged in Nothing. Like absolutely nothing is going on here. Nothing worth remembering, nothing worth sharing. You guys are doing absolutely nothing. It’s fucking boring. Again, what a waste of life. I just tried to capture that fleeting feeling of ennui you get when people tell stories like this.

>>13277760
>>13278149
>>13278162
>>13280220
God i wanna suck and slobber on her stinky sweaty pungent wet butwhole

To quote Kurt Vonnegut, "His ideas were good, but his prose was dreadful."

>>13277779
Who's the guy on the left?