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Is this this a slam poetry masterpiece?

https://youtu.be/mFQ7zqn6j18

>> No.11203973

More like ham poetry.

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>>11203973
kek

>> No.11203990

>>11203973
btfo

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>> No.11204007

Someone needs to come up with a new cadence for these slam poets. The bad MLK impressions are getting old.

>> No.11204018

>>11204007
They should deliver it like a schizo hobo. Aggressive and random spike in volume followed by long pauses staring into blank space.

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>>11204018
Slam poetry should be delivered under an overpass while covered in one's own feces and high on bath salts.

>> No.11204052

>>11203931
>slam poetry
>masterpiece

Choose one.

>> No.11204067

>>11203931

Why is the tone and delivery ALWAYS the same? Always rushed, always the same false trembling of the voice, the gradual move up to bona-fide shouting, the indignation. It's always delivered with way too much force. They sound exactly alike. Calling slam poetry a democratic artform is an insult to both democracy and art. It labels democracy mob rule (the applause-o-meters, Jesus Christ), it indirectly claims that democracy is leveling and nivellating (the exact same form and content every time) and reduces art to narcissistic masturbation, completely excluding the enriching aspect of art that comes from being confronted with something new.

I still think Bloom was wrong about slam poetry - calling it the death of art is much too hyperbolic. Art isn't going to die, but slam poetry sure is, having no redeeming qualities, it's only popularity stemming from the fact that it is a medium often used by people who profit off of the current political climate. There is absolutely nothing timeless about it, there is no grace or depth. It will be forgotten in half a century.

Slam poetry will die soon - just like Rachel Wiley. I'm not trying to be cruel, but the content of the poem (here, they are again all alike) made me reflect a bit upon why I even care. She is hell-bent on dying young. She is effectively trying to immunize herself from the social control she could be subjected to from doctors and society at large. What do you do in the face of such a determined suicide? She wants to be loved, I can empathize with that, but she fails to realize that the social control is usually coming from a place of love (if it's from people who are close to her) or some more vague care for her well-being (doctors and society at large).

Have any of you ever known a drug addict or an alcoholic? It is the exact same dynamic, and the kind of fat people who'll use the term "fatphobic" unironically RESENT the comparison. That I want a loved one to quit drinking or shooting heroin is not because I cannot accept them for who they are. It's because I love them, and I can see their gluttony is killing them.

>> No.11204093

>>11204052
we need to go back to punk
www.youtube.com/watch?v=WsPRgXoQIoI

>> No.11204120

>>11204067
I wish. Slam and Spoken word is quite big in the UK at the moment. There's a massive scene in the city I live in. I got roped into out of sheer loneliness at Uni in a bid to get friends and get laid. Got the former, the latter never materialized because I'm an awkward manchild degenerate and all the women are right on man haters with boyfriends.

It is everything you say though. Easy emotions, basic ideas, lazy craft. It's so audience-centric that any attempt to do something difficult or out there just ends up with blank confused faces.

I'm performing next week at a night as a favour to a friend. I really don't want to, I hate these people and I think they're talentless bores but if I don't go, I never get out the bloody house.

>> No.11204132

>>11204067
slam poetry is pretty much liberal demagoguery.

>yell loudly
>perform passion but not actual passion
>only liberal or left wing political point of views
>crowd is filled with fellow liberals who will woohp and holler at things they agree with

>> No.11204137

>>11204120
mix it up
www.youtube.com/watch?v=CWrMGXwhFLk
www.youtube.com/watch?v=WrJH-LA6cMQ

>> No.11204153

>>11203931
The thumbnail looks like Marlon Brando

>> No.11204181

>>11204137
Good as music.

Bad as poetry.

>> No.11204188

>>11204181
www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZOP2NUbG2iY

>> No.11204224

>>11204188
This is worse.

>> No.11204285

>>11204120
> I got roped into out of sheer loneliness at Uni in a bid to get friends and get laid
Are you me? I'm going to one at 7 for this secret purpose

>> No.11204374

>>11204224
>t. unpublished

>> No.11204444

>>11204285
Yes I am. Make sure to perform, you're an non entity if you don't. Try to make it funny too.

>>11204374
όχι ένα επιχείρημα

>> No.11204456

>slam
>poetry

>> No.11204473
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>>11204067
>I still think Bloom was wrong about slam poetry
https://youtu.be/FlStGkcZkdg
lmao I think he wasn't

>> No.11204488

>>11203931
The entitlement is staggering
>I don't owe you thinness
No, but you will owe the taxpayer who subsidises all the treatments you'll eventually need when your body gives up on you. f you're fully aware that your (preventable) condition is making insurance premiums go up, or if you lived in a country where healthcare is provided by the state, you're literally keeping people with more terminal conditions from getting the beds and attention they need. Why would you take pride in being such a greedy and self-absorbed piece of shit?

I knew a severely obese girl who would have accidents constantly. Once she fell down the stairs and they had to call two ambulances just to get her out the door. The servicemen were worried they'd have to call the fire brigade too. She claimed to be in 10/10 pain but at the hospital all she had were a few bruises. All being fat does is make you more sensitive to insults and more dependent on the generosity and patience of others. Why the fuck that is called "body positivity" I have no idea.

>> No.11204491

>>11204444
>όχι ένα επιχείρημα
this is funnier because it's modern greek and that's the type of Bestand those guys are working from. nice fat quads

>> No.11204506

>>11203931

So being fat is good....because some old really bad joke's punchline is for the patient to just accept their condition, even though this is just a really old bad joke that in no way is trying to convey any sort of wisdom, or reflection on society's way of thinking, but this hog is grasping at straws for justification of her slovenly, mentally and physically unhealthy way of life.

>> No.11204526

I dunno I think it's a good opportunity for the poetry of the masses to compete, but she's not going to top the classic Who ate all the pies? for crowd appeal. 2/10 snaps, I responded

>> No.11204580

>>11203931
Real slam poetry would be these people falling into a mass grave.

>> No.11204593

>>11204473

>25 dislikes to 5 likes, 800 views in 4 year

Something I find instructional is to look at the bestsellers list for the 1910's, 1920's and so on. Full of literally-who's. Popular in their day, but no longer.

Same with slam poetry. It is already forgotten by God. It will be by history in due time.

>> No.11204598

>>11204473
I tried but I had to stop before he even started. Did it get gud anon?

>> No.11204602

>>11204506
Who are you to judge if it's good or bad?

>> No.11204605

i don't get how killing someone like this isn't permitted

in a village in say fifteenth century western europe this thing doesnt last a week

>> No.11204607

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uMkdTsRYDXE

>> No.11204609

>>11203931
Lose weight you fat disgusting pig.

>> No.11204624

>>11204598
It gets even more cringy

>> No.11204626

>>11204607
Christ, right wing cretins get completely manhandled as usual.

>> No.11204627

>>11204602
Obesity is a preventable condition that is objectively unhealthy, and to let yourself become obese shows you have no self-respect.

>> No.11204631

>>11204602
Usually doing things that make you have terrible health are bad.

>> No.11204634

>>11204627
Why is being unhealthy a good or a bad thing?

>> No.11204637

>>11203973
First post, best post.

>> No.11204640

>>11204634
Found the nihilist

>> No.11204660

>>11203931
its funny cause she is fat

>> No.11204665

>>11204153
thought i was the only one...

>> No.11204668

>>11203931
I find it funny that not even anyone ITT can agree on what is good slam poetry

>> No.11204673
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>> No.11204675

You know who you owe skinny-ness too?

Yourself.

But, maybe the reason why this porker is the way she is, is because she doesn't think highly enough about herself to even help herself out. That, despite her wild, swinging for the ropes faux confidence in front of a camera, she really is a miserable, addicted to food baconbeast who doesn't care enough about herself.

Maybe if she just got it into her head that maybe she's just cheating herself with all this nonsense, she could start getting better.

>> No.11204689

>>11203931
just lose some weight lol

>> No.11204716

>>11204067

"Queer culture" is extremely prescriptive. Saudi women walk on fewer egg shells.

>> No.11204718

>>11204675
I love how we go through such effort to normalize mentally ill people of all natures in our culture.

Diversity is our strength.

>> No.11204769

don't be so lacking in empathy
her habits are physically unhealthy, but she doesn't deserve to have people constantly ridicule her appearance or ignore whatever she feels is really bothering her

>> No.11204792

>>11204718
There's nothing wrong with "normalising" mental illness, such as depression or downs for example. But this isn't a mental illness, its an unhealthy and self-destructive attitude that puts your self-worth above actual bodily safety. At least retards can justify their retardation as an inescapable mental issue. Whales have to perform the most incredulous mental gymnastics just to convince themselves that the opinions of informed doctors and nutritionists are unscientific and prejudiced, when really they're looking for any excuse to be comfortable in their own skin. Protip: don't overeat and ruin your sin by stretching it out in the first place

>> No.11204809

>>11204769
>takes up more resources than she can lend
>why would a tribal society dependent on cooperation hate that
it's almost like the fat guy usually got stabbed or poisoned throughout history by the slightly less fat guy's friends. she's a walking display of rapacious consumption. if she wants to look like she's not eating 5,000 calories every three hours in a world where most people don't need that for two days, she needs to put down the fork or get her fatass a compound that's impenetrable to the skinny.

>> No.11204814

Man I'm still fat but when you're like crazy fat it's unbelievably easy to lose weight. If you're as fat as she is you could still probably chew down 3000 calories a day and lose like 2 pounds a week

>> No.11204821

>>11204769
You can't demand respect from others when you do not respect yourself.

>> No.11204822

>>11204809
i never asked why they hate her, though i'm not sure why you appeal to naturalism to justify it
i just sympathize with her on feeling attacked by society over a decision that is (mostly, but certainly not entirely) personal in impact

>> No.11204828

>>11204821
you extend respect by default because people are individuals, not some arbitrary idea of self-respect

>> No.11204829

>>11204822
you said to hate her is to lack empathy. it's not. it's empathetic to think "that is a drain on everyone's resources" when you see a fat person, which is why tyrants require a lack of empathy to stuff their face while watching others starve. it's not empathetic to like her, it's tyrannical.

>> No.11204835

>>11204822
She's a fucking blight. I was about to eat lunch before I scrolled down and saw this thing.

>> No.11204850

I want to make my own slam poem about how snorting cocaine and kidnapping children to rape and then sell into slavery shouldn't be considered bad by society because like....you know, the chicken crossed the road.

>> No.11204860

>>11204850
i don't think you've done enough coke to be a master poet, anon. you'll get there

>> No.11204873

>>11204828
Just because I respect your right to live doesn't invalidate me calling you a fatass.

>> No.11204893

So epic:
https://youtu.be/g4Q1jZ-LOT0
White people need to wake up and learn true art and humility.

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>>11203973
My sides

>> No.11204909

>>11203931
I don't think I've ever heard good poetry.
Also no actual doctor will ever tell you not to do a basic movement if it brings you pain

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>> No.11204948

>>11204893
The things teenagers do for pussy. I wonder how these people will look back upon their teenage years when they reach an age when reputation management and social reward aren't predicated on narcissistic virtue signalling.

>> No.11204953

>>11204602
It is I, me

>> No.11204962

>>11204899
>I’m baby
No wonder she couldn’t help

>> No.11205023

>>11204634
Obesity is a preventable condition
these stupid fat fucks always end up with serious complications and are a huge drain on medical care
some people don't think their taxes should be spent on other people's misgivings when it could be spent on more productive causes

>> No.11205034

>>11204473
>he said something not so nice about slam poetry
why is that so funny to me?

>> No.11205063

>>11203931
> waaaaah! Why do they keep calling my fat ass a fat ass

>> No.11205072

>>11204473
How did Evangelical Blackticostal pulpit-speak become the norm for the delivery of this garbage genre?

>> No.11205077

>>11204488
Um its called body positivity cus it feels positive to fry chicken

>> No.11205082

>>11203931
Obesity and poor health are directly linked though, she's an idiot. Everything from depression due to gut microflora imbalance to increased cancer risk. Being obese is dangerous and I consider it on the same tier as smoking darts.

>> No.11205089

>>11203931
I can never watch slam poetry without thinking of this
https://youtu.be/7kwyihYaIp4?t=26s

>> No.11205096

>>11204602
a person with common sense and minor health knowledge

>> No.11205098

Seriously, does anyone have any insight into this? >>11205072

>> No.11205105

>>11204769
>go to doctor morbidly obese but also a spider bite
>doctor says you should probably lose weight
DON'T RIDICULE ME ?????

>> No.11205111

>>11204893
way beyond the actual content of this "poem" the affected cadence and body language of slam poetry is so fucking cringey

>> No.11205118

I do agree with her position, but this is more "rant" than "poetry."

>> No.11205123

>>11205072
>>11205098
Willam Shatner

>> No.11205157

>>11204769
you must condemn her sin of gluttony and sloth

>> No.11205164

>>11205157
this is not op, i forgot to remove the name

>> No.11205177

>>11205072
>>11205098
There's actually a surprising amount of articles and research on it. As far as I can tell it started with Beatniks like Kerouac and Ginsberg. You can kind of see it in Kerouacs poetry

"Tryna get to sunny Californy" -
Boom. It's the awful raincoat
making me look like a selfdefeated self-murdering imaginary gangster, an idiot in a rueful coat, how can they understand my damp packs - my mud packs -
„Look John, a hitchhiker"
„He looks like he's got a gun underneath that I. R. A. coat"
"Look Fred, that man by the road" „Some sexfiend got in print in 1938 in Sex Magazine" –
„You found his blue corpse in a greenshade edition, with axe blots"

and then people just copied it. Although the "poet voice" goes back even further than them, which is really similar

>> No.11205181

>>11203973
BTFO
T
F
O

>> No.11205201

>>11204769
she literally does though

>> No.11205233

>>11205177
Yeah, some beat poetry tropes are definitely similar in structure. What do you mean about the "poet voice"/cadence going back further than this? That's what I'm specifically interested in. Any recs on the research on this?

>> No.11205234

>>11204668
Because it's all bad

>> No.11205253

>>11205089
Those movies were much better than they had any right to be

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>>11204792
Morbid obesity is a mental illness.

>> No.11205319

>>11205310
It's the result of addiction, no doubt there.

>> No.11205338

>>11205233
not really. I've just read articles and studies on it. I/they might be wrong about it being older. Just google "slam voice" and "poetry voice" or "poet voice"

>> No.11205344

>>11205338
hah, right. Thanks for the spoonfeeding.

>> No.11205345

>>11205310
how much would you bet that the thinner one got made fun of or was marginalized for not being fat enough?

>> No.11205401

>>11204473
>clearly pandering for sympathy
>clearly working by all the female voices going "AWWWW"
I've been to two slam poetry readings because one of my ex girlfriends was performing. Literally every guy there, in the audience or on stage, was there to get pussy. I can't really blame them though. Other than the FAT ugly social """activists""" a lot of the girls that go are cute alternative and indie girls that like to "read" books and smoke weed.

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>>11204899
>K

>> No.11205413

>>11204067
>Always rushed, always the same false trembling of the voice, the gradual move up to bona-fide shouting, the indignation.
It's a way for beta cuck losers to feel aggressive and passionate and a way for women to feel like they're important

>> No.11205440

She's not just fat...I mean that's a little insulting to fate people. She's fucking OBESE. Like, a few more binges at pizza hut could land her on My Six-Hundred Pound Life.

So yeah, it's a little understandable your doctors are little alarmed here, big-e-hogs

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>>11204962

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>>11204473
jesus

>> No.11205557

>>11204580
Underrated

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>>11204473
jesus, shut it down

>> No.11205623

more like ham poetry

>> No.11205647

>>11204473
Took me three tries to finish this video. Stopped after the opening lines, then made it to the middle, and finally shut my eyes and powered through it. The yelling, the exaggerated cadence, the shallow wordplay, the audience—this hurts.

>> No.11205692

>>11204473
And how is this poetry? It just sounds like a prose declamation with more assonance and adjectives.

>> No.11205712

>>11205310
I'm talking about the mentality of the people who populate the fat empowerment movement, not the compulsive eaters who don't need to hear that kind of shit. They're not likely to watch my 600lb life and think that its somehow similar to their experience. They might be overweight, but not nearly to the same soul-and-body-destroying extent, and they aren't mentally ill, just incredibly dense. They think that promoting their attitudes are somehow going to improve the experiences of fat people, when really the easiest thing to do is just go for a jog once in a while.

>> No.11205760

>>11203931
>Please, Rachel, your weight is going to kill you please, we dont want you to die
>Fuck off, the world wants me to die because Im fat.

>> No.11205764

>>11204473
LOOK AT THIS DUDE

>> No.11205814

>>11204067
Slam Poetry is the fat autistic sister of Public Speaking

>> No.11205836

>>11204137
These are the kind of people who focus on the message rather than the art of the message because they incapable of being artful.
Next.

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>>11203931
>The 'Fat' Joke
Is it just me, or does this sound like the title of a Seinfeld episode?

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>>11203931
Was anyone else not able to finish this? I got about a minute into it before I had to turn it off, it was so annoying.

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>> No.11205870

>>11205836
>if i act arrogant, people will presume i'm qualified enough to be an asshole
nope.

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>>11205712

>> No.11205918

>>11204607
shit, it really is just hip dickheads trying to "get laid".
I guess I'll continue working on my imagist poetry with religious themes and wait for a posthumous recognition because there's no way these pricks are ever going to appreciate any actual poetry

>> No.11205929

>>11204488
I don't really like this argument. Don't get me wrong, I don't defend fatness, but people accept many risky, tax-burdensome behaviors that I'm okay with, so morally speaking I have to admit all of them. I ride motorcycles, which increases hazard on the roads; accidents cost "taxpayer" dollars. I reject arguments to ban motorcycles.

>> No.11205940

>>11204605
yes, let's live in the 15C, 25% infant mortality, life expectancy of 40, no dental, etc.

>> No.11205953

>>11205940
>infant mortality
>life expectancy of 40
Oh my...

>> No.11205962

>>11205940
Life expectancy was like 40 because high infant mortality rates brought the average down

>> No.11205966

>>11205940
>25% infant mortality, life expectancy of 40,
If you have 25% infant mortality, and a life expectancy of 40, it means that everyone who doesn't die in infancy lives 12+ years beyond 40. (i.e. life expectancy for those that survive the first three years is a minimum of 52, greater if anyone suffers an accident between 3 and 52)
dentistry isn't really a problem until the 16th C any way.

>> No.11205978

>>11203973
ftbs

>> No.11205998

hold on I'll post some of the immortal Chinese poet Li Bai to cheer us all up

-

Waking in the gallery
at dawn, and told it's snowing,

I raise the blinds and gaze into pure good fortune.
Courtyard steps a bright mirage of distance,

kitchen smoke trails light through flurried skies,
and the cold hangs jewels among whitened grasses.

Must be heaven's immortals in a drunken frenzy,
grabbing cloud and grinding it into white dust.

-

(To Send Far Away)

Far away, I think of Wu Mountain light,
blossoms ablaze and a clear warm river.

Still here, something always keeping me
here, I face clouded southlands in tears.

Heartless as ever, spring wind buffeted
my dream, and your spirit startled away.

Unseen, you still fill sight. News is brief,
and stretching away, heaven never ends.

-

The birds have all vanished into deep
skies. The last cloud drifts away, aimless.

Inexhaustible, Ching-t'ing Mountain and I
gaze at each other, it alone remaining.

-

Emerald peaks polish heaven. I wander,
sweeping clouds away, forgetting years,

looking for the ancient Way. Resting
against a tree, I listen to streamwater,

black ox dozing among warm blossoms,
white crane asleep in towering pines.

A voice calls through river-tinted dusk,
but I've descended into cool mist alone.

>> No.11206034 [DELETED] 

Kant is a moron and you need to read Heidegger to correct his fucked up shoddy cataract surgery."

>> No.11206137

>>11203931
Struggling to catch her breath there at the end. Maybe that first doctor was right?

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Do you people not recognize ART?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nm0SUFXJyG4

>> No.11206187

>>11203931
When I smoked every time I went and saw a doctor or nurse they always suggested I quit smoking, in addition to whatever I was there for.

And for good reason.

I get that people shouldn't be made to feel bad about themselves for the way they are, but being overweight is a serious health risk.

>> No.11206199

>>11206187
In fact, the health risks of smoking are so well known and severe it seems it would be unethical for them to not say anything.

>> No.11206211

>>11204899
Wait what is the context for this
Why is the moms response so sociopathic

>> No.11206227

>>11206211
I think that's a shoop

>> No.11206230

>>11205998
Cringe

>> No.11206232

>>11205929
If you're in a car crash, there is a distinction between an accident and pure negligence. If your body is the hypothetical car crash and you've eaten yourself half to death, how is that the same? I'm sure you wouldn't ride a poorly-tuned bike because it would increase the risk to yourself and others.

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>>11206227

>> No.11206657

>>11203931
>I don't owe you...
>I deserve...
the fundamental problem with the modern world

>> No.11206766

>>11205899
>small fats
holy shit

>> No.11206967

>>11205929
no one is saying to ban motorcycles. To use your analogy it would be like people telling you not to speed and not wear a helmet. You can be yourself, you can do dangerous things but you can't expect people not to judge you or not try to help you stay safe.

>> No.11206976

>>11203931
*waddles off stage*

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>>11203931
fat girl about to die from a heartattack from the river of plaque clogging her veins

>> No.11207024

>>11204602
Oh boy, here come the fucking relativists.

>> No.11207035

>>11204602
Fat people are never happy, unhappiness is objectively bad

>> No.11207037

>>11203931
>The fat girl deserves to be treated properly by people.
>The fat girl doesn't respect her health.

>> No.11207047

>>11205899
small fats and larger fats? sounds like something out of a PKD novel

>> No.11207050
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>>11203973

>> No.11207065

>>11206169
I made it like five seconds

>> No.11207288

>>11206169
jesus christ

>> No.11207317

>>11206169
So do the people who make these aware of how clownish and psued they look to the public or to any community that isn't their particular pomo academic art circle?

>> No.11207413

>>11203931
I wish I could build some sort of time machine and save her

>> No.11207461

>>11207413
I wish i could save a time machine and build HER

>> No.11207514

most of them are reading off sheets why do they all sound like this
www.youtube.com/watch?v=RT23EPcuuMk
you can punctuate for stresses and breaths even if it's not your own poem and you have a script. why are they all gasping after a short phrase anyway? it's like a CF convention

>> No.11207526

>>11207514
To make themselves appear more passionate and phrases more important

>> No.11207540

>>11206169
Kek is that creaking floor sound dubbed in?

>> No.11207574

>>11207526
i think their parents fucked to macy gray too much

>> No.11207603

>>11204828
>you extend respect by default because people are individuals
what the fuck is this nu-speak garbage
if you extend respect to everyone then it loses its meaning
respect is like trust: hard to earn and easy to lose.

>> No.11207609

>>11207603
i guess you don't believe in human rights either

>> No.11207629

>>11207609
yes and no
do you believe evil pathetic people, cowards and betrayers deserve human rights?

>> No.11207640

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VmIVGMUbyMk

>> No.11207646

>>11207640
yo wtf happened obamas daughter ...

>> No.11207653

>>11203931
she unironically needs to start smoking + doing hardcore stimulants, ramping up slowly b/c of her current precarious circulatory health. 100% chance this would extend her lifespan, which at the moment is probably about the next decade or two if that

>> No.11207673

>>11207629
not him but i do and i don't link that with respect. extreme example time
>pedos deserve a free ride for life in exchange for being kept in a prison away from kids who they would harm and other people who would harm them (human right to life)
but i wouldn't respect them or say they have a right to meet children or expect not to be lynched by a mob. i think prison's the more humane option there, which is respectful of rights and principles, but doesn't make them a respectable person or grant them an inalienable right to liberty regardless of their actions.
very few fat people have no input from their actions on their weight. even pregnant women don't have that excuse without it being a forced impregnation. respecting someone's "right" to be obese seems as bizarre as a "right" to be anorexic, especially if you're following a right to life and health principle.

>> No.11207924

>>11207640
>I’m personally embarrassed of something and this is your fault
Why they do this? I could literally rewrite this about me having diarrhea and it would make as much sense

>> No.11207928

>>11207653
This made me kek

>> No.11207949

>>11207609
The real doesn't grant anything unalienable. Rights, ethics, and equality are spooks.

>> No.11207951

>>11203931
Fat girl has host of medical problems. Complains about fat acceptance instead of tacking the root cause of her miserable existence. Shocker.

>>11204052
It can be bretty gud on occasion.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PgmRUJ3rofM

>> No.11207956

>>11207949
This is why I always raise an eyebrow when Leftists cite Stirner.

>> No.11208005

>>11204506
The worst part is she genuinely doesn't understand why people don't sympathize with her imagined plight. In the middle of her poem she tries to paraphrase the joke with the line "Fat girl walks out into the world and says "it hurts to exist like this," and the world says "so stop existing like that" then following it up with more indignant fat acceptance bullshit and things that never happened, not even realizing that her previous verse is the opposite of her intended antagonism, and that the world is telling her to change for the better, not to 'stop moving her arm'

>> No.11208013

>>11207956
>Implying I'm a Leftist

>> No.11208016

>>11208013
don't feed the /pol/bait

>> No.11208025

>>11207951
this is awful

>> No.11209517

>>11205899
>smallfat (3XXL)
the fucking delusions

>> No.11209566

>>11203973
> not calling it butter poetry
Weak my dude

>> No.11209574

>>11203973
You stole this from Dankula.
Fucking marxist.

>> No.11209576

>>11209566
That isn't a pun. It doesn't rhyme. It doesn't mean anything.

>> No.11209650

>>11205899
It wasn't until now that I realised that the greedy left is now literally eating itself alive

>> No.11209673

>>11207035
Fat people who lose weight, almost 100% of them from what I've seen, never shut the fuck up about how great it is to lose the weight, and how much better they feel and how great their life is now.

>> No.11209694

>>11208005
Well also, it seems like it'd be way more work to write slam poetry and adopt this schizophrenic mindset necessary to believe that she's the one in the right here, that's all way more work than just doing the right thing for herself and losing the weight.

>> No.11209793

>>11209576

It's a pun on button poetry my man. Still way weaker than ham poetry, but at least give it the modicum of credit it deserves.

>> No.11209848

>>11209650
Activist A:
>"Hey so last week I got a vasectomy"
Activist B:
>"Great, feels good getting all that toxic masculinity out of your system right? Not having a dick is great right?"
Activist A:
>"Oh - I didn't cut my dick off, I just cut my balls off so I can't impregnate my wife anymore"
Activist B:
>"Shitlord."

>> No.11209983

>>11209650
>>11209848
this isn't "the left," these are just wretched people who want to have dominion over people who are born with natural beauty and grace

>> No.11209994

>>11209983
>>11209983
These people have leftist views, like it or not.
All the cards are the same regardless if you want to associate yourself with them or not.
The real mindbreaker is when you realize you'd rather be called a Nazi than a pathetic ugly fat hippie mess .

>> No.11210055

>>11209994
>These people have leftist views, like it or not.
that doesn't make them metonymous for the whole political movement. most people--especially in america--who are in it specifically for the idpol don't give a shit about the existence of social hierarchies, they just want their own weaknesses to be legislated away and made off-limits so they can have a crack at the top

>All the cards are the same regardless if you want to associate yourself with them or not.
The real mindbreaker is when you realize you'd rather be called a Nazi than a pathetic ugly fat hippie mess .

not sure what youre saying here

>> No.11210086

>>11204067

>tone and delivery AlWAYS the same

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mNgqpkZMjiw

>> No.11210336

>>11210055
>that doesn't make them metonymous for the whole political movement.
Are they overrepresented in said political movement?
Do other kind of people from said political movement not only accept them but bend over backwards for them?
If the answer to these questions is "yes", then yes, these people are a pretty fine characterization of the movement as a whole.

>> No.11210346

>>11204716
oof

>> No.11210372

>>11210336
i don't know of any leftist platform that involves social justice for fat people

>> No.11210398

>>11210372
Leftists don't talk against hierarchies of beauty or health? Since when?

>> No.11210439

>>11209694
Not really. It took her a lifetime to gain the immense heft that she has, and it would take several years of strict diet and exercise, an entire lifestyle change to lose it and keep it off in a healthy way.

It only takes a weekend of zero effort or change to read up on fat acceptance propaganda that tells you that you should be not just accepted, but praised for making terrible life choices and refusing to accept the advice of people who are genuinely worried for your health.

>> No.11210539

This compilation contains more wit than all of these delusional fatties combined.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRCHBi0DRFg

>> No.11210599

>>11210398
that's what i'm saying. those people are kooks. there are a lot of kooks with more legitimate identitarian
focuses, which make them harder to dismiss, but fat justice people are definitely kooks that are cynically masquerading behind a leftist banner. have you read Mark Fisher's Exiting the Vampire Castle?