/lit/ - Literature

>>14159349
>Enjambment is very impactful when you use throughout the whole thing, and just screams amature.
>Enjambment
>you clearly have very little knowledge on poetic techniques

You sound like some freshman, who learned a word yesterday and now desperately wants to apply it, even if it does not fit.

>a tenuous grasp on sophisticated writing
>This is terrible. Is this bait?
>This would be bad even by high school standards
Zero arguments. Pure feelz. Sounds like you just want him to feel bad, so you can feel less insecure.