/lit/ - Literature

I got published. Pic related is mine - tell me how it is, i'm curious.

>>17973078
Not a fan of this. Feels like it aint even serious.
>>17973087
Same as the other guy^, just faggoty ass poetry.
>>17973099
Can i get a tldr? I couldn't be forced to care about this at gunpoint
>>17973101
More faggoty poetry but for different reasons
>>17973305
Spectacular. I love the tone and formless quality of this - it's like it doesn't even want to be recognized as a poem. 10/10,
>>17974266
Faggot, cry me a river so i can shit in it
>>17975673
Tldr? This is so fucking boring.
>>17977055
The shortest great poem in the english language. Ezra pound, back the fuck off lil nigga.
>>17977315
Dactylic hexameter is too lengthy to do for an extended period of time and be successful. If you want to write elegiac poetry, do it in quatrains like Gray's elegy written in a churchyard. Not even joking.
>>17978201
Well whatever you would go with, you proved yourself an absolute pseud with this piece of ass piss poetry
>>17978398
Nigga please, kill yourself before your readers do
>>17980193
Your just biting the other poet.