/lit/ - Literature

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Thanks for the feedback and support. I'll see if I can tighten up the rhythm. Just as a quick tweak, would this be better:
>Lies a break between what we see
>With the lure of logic's treason;
To me at least, it adds more of a stress to the beginning of the line so it doesn't feel like too big of a gap.

Also, as some of you have correctly pointed out, the subject has been done before. While I understand the need for originality in what one writes about, I feel if one writes enough poetry, it is completely unavoidable to cover ground that previous poets had been on.

Thanks again for the input

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I never understood why Marx thought that once the proletariat had the means of production, that everything would be hunky dory. What made him think that there were not power hungry assholes within the proletariat that will immediately subvert the cause to satisfy their own ends?

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I dont know who this is, but I am willing to bet he has a few genocides to his name