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Anonymous Wed Oct 11 14:44:23 2017 No.10135182 [View]
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>>10133712
Too much shit going on

>>10134679
Good emulation, but I would simplify a few words to make it less pompous and flowery.

>>10129608
>recognizing the identity of their lunar guest
Rephrase
>“You commie bastards! This crater is ours! Were here first! Leave!!” Shouted Miller.
Too many exclamation points. And duh, he's yelling. Does it even matter who you identify as speaking with this line? I would omit everything after the quote.
>"Such behavior is unacceptable!"
Too stiff.
Pretty good otherwise.

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