/lit/ - Literature

>>21211441
Look man, as an aspiring author myself I can understand your desire to make a “gritty” and “true to life” storybook type thing.
But here’s the thing: your plot is ,quite frankly, unrealistic. A rando Austrian soldier bumbling his way up to the highest ranks of German power? Really? You expect me to believe that? No. It’s nonsensical. Please stick to marvel tripe if you’re gonna write these kinds of super hero plots.
Then there’s the whole antihero arc u got going on. Turning on the Jews? Rebuilding the country only to plunge it into a ruinous war with, checks notes the whole planet? Unrealistic for the kind of setting u started with!

Also liked how u fit ur weeb fetish by having him team up with der honorabru Japanese.

Nonsense. Utter nonsense. Do better.

ITT: Pseuds who haven't read a single Sutra debating Buddha's teachings with each other based on wikipedia articles.

>>15839508
I'm spending my time reading the book instead of screwing around here so much, man. I am going to go take a piss and make a pot of coffee now...

>>15317717
>You really think they want to use fucking Isaiah?
yes, nigger
> The book that literaly proclaims a messiah and then has all its prophecies comfirmed and fulfilled by Jesus?
Retard Alert

>>15300238
>can't be logically deduced
you didn't start with the greeks, did you?