/lit/ - Literature

I'm looking for feedback on a dust jacket for a space opera short story that I'm just waiting on cover art to be finished for before I release it. How's this sound?

>Radio transmissions from Earth have awoken a cosmic being that was formerly a black hole for all intents and purposes. These transmissions are 1,500 years out of date, giving this entity time to gain a sense of self and to gain knowledge of Humanity. But one day the broadcasts go dark. Out of curiosity, the entity journeys towards Earth with the intent of greeting the Humans that brought it to life and to see why the signals have stopped.

Apologies if this should have gone in another thread. I normally visit /tg/'s writethreads but they're super dead as of late.