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Anonymous Mon Aug 24 13:46:19 2020 No.16206105 [View]
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I wrote ONE MORE, and I hope you like it. Please critique! It is called: The Sorry Shark.

>Floating through the Ocean
>Come an aquatic friend
>He wants to say he's sorry
>The Great White Beast, the Scourge of Seas
>Would like to make amends

>He wants to say he's sorry
>For all the tears he wrought
>For all the surfers eaten
>For all the pain he brought

>He doesn't want to bite you
>He just wants to reconcile
>Just come a little closer
>And check out his wide SMILE

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