/lit/ - Literature

That other anon wrote this on their first attempt
>>20659756
Not perfect, not good, but decent.
I could see him making something like Disco Elysium after say 5 years of proper progress. Not a copy but on that level.
I, instead wrote this on my first attempt >>20679312
I'll be critical and impartial, I would never expect this person to be good, maybe after 90 years of practice, but I am 22, and therefore, I doubt I'll make it to that age, I don't expect to reach 23 or 24 actually.

>>20679442
>>20679441
Read the above and tell me what you think.

>>20679036
YES, FUCKER.
WHY AM I SO BAD? SO HOPELESS AT THE CRAFT, I WANT TO TO BE AN ARTIST.
INNER NARCISSISM, YOU HAVE TO BE DELUDED TO THINK SOMEONE SHOULD CARE ABOUT YOUR EGREGORES.
SHOULD REFLECT TOO
EMPTY SOULLESS PERSON SHAPED ROBOT
SHOULD HAVE NEVER BOTHERED TO THINK IN THE FIRST PLACE, I WANT TO KILL MYSELF SO FUCKING BAD.

THINKING ABOUT A REVOLVER
ON THE TABLE KEEPS ME HUMBLE AND HONEST
WHEN THE PACE PICKS UP JUST THINKING ABOUT RUSHING AND UNLOAD IT INTO MY FUCKING BRAIN HELPS ME, BACK TO NOTHING, FOREVER, PEACE FROM EGO.