/lit/ - Literature

>>20046160
Pretty nicely composed. I liked this a lot. It's much, much easier to write this kind of challenge from a narrative perspective. I write much more dialogue-heavy and it's a habit I'm struggling to break, but what's life if not people talking to each other? But writing lets you see into people's minds much more than a film or a comic does, so I need to adapt. Anyways. I liked yours. Here's my get at the same.