/lit/ - Literature

Is this a good way to explain the area depicted in pic related
>The night came lit by a crescent moon and he began closing on the nearest hideout at the bottom of the hill.
>The three were snoring softly when he cut their throats one by one covering each one's mouth so as not to wake the other. He grabbed a quiver and bow from them before crouching over to the campsite adjacent to the feast's dining table and opposite the last campfire.

Please be patient, I have autism