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Anonymous Mon Nov 8 07:17:04 2021 No.19364143 [View]
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I'm worried my book feels too YA. I want it to be heavy, dark, and gruesome, but I'm unable to have that tone right at the start.

I would love it to feel like this sounds:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eaMbKZPBruU&t=2794s&ab_channel=redrum

I'm halfway through writing my second chapter, do I just continue and try and correct the tone as I go? Also, does anyone have any tips for writing something that's very dark, occult and gruesome? Or even how to steer away from a YA style?

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