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Anonymous Sat May 6 22:30:19 2017 No.9474245 [View]
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Sci-fi novella I gave up on writing about six months ago because I could never get the very beginning to work.

I don't like the language employed and probably won't finish it but any criticism would be appreciated. Would post more than the prologue except again, I feel the whole beginning sucks.

The proposed cover art doesn't though, so I scanned it in.

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