/lit/ - Literature

>>10394627
>>10394601
>>10394616
i dunno, i'm 19 trying to decide what to invest my energy in long-term...

i come up with neat scenes often though, i guess... i don't want to embarrass myself trying to write it formally so i'll give it to you the best way i know how
>me and my dumbass brother kidnapped some rich guy's 15yo son
>we set up the exchange, simple trade: kid for his money
>kid's face has been all over town, can't risk putting him in the car so we pack him in the trunk
>we get to the exchange point, a desolate field with a river separating us and the father
>i see the father, he has a red duffle bag
>"go do it" i tell my brother
>he gets out and makes his way to the trunk
>it's taking longer than expected for him to be walking over with the boy; what's going on?
>my brother finally comes around, he's nervously shaking while dragging the lifeless body of the boy
>the kid has foam at his mouth, bloodshot eyes, must have died a few minutes ago
>"what the fuck..." i say
>oh fuck, his inhaler, this kid has, or had, insane asthma, we must have packed him without it
>father is on his knees, hands on his head... he knows his son is gone
>my brother is having a mental breakdown himself, all he wants to do is get the boy back to his dad
>"okay my friend, off you go back to your dad now"
>he chucks the boy's body into the river, and away he floats
>"GET THE FUCK IN THE CAR, RIGHT NOW, YOU DUMB FUCK" i scream
ect.

should i start writing?