/lit/ - Literature

>thinking about referencing one song I think is romantic hopefully so the musically inclined may recall it and sing it in their head
>look up where else it has appeared in pop culture since radio stations dont really count
>ever since the 90s it has only been in comedies, usually ironically
Damn I wonder how the average reader would react because I don't intend on it being funny.

>>19420025
No I don't worry about that. Iron sharpens iron and talking with other writers is helpful. You can listen to other writers but still champion your own perspective and style. Rightfully divide good advice from mere style.

>writing rough draft on section that involves a character learning how to split loci of her consciousness between multiple beings and operate them simultaneously
I can already tell editing this for clarity is going to be confusing as hell. I think I might use similes to describe it, I guess the closest thing is virtual reality and being able to control both the virtual character and still walk around in the real world. Once you do that with over 2 minds in parallel I don't really know how to describe it. My best guess is that it feels like growing more arms, becoming more coordinated, and controlling multiple VR simulations while still operating your own self.