/lit/ - Literature

>>22186932
>That connective tissue part feels a bit forced though
Yeah I can't help you with that because I'm suffering from it myself. Though I can probably tell you that you can go ahead and use actual action/timeskips if you're struggling and nobody will notice, provided you don't abuse it.

Try some slice of life? Some (mostly) meaningless worldbuilding? If you're out of ideas but the story has to flow, you might as well fill it with something people might enjoy, just don't overdo it. Trim the fat if needed.

>>10528662
fuckin pleb
>>10528645
is this bait? seems like it would be too edited
>>10528339
thx for recc
>>10527962
what about >>10528649 's criticism?
>>10527955
i mean, he sucks on a lot of things, but i like the bible interpretations when he doesnt go off on a tirade. at least to me, it seems like he's pretty well thought out the points in the stories, but i could be wrong?
>>10527953
>not a teen, do hate blacks gays n jews tho
>>10527946
let me guess now.. kjv? ive literally never seen anything about it really desu before today

>Our culture, like many others, has few scruples about ruining or ending a man's life to make a symbolic point.