/lit/ - Literature

>>10127771

2/2

again, offering crit for crit

>$28k in debt from BA in poli sci and philosophy
>$7k in debt from MA in poli sci
>just graduated
>just moved in with grandparents in Toronto
>rent-free, cost-free
>now what.jpg
>applying for gov't jobs, public sector shit
>writing short stories, editing my thesis to self-publish as a nonfiction book
>about to turn 23
>having quarter life crisis
>might try to freelance as a "digital marketer" /content creator
>or should I opt for something more stable so I can write those novels I've always wanted to write in my off time
>options.jpg

>>10111669

2/2

This is a scene that follows a couple pages later.

I want to make sure my dialogue is adequately believable.