/lit/ - Literature

Sup kings... as some of you already know, I’ve been writing my first book in the trilogy I’m making. It’s called Kid Demiurge, and it’s a cross between Persian classical epics and a modern spy novel, set around the tale of a mysterious singer who headlines an illegal rave in modern-day Tehran. Since I love you autists, I’m sharing the first quarter of the book with you. Feedback would be appreciated, I’ve never written a novel before

https://www.docdroid.net/7jhsIhG/kdmocknovelwmaps-pdf