/lit/ - Literature

>>21657558
>>21657583
Overwritten tosh with incredibly poor descriptive character. Especially the bay scene - where is the description of the sky? The colour of the waves? Even the description of the principal character's mood is underdeveloped. "Vague misery" isn't enough.
Here's some real writing, on the subject of the coast, so you can compare:

"But that day, as I sat on the tranquil shore, it was possible to believe one was gazing into eternity. The veils of mist that drifted inland that morning had cleared, the vault of the sky was empty and blue, not the slightest breeze was stirring, the trees looked painted, and not a single bird flew across the velvet-brown water. It was as if the world was under a bell jar, until great cumulus clouds brewed up out of the west casting a grey shadow upon the earth."

>>21207641
Fucking moron. What on God's earth is a "lonely cloud"?

>tfw the girl working the cashier at the local bookstore is impressed by my purchase

>>16783636
So... no Morrissey for u

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>>16772992
Picture