/lit/ - Literature

Guys, help.
Like I know my setting alone can carry a lot but it's not enough, I need to be good.
>>20879366
Fuck off.

>>20786525
Both Planescape and Disco Elysium are extremely similar in their approach to dialogue, now is far more grand in scale but Elysium is extremely personal, Harry as a character and his skills. It's unique and very interactive, very complete and attempts to be literary in structure.
Disco Elysium is shit compared to the greats of literature, but as a videogame it's top 3. It has a massive personality in the way you see the world as Harry.

Hotline Miami has great writing and a part of me knows that I shouldn't be looking into Elysium and rather here. I've played and loved both Furi and E.Y.E and frankly, as a story, they're similar to what I'm trying to make. Complete coincidence too, never considered until now.

I'm trying to make a game based on a movie I'd love to do, but I am not trying to be a complete moviegame, it's about being a complete seizure, attack the screen.
But I need strong characters, very personal stakes.

>>20785239
Have you read the two bullshit posts I wrote here? The first one got me laughed at and now this, I am getting ready for my suicide attempt. There's no use, I don't have talent.

>>20683181
Thanks for the advice, so what do you think makes good writing on a videogame?
Maybe I'm limiting myself by wanting to be literary when I can't do it.