/lit/ - Literature

>>21532621

It is an outline which exists.

Now, your mileage may vary based on genre, story telling convention and so-forth, but what you've outlined here sounds like a succession of stories rather than one coherent story told well. It feels like you're bursting with ideas but the ideas aren't related to eachother, they are just chronological points on a line you've drawn.

Try to plot out, predict even, for instance, how many words it will take you to share the story of
>A story about man who got fed up with world and just started pursuing what he really wanted (arc 0)
and how that dove tails in to
>he became an AI researcher who created advanced AI, it was a long and difficult process with lots of struggle(arc 1)

Those aren't chapter sized concepts. They're circus tents for you to put the story inside of. This outline however lacks clowns and elephants and clowcars and pretentious men in velvet jackets to populate the circus tent.

Also, this entire paragraph is baffling
>There are several themes, one of them is human struggle, and betrayal, plenty of people in time of great danger show huge potential and sacrifice for greater good while many others try to capitalise on it, manipulate the heroes to save themselves (after making deal with MC), of course they are being used, they help mc to destroy the leaders and the heroes and instead of promised rewards they get death. One example, some courageous men become pillars of it humanity but then some strategically placed roasties turn them into dumb unthinking coomers and trick them into white knighting that way destroying any chance of survival.

it reads like an AI-generated writing snippet that someone interceded in to seed with 4chan aphorisms so that the lingo would dupe a casual inspector. If this is how your prose reads, you're going to have a bad fucking time buddy.

Imagine getting filtered by the Greeks lol they used to teach Plato to children