/lit/ - Literature

>>22186521
Well then anon.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/777497/beasts-of-the-woods/
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/780977/dog-fighting/

First one is the first serious short story I ever wrote, second is something I'm working on right now and I'm thinking it'll have a chapter more and maybe epilogue at most.

I'd legitimately appreciate some ideas how to improve my writing. I've been told the start of the first story is kind of slow, and I have to admit the story itself is slow, but it's meant to work towards the punchline.
The second story is basically me doing the opposite of what I did in my first one.

Feel free to shit on both of them but at least help me get gud. ESL by the way so don't be surprised if you find the wording wonky or structure weird at times.