/lit/ - Literature

Guys, I've done it! I've completed the first draft for the story I got suggested by an anon from /wg/. It's come around 20 pages; after some trimming there might be less, I don't know. I do need to edit it before I share it through here. I made it specifically to have it criticized by you guys, so I hope at least some of you will enjoy it. What's the best way to get it across here, Paste Bin?

>>18704621
Thank you, fren
>>18704624
I do. It never hurts to be cautiously optimistic.

Animals Edition

In this general we write the book to a new language called 'Frennish.'
ITT post a picture of an animal and come up with a new word for it.

ITT We create a new /lit/ language called 'Frennish'

>>17417454
It's called 'Please Kill Me' it's got a lot of really cool photos in it. I also suggest checking out 'Trouble Boys' which is a book about the Replacement which is really really good.

>>17417472
>>17417476
>>17417524
>>17417673
>>17417689
Thanks frens!

>>17417676
That's okay buddy, I forgive you :)

>>17417592
I'm sorry fren, this story reminds me of when we celebrated our friend's birthday out at a cabin and we forgot candles, so we used matches for her to blow out.

>>17417514
Thanks fren! I've done some projects, built a few lean-tos and over the initial quarantine I made myself a dugout canoe. This is actually the first book I've ever bought on the subject, I've been mostly just learning as I go previously, but I would definitely suggest this book. >>17417433

>>17417543
Why do you feel this way fren?

I'm not drunk enough for this yet

>>17077099
>reading
Leaves of Grass
Catcher in the Rye
>writing
Poetry every night
>watching
It's a Wonderful Life tonight with the family
>playing
Moody jazz records
>thinking
I'm gonna read a poem a wrote to girl to her, I don't care if she hates it or hates me for it, I'm still gonna do it because what's the worst that could happen?
>doing for the holidays
Gonna visit some friends, not much other than that.

>>17036862
>>Your age
19
>>Your favorite book
Leaves of Grass
>>How often you drink
once or twice a week
>>Do you drink alone?
no
>>The last time you drank, and what you drank
I had a couple pints of guinness the other night

>>16959990
>readan
Poetry of Vachel Lindsay

>drinkan
Guinness

>thinkan
wanna be pen pals with somebody
kinda wishin this board wasn't so hostile towards jews all the time, I know I shouldn't care, but it feels a bit much sometimes

>feelan
pretty great and free

>doing
reorganizing my bookshelf

>>16938253
Good man

>>16896585
Don't worry, fren. We're all brainlets here. As long as you persevere and double check things you don't understand you're golden. Don't be a useless cunt and leave a 1-star review like KAREN.

>>16850449
>>16850466
ty frens