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>> No.16857642 [View]
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>send a chapter to one proofreader
>he says you overdescribe things and should write more directly so things can be faster and easier to read

>send a chapter to another proofreader
>he says you need more details and descriptions so readers can understand how characters feel instead of reading it like a movie

What do I do from here?

>> No.16828093 [View]
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>5 AM
>wrote 1403 words today
>want to keep writing because you have so much fun but you really should go to sleep
What do I do?

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