/lit/ - Literature

My very pregnant creative writing professor was super pissed she had to read my short story. Like, full on screaming at me during my review time asking me why I wrote what I wrote and that it was the most digusting and vile shit she ever read in her life. She was so offended, so angry, that she spent 5-10 mins doing it.

I don't even remember how long or what the exact comments were because I was absolutely frozen getting stared down by 20+ classmates. Also, students were supposed to review my story and hand me back their comments on it. She skipped all of it so I never got any real feedback that wasn't from her. This is where you guys come in.

The first 1/4 is cringe, but I think the last 1/2 is at least somewhat entertaining. It's titled "Saudade":

https://saudade.glitch.me