/lit/ - Literature

>>14644018
based nietzsche
>>14644058
good explanation

Three boys ran along black rock beaches in search of treasures tidepools harbored. Skipping stones and sea urchins were their fancy, the holy grail a sea-star; until they stumbled upon a great wooden trunk. Rusty chains locked it tight, it couldn't have been disturbed in the last three hundred years. Bashing it with spades, they eventually broke its bonds; within was something more valuable than gold. A modest prize for each of them: A brass spyglass, a silver pocket watch, and a steel dagger. The boys leapt with joy, embracing their riches with glee, chanting, A pirates life for me!

>>10149690
Type 70 underscores at the top of the page, and write utill you get to the end of the underscores, until you get to the end.
>t. made text based games before.

>>10149910
The last two lines are not two independent clauses, and don't need a semicolon. Otherwise bretty good.

>>10149972
Ew. Also it just sounds like you're trying to be a Skyrim fanfic writer.

>>10151172
"Two if you counted God" isn't a independent clause, use a coma instead. Otherwise pretty okay. >>10151198 also a little this.