/lit/ - Literature

This is a story I'm writing which ideally needs to be under 1000 words. I'm trying something slightly different this time, attempting to construct a plot-driven story instead of using the story as a vehicle for a political/literary idea.

It's unedited, lots of mistakes, and it's a fragment. I wanted to write more but for whatever reason I procrastinated during the whole day and I only wrote the 530 words in this pastebin. I should be able to reduce it to 400 I think.

https://pastebin.com/UgYBm7sx