/lit/ - Literature

/sffg/ give me your thoughts on this

>lovecraftian vampire novel
>actual vampires aren't smart or sexy, but horrific zombies infested with swarms of parasitic mosquitos
>the villain is a self-proclaimed "necromancer" who has found a way to herd them with technology, and is trying to take control of the eldritch abomination that created them in order to fill out his army

Also, who would make a better abomination? Chupacabra or Camazotz

so /sffg/ I've finally decided to take your advice and scaled down my story. I'm not ready for something big yet. Not when I've had to struggle so hard against something small

problem is, now my next story is basically just the first one recycled
>kid goes off to learn magic after their mom dies, strung along and manipulated by their magical bastard of a father who they never knew growing up all the while being in complete denial that anything magical is going on even as they're using magic themselves

the worst part is, the hero and sidekick are literally the exact same characters across both stories, the only difference being that their roles are swapped

not sure what I'm supposed to do now...


>>10482818
with that pic? Kingdom of the Crescent Moon

As an aztec god who resembles a vampire bat, does Camazotz count as lovecraftian?