/lit/ - Literature

Has anyone read any erotica? If so can you tell me how what I have written compares to it. It is just the opening. Her friend is a big slut and will later take her out to buy a slutty dress and then they meet a guy. With the sluts guidance she also becomes a slut and the story will end with her total transformation into a fat slut, but also one of the guys she fucks is super hot and rich and loves her and takes her away somewhere to live forever and ever happily ever after because she's so special even though she's actually shit.