/lit/ - Literature

Hey! It's me. (>>19400183) (>>19400293)
So, I didn't finish an entire chapter, in fact, I've wrote very little, but whatever, at least I wrote.
I tried to implement the other anon's idea, but it doesn't seem to have worked, but I wrote about a write though. Thanks to him anyway.
English is not my first language so I used google translate on most of the text (except for some grammatical errors of the translation).

Please critique! You can call me out if you notice grammatical errors too.

https://litter.catbox.moe/krr62g.pdf