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Anonymous Mon Oct 9 16:27:17 2017 No.10127771 [View]
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posted this in the last thread but didn't get much attention

>excerpt from short story
>they're industrial painters who've just won a scam sweepstakes for a minority share in a local casino chain
>they're naive
>central flashback revolves around one of their weddings (where this scene takes place)

Submitting this for publication later this week
Will do crit for crit

>>	Anonymous Thu Oct 5 17:07:43 2017 No.10111669 [View] File: 80 KB, 782x840, TERMINAL2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is this scene any good? Part of a short story I'm submitting tomorrow to a local journal. They're at a wedding. I'll trade crit for crit.

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