/lit/ - Literature

>>20041688
Some places have info dumping, and the3se are getting edited out because I want to make sure the plot is being driven without ruining the retro futuristic 80's feel I want. Otherwise, it generally doesn't bother them too much, the dialogue is where much of the story comes in, I guess.

>I suggest just cutting off ties with the group if he's anything like the dude I knew. Is he old or just seems like a batshit late twenty something?

He's like 42 and has three kids. Classic liberal dipshit. Problem with this cunt is that he LOVES to dominate and take over everything because he is clearly the smartest among us, even to the point where he starts interrupting and talking over the leader at board meetings, and I have to actually be the only one with a set of balls and put him back in his place and remind him not to interrupt a person when speaking.

>Just find lit buds via other writing groups.

I wish I could find a more lit writing group. There's like five guys in the group that are decent and have funny stories that end up trolling a lot of the SJW cunts. Problem is my city is pretty liberal (most of the population thinks our homeless problem can be solved by giving them free money and letting them stay in tents in parking lots, or in unused apartments, and that homeless are just down on their luck and would never steal or hurt them in any way).

I think What I really want is another format. The whole read and get barked at is annoying and frankly, tiresome. I'd rather drop my work for submission and have twenty people eviscerate it over a discord channel and DM me their responses and comments, or something like that. I don't get anything like that. Hell, I'm lucky if I get two DMs a week on the groups Discord channel for my work. Everybody says their piece and forgets it.