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>>17251481
Short and cliche.

>>17253293
This is the worst of the 4 by far. all those and's--I barely have the desire to read past the first couple of lines, and when I forced myself i saw it was a worse version of the sophomoric "xd time" poem everyone has read 1000x times.

>>17251465
abbccdd rhyme scheme ruins anything that might have been going on, so not much.

>>17251451
cute and by far the least offensive of the 4. could be built into something bigger, if you wanted.

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>>12360243
last one

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Poetry thread. Post poems you like, poems you don't like, and/or poems you've written. Others read, comment, and critique.

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